SS:Gopi manages to fix Kinjal's wedding with Elesh

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I'AM CONTINUING THIS THREAD OF sam1903 AS IT INCOMPLETE AND ORIGINALTHREAD ITSELF IS CLOSED


CHAPTER ONE

Mehta's already knew Kinjal is pregnant, after bashing Modi's very hard, they left MM.

--~Another big drama waiting In MM~--

After Mehta's left MM. all are in state of shock.. Everyone is like spell bound..

This is the first time MOdi Family got humiliated.. Just then, Kokila got fainted and every one runs towards her. Rashi and her mother having gala time . Both in rashi's room, this time again they let down Kokila and her sanskaari daughter too..

Everyone's in Kokila's room.. Trying to bring back her into consciousness.

Kinjal is crying badly and standing on Kokila's door, as she left with no courage to face anyone in family.

She goes into her room and starts calling Umang. But as usual he was not picking the phone. So she just text him all the situation'

On the other hand Kokila regains consciousness. And Hetal ask her how she is feeling, Kokila replies to her .. what a mother feels like when she have a daughter like Kinjal. Everyone else left with nothing to say situation

All were sitting in the room wondering what to do in such situation, there is now sheer silence in room no one has courage even to utter a word.. Everybody could just hope in their hearts it just to be a bad dream and which will be over soon. By now all the guest have left the house. Mani enters room and tells them there is a guy who has came to meet all of you.

Chirag ask her, Who is he?

Mani replies he didn't tell his name, just asked me to inform all family members that he is there to meet them, Since everyone is in bad mood and after hearing that some stranger comes to meet them , become more suspicious and hoping that it's not any further bad news, Especially after what all happened.

Everyone comes downstairs and saw that one man is sitting on the sofa

, which is facing backwards to stairs, his both arms were wide open resting on the back of sofa..

All were wondering who is he? To meet all Modi Family..

They move downstairs and one by one come face to face with the stranger..

The only one who can recognize that stranger is Gopi and Aham

When Aham sees him he soon recognized him as Umang..

(Gopi has seen Umang earlier when he came to meet Kinjal in the house)

Everyone is shocked to know that the father of Kinjal's child has come to meet them,

And there is again a pin drop silence in Modi house.

Aham takes his name so loudly that it is quite audible in Kinjal's room and obviously Rashi's room.

So, all of them Kinjal Rashi and Urmilla also join others in drawing room.

When Kinjal enters drawing room she was crying badly, and with some hope was about to run near him and want to hug him, because what has happened to her all because of him and she has done all things for him and after so many questioning and hatred eyes around her for so long, she really needs someone who can sympathize with her and understand why she has done all this ..

But all of sudden she realize everyone presence over there she stopped herself.

After seeing Kinjal, Umang has little stern smile on his face. which made Kinjal more uncomfortable.

He get up from sofa and put his hand in his pocket(just like typical villain )

and moves towards Aham Modi.

So, you are uncle of my unborn child Mr. Aham Modi. Mamaji'right, this relation you will share with my unborn child.

With his stern smile he again asked Aham how are you feeling that your sister who is unmarried and also engaged to some one but carrying child of someone else.. Mamaji..

Proud enough being a Mama of an Unborn child..

Kinjal is shocked to hear all these sarcastic remarks from Umang's mouth..

And everyone else was just shocked and unpleasantly surprised why the hell this man is talking with aham like this'?

Aham who after hearing later statement from Umang's mouth could not stop his anger and shouts at him by calling his name'

Everyone is stunned to hear Aham's voice at such a high pitch

Kinjal then break her silence.. and come near to Umang .. and asked him why he is behaving in such a strange manner.. and start crying and when tears were rolling down her cheeks..

She asked him he is here to accept her as his wife and for no other reason..

All the things which they have done are because they love each other and want to with each other'

And just like a small child she asks Umang two three times will you be there for me naa'

Speak up' Speak up' speak up.. umang'.

Just then Umang speaks holding her face in his hands, seeing into her eyes , while Kinjal still sobbing ' Yes, baby I am just there for you, and to tell the truth to everyone

Hearing this Kinjal has some smile on her face.. a moment of relax and of hope that everything will be alright now and also her Umang is still with him..

But the next moment it's a moment when she could hear the voice of shattering dreams.

After saying above lines Umang after a pause speaks up.. I am here just to destroy all your dream which you see as your bright future..

Then he moved towards Aham and says to him just like you had shattered my dear sister's Anita's dream.

Everyone was shocked and surprised who is Anita? Apart from those who already knew Aham's past

But no one is aware of Umang's and Anita's relation so they are also shocked.

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CHAPTER TWO

Umang was just feeling amazing and satisfied after seeing everyone reaction.. he then said to aham now you will realize my pain when you will see your sister in suffering and also your family, for whom you have married this uneducated girl Gopi.

Then he turns towards Kinjal for the last time tell her, you stupid girl how can you think I can marry the girl whose brother is responsible for my sister's unhappiness..

But I want to thankyou for one thing that you helped me in achieving most precious dream of my life. To ruin your's brother and your family image..

After that umang leaves MM though his stay was not long and he even didn't speak much… but his little stay has created havoc in life of Modi's

Kinjal by the time all shatter sits on the floor and start crying very hard…

Every one in state of shock , are waiting if there is something still need to happen..

Just then Dhaval, who is also present there speaks up, if Kinjal don't mind and if all of you agree I am ready to marry Kinjal..

One more jhatka, but is this shock blessing in disguise.. or what

Before any one can say anything Kinjal who is crying uptil now and in her own world of destruction and shattered dreams, hearing this get startle first, she can't even think of marrying this man in her rarest of dream.

Just then Aham who is back to his senses uptil now, speaks first how can you marry my sister, you are not evenworth of her.

At this Kokila shouts on aham how can you say this to Dhaval, when your sister is left with no reputation to marry any decent guy in this world.

Dhaval words will always be blessing in disguise for any mother in such situation.

Before anyone could speak up anything, Kinjal stand up and go to her mother and start pleading to her mother No Maa I can't marry this man.

Listening this, kokila hold kinjal arms very tightly and with anger on her face asks Kinjal then who will gonna marry a woman like you who is going to be unmarried mother.

Kinjal now looking directly into her mother's eyes and after realizing something blurt out the truth that she is not pregnant, but this is all a fake pregnancy which she has planned with Umang, so that she can let her get married to umang instead of Elesh..

(ZORR Ka Jhatka Haye Zorro se laga…)

She was lying because she was in love and her love only ruined her whole life..

Oh God this day was full of miseries and Black Day in the history of Modi house .

This time Chirag speaks up, he shouts at top of his voice – Enough is enough and now no one will utter a single word.

He goes to Dhaval, and thanks for this gesture especially when everything was going against them, but politely he say to Dhaval that this is not right time for us to think about Kinjal's marriage, when we all are unable to realize what is going wrong with us or what will be right for us.

He then goes to Urmilla and asked her politely, Vivanji, we are sorry you need to see all this unpleasant circumstances because of our family, but you remained there for us, but right now no one of us in the condition to be hospitable to you, and folded his hand in front of her.

Realising what he want to say she also folded her hands and left MM with Dhaval, but was very angry on Dhaval for his action.

Meanwhile, Chirag ask everyone to go to their respective rooms and especially asked Gopi to take care of Kinjal and hetal to take care of Kokila.

Gopi takes Kinjal to her room , right now gopi can't feel anything only thing which she can feel is unhappiness of family, she comforts kinjal and make her sit on bed. She arranges her bad carefully and asks her to rest and came out from the room while closing the door.

Every one already retired to their respective rooms. Chirag is with Baa, as she was feeling very low.

It's already 8 p.m. now, Gopi went to kitchen as she knows no one has eaten anything since morning, Mani was there too, but what all has happened in the house today does not give her senses what to do now,

One more person is there and it was none other than Rashi, who has enjoyed all the scenario, Today is the day of her triumph. Day to celebrate her success, so she came to kitchen to look out for some cookies, and to find out if something else is there to eat, after all this drama she want to eat something interesting by which she can enjoy her success.

After searching when she find nothing that could suit her taste for today, she start munching cookies over there , Mani who was standing there is not liking all this but cannot utter a word.

Gopi then entered the kitchen, seeing Rashi like this she was shock first, but she too don't have any confidence to say anything to her

Gopi looks at Mani and tell her Mani bhen we need to prepare dinner for everyone, as it already been so late we need to be quick, Mani agreeing with ther and is about to ask what we need to make bhabhi, Rashi intervene and start commenting who will going to eat dinner after so much drama, why you are wasting your time, but still if you guys making some dinner then make something good. As I am feeling very hungry, and also, why would I suffer because of other's mistake, I need something good.

Gopi didn't like this attitude of Rashi and with complaining eyes, look at Rashi and ask her Rashi Ben how can you say like this, Rashi replied to this oh common Gopi, stop behaving like emotional fools.

At this Gopi look towards Mani, and told Mani that we are making simple Daal Chawal and some roti, as this will be best for everyone and from her reaction its clear that she is not at all interested in what all Rashi's have to say..

Seeing Gopi's reaction Rashi was first stunned and left the kitchen.

Both Gopi and Mani prepared dinner with in some time.

After preparing dinner Mani questioned gopi, bhabhi we have prepared it but no one has come to dining hall, at this gopi said no, I am personally taking meal to every one room.

Gopi, first went to Baa's room , chirag was there too, so she has already taken his dinner too.

Seeing gopi with dinner Baa could not say anything.

Gopi goes near to Baa.

And very politely asks Jigar- devarji, we should have some dinner now, sensing what Gopi want to do now, he said in confirmation yes bhabhi even I am feeling hungry, but I will not eat anything as my baa will not gonna eat anything.

Then gopi with sweet little smile and with somewhat complaining voice, says to Baa- Baa that's true if you will not eat anything we will not gonna eat anything. At this gesture of Gopi, tears start rolling from her eyes.

Seeing her pain, gopi moves towards Baa and with so much confidence and determined look she says to Baa – Baa worst has happened to us now no more worst can happen to us only gud will happen to us, with this she cleared tears from baa's cheeks

These words were very soothing for Baa, and it really sounds magical to her, as if god has come to rescue her family in form of Gopi. At this she kiss on Gopi's forehead and says to her –you are my angel gopi vahu.

Jigar came near to baa and agreeing with gopi –yes bhabhi nothing worst will happen to us, only good will happen now.

Confirming gopi she will take her dinner Baa ask gopi please make sure no one in the house sleep empty stomach. At this gopi nods her in confirmation left the room.

After that she went to chirag and hetal room, atmosphere of the room was gloomy there too. But she did make sure that they had their dinner .

Its kokila and parag room, kokila was sitting on bed while resting her head on back wall. Though she is not crying, but she was in bad condition. Parag was caressing on her head. They were both sitting there since they have come to their room but could not utter a word, but still so much noise can be felt in that room as if their silence is speaking and as if they were mourning.

Atmosphere of room was miserable, when gopi opened their room, lights falls into the room, while gopi was standing at the edge of door , for some second it was almost like divine intervention in mourning house, as if god comes to console someone bad has happened to you now only good will happen to you.

Gopi entered room telling Parag-papa I have brought some food, please have some. But like obvious reaction parag denied it. Gopi at this said to him, papa Maji is not well and if you do not eat she will not eat too and as a husband you should make sure she takes something.

Parag realizing Kokila's condition, he took tray from gopi, and placed it on bed, and then he moved towards kokila he asked her to take some food, which she denied at first.

At this, Parag hold her hand , ask her if she don't take the food he will not even take the food too, and he is very hungry right now, to this she straighten her neck and open her eyes, she was about to say something while moving her face towards parag, before she could speak up, parag was already ready with the bite of food in his hand and with requesting eyes he says to kokila, please don't say no.

Though tears were rolling from her eyes, she cannot deny parag anymore; both of them had their dinner, while its time for gopi to go to Kinjal.

Kinjal was resting now, though she could not sleep, but she is feeling very low, and she left with no energy even to think anything, gopi's entered her room and asked her to get up and have some food. kinjal replied to her no bhabhi I don't want to eat. I should not have anything, and should die, because what I have done for my family this will be the best punishment for me. To this gopi replied, gud one kinjal bhen this is the way you can make your family members life more like a hell.

Kinjal was surprised to hear gopi's answer because she never saw gopi like this before. Gopi then switch on the lights of rooms and ask kinjal to get up, kinjal, cannot deny her anymore and sit up. Gopi sits in front of kinjal while resting dinner tray on bed. She took up one galss, it contains sweet lemon water, she took the glass near kinjal's mouth while saying, you have already tortured yourself so much, but not anymore , just drink this water and I don't want any negative reply from your side.

While speaking gopi has a commanding voice, which is very unlike gopi. Then she fed kinjal with dinner just like an elder sister. And in the end, she told kinjal that she is having headache and also feeling low does she have any medicine for that, she needs for herself. Kinjal took one box out from her side table and take out some medicine. To this she replied you take this kinjal bhen, as I know if I asked it for you, you have never taken it out, and since I don't know much about English medicine I can't give it to you, you take this medicine while offering water to her. Kinjal was amazed by gopi's gesture and want to curse herself for doing so wrong with gopi.

After feeding kinjal and make her sleep, Gopi come to kitchen and asked mani to have her dinner , Mani has already cleaned the kitchen in mean while

Mani says to gopi – bhabhi all the family members had their dinner except you and ahem bhai. To this gopi replies- I know mani, and then she askd her- mani bhen will you take dinner for him. Mani who is really scared of ahem, said to gopi - bhabhi I can take but I am really scared and I am not so sure if I will be able to convince him to have his dinner as I am even scared of requesting him, with this she also put one question in front of her bhabhi I can't do it, I think you will also not go to him. Then who will make him eat his dinner. To this gopi replied mani- I will. Then she pours milk in one glass and set the tray of ahem's dinner and also placed glass of milk in tray. To this mani questioned her again why glass of milk.. For this gopi reply Mani if he don't take dinner then atleast he can have milk.

Mani then says to gopi, bhabhi you love him so much and care for him so much, he is blessed to have you as his wife I am sure he will have his dinner and ask gopi to have her dinner after coming from ahem's room.

Gopi replying in agreement that she will have her dinner, but regarding towards mani's former line she don't have anything to say because, this time she is herself very scare, though Mani seems to be quite confident but Gopi's determination and confidence seems to be vanishing . But still as his wife , she need to make sure he don't sleep empty stomach.

Though Gopi was moving towards ahem's room but her heart was beating very fast, and fear was very much visible from her face.

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CHAPTER THREE

Gopi now at doorstep, with all dilemma in her mind should she be in.. or not'

She remembered how aham scolds her last time, thinking this she could feel the cold vibes entering her body, her hands almost tremble with fear . Her fear is now converted into her sadness, thinking how bad she felt on that day, she could actually picturesque her crying face which ultimately bring water in her eyes..

But then she realized this is not the right time to think all this, she thought to herself, are those vows which she has taken in front of every family member is important to her , or those which are pious which she has taken during her marriage, was Ahemji's scolding is important to her or the fact that no matter what, but he is still her husband, whom she should care at any cost.

(These conflicting views are only to make her courageous enough to enter Ahem's room.)

After muster up all her courage she knocked the door , but no reply came from inside. Ahem's room's door was closed but not locked, she slowly push the gate, and opened that much by which she will be able to get in.

Room was all dark, but as she already had been lived there before so can make out which thing is where. She carely put the food tray on table and moved towards switch board.

Ahem, was there in his room sitting on his bed, but could not sense until now if someone has entered into the room,

He was all in his Trans, thinking what all has happened to him, never in his life he has been through such kind of humiliation.

Words of Umang was keep banging in his ears, sometimes he feels, Is he so much wrong, if he has followed his mother's wish? Why gopi is there in his life? Why all this happened to his sister? Is he responsible for all this? Why her sister crossed her limits? Doesn't she thought about her family while doing all this? What went wrong? Who is right? . does his sister need to marry Dhaval for sake of family? All question were keep making round in his mind ever since he entered his room?

Gopi switched on the light, Flash of light when falls on Ahem's face he got startle and covered his face with back of his palm, he was in all dark since the time he has entered into his room, light hurts his eyes. Then slowly he removed his palm and looked at the direction of switch board to find out who's there?

To his surprise its Gopi, first he could not believe this , but at the second thought he need to realize she is there only.

Gopi who has already covered her face with pallu, infact stretched to the length so that Ahem could not see her face.

Though with scolding but with tiring voice he speaks up tum.(you)

Realizing this Ahem has already make out she is here , gopi speaks up, ji who main apke liye khana layi thi(ji, I have bring food for you.)

Ahem cannot believe this, that how this girl dares to enter his room and to top of that she brings dinner for him,

He wanted to shout at her, but feeling very low, he just got up (he even stands up as if he is very ill), and starts moving where Gopi was standing. Realizing he is coming near to her. She took three two three steps towards adjacent wall, but could not move any further as he was already there.

Tum mujhe akela kyon nahi chod deti(why don't you leave me alone), his voice was more like pleading but with little anger,

To this gopi speaks up ji who apne subah se kuch nahi khaya tha isliye (since you have not eaten anything since morning, that's why)

Before she could finish her sentence he interrupts, bas karo (stop it) this time his voice is full with anger

Gopi get startled to this, there is fear on her face now.

Mujhe tumahri sahanubhuti nahi chaiye(I don't need your sympathy)

Then he holds her arms very tightly and moved her to face him, he started again, waise bhi yeh sab tumahri wajah se hua hai nahi tum meri zindagi main aati aur yeh sab hota. Na main apne pyaar ko khota aur naa meri bhen ko yeh sab sehna padta'(btw this has happened all because of you, if you doesn't enter in my life then this will not happen to me, I didn't have to loose my love then and my sister don't need to suffer all this..)

He blurted out all this in one go'

Aur hain tumhe toh jana tha kinjal ki shaadi kay baad, who toh ab hone se rahi sab tumahri wajah se'. toh tum ab kya kar rahi ho yahan' yahan tumahri koi zaroorat nahi hai.. (any yes you were suppose to leave the house after Kinjal's marriage , but that will not happen now , all because of you' so what are you doing here now, you are no more needed overe here now )and he pushed her towards the door, she was almost about to fall, but manage to escape that' tears were rolling from her eyes, then again he yelled at her, jaao nikal jaao mere ghar se abhi ki abhi..(go go from my house right now.)

Gopi is shocked stunned after hearing all this, tears were rolling from her eyes, for a moment she thought of going from his life but second thought which come to her mind was faces of every members, she thought what will happen if she left he house right now?

She can make out the circumstances' which can be worst for family, then she remind the lined whe she said to kinjal by this you will gonna make life of family members like a hell.. she said to herself she can't leave the house right now..as it is not good for family,

This time she turns towards Ahem, and said him I know you think that i am responsible for all this.. but I will not leave this house right now.. because, others need me' whenever I will fulfill my duty I will leave this house'

After a pause she said to him if you take the food then it's good for you, if you still not feeling like please do take a glass of milk' as its not good for your health to sleep empty stomach'

With this she retired from the room..

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CHAPTER FOUR

After gopi's exit, ahem was little shocked to hear from Gopi that she will not leave this house, because until now she has never disagree with hin, or should I say replied him back. But since she was so polite and more like pleading it will be like disagreeing with him. Now he felt so relaxed because after Umang's incidence for first time he spoke his heart out, though he did not realized what he has all spoke up? And even don't want to bother that.. but he was so much relieved. Now, he look at the food which was there on table .. He can feel his hunger now.. and about to go near to table… but something stops him. How can he eat the food which Gopi has brought for him, why will he take her mercy? But next thought he is feeling very hungry now, then he saw the glass of milk, and remembers Gopi's last lines…where she asks him to have milk he almost forget his anger and went near to the table and hold the glass of milk…

But what he is doing taking Gopi's mercy.. no he can't , he can't take this milk even..

He left the glass there and moved towards to switch off the light and then moved towards bed to lie down, initially he has problem in sleeping because he was hungry but he is much relaxed now, though thoughts were still juggling in his mind but at last he went into deep sleep.

On other hand, gopi after coming from his room run towards her room, she just barged into her room and locked it, and facing herself towards the room she leaned herself to closed gate and started crying, while crying she sits on the floor and put her face into her palms..

Though she is calm now, but tears were still rolling from her eyes, she was recalling what he said her today and what has happened in today's day. One thing she is clear that her husband can't love her at any cost, reason being she is well aware now that he loved some else..(though this was just the anger of Ahem,he don't love Gopi but it's even not like that he wants anita in his life.. or if he is thinking of all this thing in near future..but yes questions were keep interrupting in his mind why all this happened to him)

She again started blaming herself for Ahem's misery, though for first time she has disagreed with ahem but she was determined to leave Ahem's house when condition will be alright… when it will be or how it will be .. she is unaware of it…

While thinking all this she went into sleep there itself while resting her head on her knees.

The long day has ultimately end…

Both of them had eaten nothing since morning,two pictures were set in the frame now, one where Ahem lying on his bed and othere where gopi sleeping on floor comforting herself on her knees, Both are in deep sleep. If gopi hasn't visited his room he would not be able to sleep so relaxed and if she is hungry so is her husband, though out of ego he has not touched the food..

Somewhere down the line, they are together with each other, sharing their thoughts, one in form of anger other in pleading way. But they are still complementing each other, though unaware of it.. What if some one else has entered into Ahem's room, he will not be relieved then as he can't shout on anyone just like he do on Gopi…

Night ends while witnessing all this and may be with a promise that new day will bring new hopes in your life…


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CHAPTER FIVE

The new day has come, wonderful morning, birds has already started chirping, sun is rising again'

Sound of humming birds has also fallen into her ears... which sound melodious to her, make happiness runs although her body, cool breeze which has travelled to her room from window, giving the calm and refreshing feeling. A smile spreads on her face, unknowingly why .. maybe she liked the way This morning has welcomed her and asking her to open her eyes as its time to touch me and feel me. As if this morning is saying to her I have bring new hopes in your life, and asking her don't you want to see it??.. after sensing this question she smiled back again and opened her eyes, she slowly moves towards the window, while seeing the rising sun she is feeling cooling breeze on her face, she sees the flying birds which calmed her eyes, now this is a time to fold hands in front of her mother nature, who has given her refreshing start after a hard day yesterday, and this mother to has make sure that her daughter, don't have a sign of misery left on her face when she is embracing her.

After completing her regular morning chores, she is now in front of her friend, the best friend, and scholar and to whom she talked about everything of her life. HE is her strength, he was there for her every time, and whenever she is sad he comes to her to listen her, even if she don't speak up, he understand her, and always make way in her life.. though life is still not a cake walk for her , but a bits of stones lying on her way, but with him she has already crossed a big way and for sure he will there for her whatever life has store for us.. Her best friend Kanhajj will never ditch her and she needs no surety for this.. she was moving diya thali in front of him, to express her gratitude , to let him know that he is very special for her, and no matters what she will never leave this and she knows that he will never leave her too..

After completing her worship she bowed her head and request to bring back happiness in the life of the people who lives in this house, whom she loves and adores with full sincerity and care.. Kanhaji must be feeling so special at this pint of time'because god also feel special when his devotee make him feel special in any form.., while her head is still bowed in front of her diety, she feel caressing hand on her head, as if kanhaji herself come to bless her..

Gopi Vahu, sada kush raho meri bacchi (remain always happy my daughter), Gopi turned towards very much familiar voice and greeted mother like figure to her with Jai shri Krishna,

Jai shri Krishna Gopi Vahu, You are the soul of this house Hetal says with happy and with motherly expression in her eyes.

She also bowed in front of Kanhaji.. No one has turned up today for morning prayers except Hetal and Gopi. Some people do not lose hope and few members in Modi family are like this only, whether its hetal, jigar or Gopi..

After offering their prayers, both of them get into the kitchen to prepare breakfast for everyone, Gopi prepared green tea for ahem, and requested Mani to go and give it to ahem. Mani seems to looking with questioning eyes to gopi, since she has entered the kitchen, but didn't utter a single word.. Agree to follows her order..

Ahem's room

Ahem still sitting on the bed, in relaxing position , his head was resting on the back of bed and his eyes were closed though he has already taken bath but didn't want to go office and even didn't went for walk today'

He did have a sound sleep, and a refreshing morning but soon yesterday's even turned up again in his mind' this time he was just thinking what will happen to his sister and he is worried about his mother too..

Mani after knocking the door has already entered the room since doors of room are opened..

After seeing Ahem's like this she feel sad and even scared but speak up' Ahem Bhai vo main apke liye chaai layi thi (Ahem bhai I have bring tea for you..). Ahem looked at her without any emotions just ask her with slow voice' Mani I am not feeling like to have anything so please take it away'a nd he returned to his original position.. Mani then saw dinner tray which was in same position as Gopi bhabhi arranged it' Food is still there in it.. even glass of milk was lying there untouched' Mani feels more sad.. Considering that both husband and wife didn't had dinner last night'and this question she wants to ask from Gopi also.. since the way she has left the kitchen was like that only when she entered into the kitchen this morning' even light was not switched off too which was unlike Gopi'

Its easy for Mani.. to make out what might happened last night' she took both trays and come out from Ahem's room to proceed towards kitchen..

Meanwhile rashi has gone to kitchen, only to relieve herself from any kind of duty'

She entered into the kitchen with the face as if she really sick, she told hetal because of last day incidence she could not sleep well, and had an headache' and asked hetal if she don't mind she want to leave for her mother's house, as this gloomy atmosphere will make her sick' hetal accepted this and let her go.. Though gopi was present there while Rashi was doing her drama.. but she didn't utter a word against her' as usual the way of gopi is'

Mani entered the kitchen with sad face and with two trays in her hand, Hetal is first one who has noticed that, she was surprised to see those trays, and start questioning mani, mani replied her all the answer that who has taken food for whom and all details' mean while gopi is all sad to know Ahem didn't had anything since yesterday, she is feeling terrible'

Hetal speaks up with motherly like gesture and with tensed face.. mere Ahem dhikhre nay kuch bhi nahi khaya kal se(my Ahem dhikhra had eaten nothing since yesterday.).

To this mani replies mota bhabhi even your daughter in law Gopi has not eaten anything since yesterday, who has made it sure that no one in this house sleep empty stomach..

Hetal eyes filled with tears after hearing this..And her face looking more sad now..

She came near to Gopi, who was first surprised to hear Mani's answer, but with sad face looking at Hetal Kaki as if she want to justify something in this court trial situation where she was standing like victim..

Hetal comes near to her and ask her politely, Gopi dhikhra.. why didn't you have your dinner and not even Ahem had his dinner.. she questioned again but this time not to Gopi, but from God,, what have u written in their destiny I don't understand' since hetal already knew, now last night situation and predicted that Ahem might have rejected to have food or might have scold her' which ultimately end with none of them having food..

She then politely and with motherly feeling while holding both her angelic face in her palms, asked to have her breakfast first without anything else.. to this Gopi politely says Hetal.. Kakikji who ahemji nay' before she completes her sentence.. hetal speaks up with assurance in her voice' don't worry dhikhra.. I will personally go and make him eat his breakfast' to this gopi also replied with the hope on her face' kakiji whenever Ahemji will have his breakfast.. after that I will take it too' Hetal knowing her love for Ahem, get agreed to this without forcing her much..

Hetal in Ahem's room with breakfast tray(third tray since night' ahem kay Nakhre ufff' and three different ladies trying to make him have his meal' so its hetal turn now')

Ahem was in same resting position'

Hetal comes and start messaging his head..with one head while carrying tray from other hand..(mother's always so passionate about their children'I always love this whenever my mom comes and wake me up something like this'love m mom for this.. )

Ahem's first reaction' he feel very relaxed then he turned up his head to see who is this' after seeing Hetal's face he first feel relaxed and then she her standing he politely asked her kaki come and sits while making place for her .. hetal sits on bed' while putting breakfast table on side' he asked Ahem why my dhikra had nothing since yesterday ' hmm may be angry from her kaki' that she didn't come to feed him' with this gesture Ahem.. who all sad.. Become more like kid' and hugged his kaki .. as if he his hugging his mother.. who kind of giving him a surety.. Everything will be alright'

While hetal from one hand messaging his head and from other hand patting his back' says him.. dhikra this is testing time.. we will soon overcome from this' to this Ahem replied her who is still hugging her' but kaki what will happen to Kinjal life now' to this she replied while releasing him from her arms'

Ahem dhikhra first you have your breakfast' while making him eat from her hands, she replied to him while h e was looking at her just like small obedient child, Ahem first of all, you should come out from all this, I want my Ahem's dhikhra back.. I cannot see you like this.. you rest today, but from tomorrow ownwards, you will back to your routine. Going for jog, having your green tea and going to office..he was still listening her with assuring eyes expression.. hetal continues, what worst has to happened has happened to us.. now we need to move on, nothing will go us in our favour if we keep mourinig.

After a long pause she continued.. do you know Gopi has feed everyone in the house last night, but she herself had nothing, though first he seemed unconcerned but after hearing later line.. she shows little bit of caring emotions and with very much invisible question in his eyes Why???

Hetal continues.. she even brought food for you.. even u had nothing and neither she' she is feeding ahem and keep continuing with her talks while he was just listening her.. Regarding Kinjal your kaka and me are thinking something.. at this Ahem has a great question mark on his face..

Chirag eneterd into Ahem's room, when hetal was about to answer his querry.

Chirag while eneterd into the room has already listen the last line..

He first greeted Ahem with Jai Shree krishna and ahem replied him back with same..

Even he has not gone to the office today. And questioned Ahem are u still feeling unwell? Ahem replied.. much better from before, Chirag told him with little sad emotions from tomorrow ownwards we need to get back to our work because of marriage preparations work piled up a lot. Ahem agreed to this while hetal ahs finished feeding him' hetal has made space for Chrag so that they continue discussing Kinjal matter. Chirag continue, though I know you don't like Dhawal much.. but I am thinking of him as Kinjal's prospective groom. Ahem was shicked to hear this..

Chirag continue calmly that don't worry we will take out all enquiry first then we will move further only if he is suitable for her.

Ahem got relaxed.. Chirag speak up again right now I need to go on for Bengaluru for business trip and you will be busy with handling business affair over here.. we will look into this matter after 3-4 days.. may be after my return.. Ahem's nod his hear in agreeing with him.. though confused but with relaxed mind..

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CHAPTER SIX

In the mean time Gopi took breakfast for Kinjal..

Kinjal had already wake up but still sitting in dark room..

Gopi comes into her room and first thing she do is to let the sunshine come in and opened the curtains of windows' though first Kinjal feel irritated as sun light hurts her eyes, because of sudden change from darkness to light. Afterwards she feel rejuvenate as soon as it spread all over her room..

Kinjal knows this that she can't denied gopi for breakfast so accepted to take the food, Gopi with very caring gesture feeding her.. as if she is her elder sister'

At the same time Kinjal feeling bad that she has done so much wrong to her bhabhi.

Meanwhile, Jigar joins the duo, he comes and sits near to Kinjal while asking her, how is my behna, feeling now, though first Kinjal feel bad as she has done so wrong with everyone , but Jigar bhai didn't speak up against her, instead asking her so politely, this make her more ashamed of herself , Jigar who easily make out from Kinjal's expression tried to make her feel comfortable.

He hugged her and consoled her, that everything will gonna be alright.

To this Kinjal replied that nothing will going to be alright with me now , as I have done blunder with my life and also with my family.. How stupid I was to fall in love with someone like Umang. I loved him so much, but'

Before she speaks up jigar speak up he don't deserve love of my sister, Kinjal looked him with confused expression , after a pause he speaks up, falling in love is not bad but crossing your limits is bad, and you have done this mistake, but that doesn't mean you are all wrong , hmm that's true we at times unable to judge people and especially when we are in love, .

He continues further, people like Umang who are of double standards do not deserves any one's love as they don't love anyone and are very mean, he want to take revenge from Ahem Bhai because Ahem Bhai's leave his sister as he wants to follow his mother's wish, and what he did in return humiliated you for sake of his sister. Then who is wrong here, the one who supported his family, or the one who took revenge from former only for the sake of his family, and to the limit of spoiling other's prestige, Umang is very mean and he don't deserves my sister's love, so you should not cry for him instead try to move forward in life.

Gopi was listening all this very carefully.

Kinjal, realized that she was so wrong in judging umang, and now feeling that she should not cry for him, she did not showed her pain of separating from Umang since yesterday incidence, but feeling terrible that he has ditched her, and how will she be surving with all this, but Jigar's POV does make her realize that she just fall in bad company, and should not be crying for him anymore. Slowly but she was trying to overcome from him, but still feeling bad for her family and wondering what will happen to her life.

Day passed peacefully , Hetal and Gopi, took care of the family well, and everyone trying to come out from their sorrow slowly, most who was hampered with this is Kokila, who just confined herself to her room. Though Ahem visited her room, and tried to console her, but himself become spellbound, when Kokila said him that I was so wrong in making decision for my own children, because none of them are happy with my decision, I am such a bad mother, more than there's I am Gopi Vahu's criminal whom I bring this house with so much hopes, but all her dreams got shattered because of my wrong decision. Life has already taught me that I cannot be right each and every time. To hear all this Ahem was really guilty as he felt somewhere down the line he is also responsible for his mother's present condition

Its night time, after finished with all work, Gopi went straight into Kinjal's room, something was striking in her mind, she went and sits near Kinjal , and with little awkwardness asked kinjal- Kinjal Bhen if you don't mind can I ask you some question, kinjal asked her what is the question bhabhi with all politeness in her voice. Though you have already said that you are not pregnant with Umang's child, but as your bhabhi I just want to know' actually I was asking that if u and Umangji ... Gopi was very shy when she was trying to put question in front of kinjal. Kinjal understands what she want to know though politely but with full confidence but with still some guilty in her voice.. she said her that she didn't crossed her limits ever,maybe her mother's teaching was always there in her mind, but still she unknowingly crossed her limits and created all those false reports.. Kinjal was all guilty while replying this'but after receiving satisfactory answer Gopi comforts her and went into her room, while thinking something'

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CHAPTER SEVEN

Though everyone has slept, but Gopi could not' as something was going in her mind'

She could not sleep whole night..

Its afternoon time, Gopi has done with all her work, she was looking for someone in the house, as she can only count on him for what she is thinking of, she was quite sure, if someone can help her in this is her devarji i.e. Jigar.

She saw him going towards baa room (jigar didn't go to the office as he wants to be with the family', right now)she stopped him , by addressing him devarji..

He stopped and turn back and asker his bhabhi- ji bhabhi..

Devarji I want to discuss with you something, jigar was looking at her with inquisitive question..

Gopi continue I want to share one of my thought with you' and you are the only one whom I can trust on, as u r the only one who can help me with my thought'

(Earlier also Jigar has helped Gopi in painting mandir.. so thinking of that Gopi thought to share with him only..)

That's ok bhabhi but what is there in your mind plzz do tell me'

To this Gopi replied , before replying she looked everywhere just to confirm no one is around after getting sured of this she continue..- devarji I thought a lot on your words..

Jigar got confuse with this reply of Gopi.

He questioned her which words Bhabhi.

Its about Umang ji. She replied back..

About umang.. He gives it a recall what he said about him and to whom.. Then he remembered his and kinjal talks.. This is only when he mentioned or said something about Umang..

Bhabhi are you talking about kinjal and my talk..

She nod her head in yes.

So what about that he questioned again..

Gopi who was not sure whatever she is thinking is right or not continues, devarji I was thinking about whatever u said and realized that whatever u said is all correct, therefore, he is not suitable for Kinjal bHen..

jigar could not make out what gopi has to say, and gopi who is already confused with her thoughts just trying to explain jigar everything..

Hmm bhabhi that I know he is not gud for kinjal, but what exactly you want to say..

This time gopi realized she should clearly explain jigar what is exactly in her mind..

Devarji as u already knew all family members are thinking dhawal bhai as suitable match for kinjal bhen now, hmm bhabhi he respond to Gopi's words.. and said further I think they are right seeing current situation..

To this gopi answered hmm for right now, but what will happened later when everything will be settled and people will forget this incidence, even though this situation is tough but someday we will surely get over from it.

I know right now Dhawal bhai is ok for Kinjal bhen, but even in this situation also she denied to get married with him.. then how she will be able to carry her relation when everything in her life will be normal.

This makes sense now, jigar thought, bhabhi but still do we have any other option he questioned Gopi. After all this, Kinjal don't left with any other option apart from accepting this proposal, moreover papa and Ahem bhai are also looking into this matter and will only come to conclusion after looking Dhaval Bhai where about'

And bhabhi he is also your cousin, so infact he's a better option in my opinion.

To this Gopi reply, I know he is my brother and he is good too.. but I also know how Kinjal bhen has been brought up , and Dhwal bhai cannot do all this for her , infact he cannot match upto her status. Kinjal bhen who is not accepting this proposal right now, even if she be forcefully asked to carry on with this proposal. How will she survive with this in long run, and you have the best example of unmatched marriage in front of you i.e of your brother and mine.

Jigar was now question less after hearing gopi's word, he also knew how kinjal has brought up, he's now actually worried what if Kinjal get married to Dhawal .

He speaks up.. bhabhi then what can we do we still don't have any option..

To this Gopi reply no Devarji we still have one option.

Jigar again spellbound and confused what is Gopi thinking now.

As you know umang is not suitable for kinjal bhen not even dhwal bhai but Elesh ji is .

Jigar all shocked now , how can this be possible esp. after such big drama, he questioned same from Gopi.

Gopi continues, I know Kinjal bhen still not love Eleshji but Eleshji loved her so much and also cared for her, and we are not even sure in case of dhaval bhai if he will be able to give that love and care to Kinjal Bhen, which she needs most at this point of time..

She continues further, Kinjal Bhen and Eleshji wedding was called off because of Kinjal Bhen's lie .. they thought it as a truth and backed out from marriage but since we all know its just a lie and not the truth..

Jigar realized her bhabhi is so right.. if this can happen that is the best thing which can happen to his family..

But his next thought was how this will happen after all such drama, they know what ios Kinjal truth now, but how will Mehta's going to believe them.

He questioned gopi ' bhabhi but how we will make this possible..

Gopi replied to this even I don't know..

Jigar continues.. Should we put this matter in front of everyone..

No no never do this let it be a secret between you and me.. I don't want after so much humiliation our family needs to face Mehta's ' and plzz devarji you will not even speak to rashi bhen.. (she already knew Rahi's reaction about this whole situation and Dhawal is her cousin.. )

He was surprised to her this.. her first thought is valid but why not Rashi' but seeing her pleading eyes .. he got agreed, and confirmed her matter will be in between two of them..

I don't know how we will going to do it, but we need to do something, at least for better future of kinjal bhen..we need to work out on this thing' devarji we need to think fast what we have to do further because if family people proceed with Dhaval Bhai proposal then we will left with no other option..

Jigar who is fully agreeing with Gopi now, really want to do something for his sister..they assured each other they will soon plan out how they need to proceed with it..

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CHAPTER EIGHT

Next day

After giving much thought to what to do.. Gopi and jigar both agree that they will call Eleshji and ask him to meet them..

So gopi asked jigar to make him a call..

But Jigar thought what if Elesh has not removed his number from his phone book and might not take his call after seeing his name..he shared the problem with Gopi.. and told Gopi this might not be good for our plan.. So what they should do now.. but every problem has a solution so they thought to call somewhere from outside. But now the question is what excuse they will make to go out from the house..

So this time again Jigar came up with the thought Gopi will ask his mom (she can't ask Kokila as she has confined herself to her room only… and not taking any part in household work.) that she want to go to temple, in order to pray for the happiness of her family, and to take her to the temple Jigar will accompany her.. Plan succeeded.

Gopi and Jigar at the booth..

Jigar made the call to Elesh.. but when the phone starts ringing his hand almost start trembling as he was not sure what to say and what to do… he handed phone to Gopi.. Asking her to deal with it… as he don't know what to speak up.. Gopi after seeing this reaction of Jigar almost get scared as she don't know even what will she do if Jigar is not able to attend the call.. Before she could think of anything..

Voice came up from other side Hello

Gopi who still holding receiver in her hand, after hearing the voice.. Unconsciously put the receiver near her ear..

Hello who's that..

Gopi assemble all her courage and with trembling voice speaks up.. Ji wo Jai shri Krishna eleshji…

Elesh thought who's that as he is familiar of voice … Speaks up Jai shri Krishna in return but still trying to make out who is there on other side.. After hearing Jai Shri Krishna gopi get some courage and told Elesh that its Gopi .

Elesh reaction first confused and then shocked why Gopi Bhabhi has called him, especially after all the drama .. Gopi Bhabhi aap- how come you call me..he was very inquisitive when he asked this question…

Gopi took long breath while putting her hand over receiver and then continue talking to him after taking deep breath..

Ji Eleshji aap se kuch kehna tha.(eleshji aapse kuch kehna tha)

Elesh impromptu replied her.. bhabhi still anything left to be discussed..

Gopi..first shock to hear this sudden answer of Elesh but after calming herself she continues. I know Eleshji you and your family got hurt because what all happened, but I still want to talk you about something and its very important Eleshji.

Elesh who was determined not to proceed further in this matter, continues sorry bhabhi everything is over now.. I think we should not discuss this matter anymore.. About to hang up..

Gopi continued.. plzz Eleshji give us one chance to speak in this matter..(but gopi pleading voice stops him to do this..)

Elesh-bhabhi that was already given to your family how many chances you want now to specify your self...

Gopi realizes he don't want to hear anything and very angry and shattered.. she could easily make out from his voice..

This time Gopi with much more pleading voice… continues… Eleshji you are right our family deserves no chance but we can atleast get one chance to apologies, I know what has happened with your family because of us cannot be taken back.. But still everyone get a chance to apologize.. Please I beg you please give us one chance..Tears were there in Gopi's eyes when she was pleading with Elesh.. and Elesh also can feel her crying and pleading voice..

After hearing all this Elesh do not left with no other options instead of accepting her offer.. he continues ok bhabhi last chance … since you have asked it and I can't deny it to you anymore..he was like giving up his all hatred after hearing Gopi's voice and was trying to see some new hope in his and Kinjal relation.. he always loved Kinjal.. But he is not sure what Gopi want to say.. he is kind of awkard situation where one heart stops him to proceed with the talks and other one asking especially after hearing Gopi's plea.. want to meet her.. So he follower laters advice .

He asked her what she want to say she can speak up..

To this Gopi replied no I want to meet you while clearing her tears from her cheeks.. and little smile on her face as she can see some ray of hope now.. Continues.. I will be grateful if you meet me..

Elesh accepted this and asked her to meet him in some mall at 4 p.m. he asked her to be on time as he have meeting later on.. And hanged up the phone..

Gopi turns towards Jigar.. she still has tears in her eyes .. Jigar who was eagerly waiting for him questioned her what happened bhabhi… please tell fast.. as you…

Before he could speak up further she replied eleshji agreed and told him about where he wants to meet them at what time..

After hearing this.. Jigar exclaimed with joy bhabhi u done it... and With excitement he hug gopi and said her Bhabhi you rock….

You rock Bhabhi… you have done it bhabhi.. while looking back to her.. While holding her shoulders with hands.. while jurking them..u r god bhabhi.. Tears of happiness was in his eyes now… and he wants to thanks his bhabhi…

Gopi replied him.. I think my Kanhaji is with us… devarji.. we have passed one obstacle… while talking they moved towards car and sit in it…

While starting the car.. Jigar said Gopi bhabhi yesterday you had said something to me.. gopi confusingly looked at him.. he replied that u said me.. you and bhai are not perfect match.. but you were so wrong.. you proved wrong to yourself.. you are perfect bhabhi.. you made impossible possible.. Jigar said with all excitement…

Gopi replied Jigar bhai we still have to go long way.. I don't know what will happen tomorrow, even if eleshji agree to us.. we still need to talk to Kinjal Bhen . I don't how will she react to this.. even if she agrees, the bigger question in front of us.. is Eleshji family..

To this Jigar agree and said yes bhabhi we still have long way to go.. but now I am sure we will win… and yes… if you agree or not kokila kaki has find a match for my ahem Bhai.. and if you still not agreeing with me… then you are questioning Kokila kaki's judgement… but one think I can assure you.. she never mistake in judging people.. now gopi is confused what to reply… she is in her own thoughts now.. maji may not be wrong in choosing me as a bahu.. but one thing I am sure.. I am not happiness of ahemji. As his wife . its only anitaji.. once this thing get workout.. I will leave the house for ahemji's happiness.

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Read all eight parts - super work. Please do continue.

What will Gopi do next, especially when she meets with Elesh?


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Read all the parts in one go
Please continue soon

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