OS. . Anita ENOUGH IS ENOUGH

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Guys. . .. (this goes on from the cooking competition OS that i wrote some time back)

need to get this off my mind. ,, . . . (inspired by Gopi beating up Anita bhoot)
AND I am feeling very tensed coz of my last exam coming up 2moro. . . been working day and night towards it. . gonan be one of the hardest exams ever. . . .ANd this was in my mind, ,, and i raelly wanna get it out. . and best of all i am on a break . . tired of workin 12 hours non stop now. .

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Assume Anita won some challege. .. and its time to correlate results with Koki. . Gopi is also there..

Anita taunts Koki to the limit. . .telling her that she was always wrong when it came to Ahem's matter. . blah blah blah. .. ANd taunts Gopi . . and Koki .. .telling koki that you only got a speechless slave for yourself that you call your bahu. . and other very horrible things. .

Antia then goes further and blasts koki more. . .right infront of Gopi. .

but before Anita goes too far:::: Gopi screams out:::: ""ENOUGH. . ., , , Anita . . ENOUGH> .. . . .. . GET LOST . . . or else. . . .. . "" Gopi now had smoke coming out of her head. . and fire in her eyes . . .burning with anger.. . . .. "NOT a WORD against my maaji . . ."" .

BY now all Modi falmily was cathering near koki's room as silent spectators lol gobsmacked by the sight of a fired up Gopi. . .

Anita goes:: "What will you do . .. you have lost all already . .and are just clinging on to AHem . . trying him up in this loveless marriage a, ,and this MIl of yours .. . . . ..2"""

by now AHem also gets down .. Raji everyone else. . . .. . Gopi has no idea what is around her. . all she has her eyes set on is Anita. . . she feels like sucking the life out of her. .

Just befoer Anita utters another word agains Koki, Gopi shouts out again . . " I said ENOUGH. . .. I dont care what you say about me. . . I had already released Ahem ji of the marital vows he gave me. . and left whatever relation I had left with him on my Kahna JI. I trust Ahem ji . .and Kahna Ji . . that even If i dont do a Thing. . I am certain that I will get what i deserve in life. . even if that means never getting my husbands's love "" . . . .as soon as GOpi said that tears. .very hot boiling tears dropped out of her eyes. . . . .and had flashbacks that each time she had hope in her relation with Ahem .. it was always a big disaster to follow. . and she was damn confused. .. and especially the 2 yesses that AHem said to ANiat were ringing in her head. . . and the time AHem slaped her and told her About him loving Anita. .

Gopi the continued::" I know AHem ji never loved me. . he told me that at the very start of out weding. . ." Ahem was being struck by fire up arrows on each of the words Gopi was uttering. . and the raw true facts. . . he had no courage to move forward. . but was left paralysed. . and found himself moving back . . .very slowly. . . and having flashbacks of his damn dark days. .

Gopi then went on. . ."I also know that he married me because of his mom. . he was being a gud son . . . and a good person . . and I also know that because I heard him say those very words t you without any justificatiosn. . . . I know I have failed to make a place for myself in his heart. . . I knew I have failed long ago . . but i never gave up hope. . .did all I could. . and just left all to Kahna Ji and led my life as he wud dictate it. . . I am glad that through his process of taeching me to read and write . . at least i got to talk to him . . and thought we had become friends. . . i dont think I am even worth his friendship .. I have never been able to stand up to his expectations. . . I embarrased him before his work colleagues, I could not behave myself like a normal person at the recent party . . . i KNOW ./ == . . """"" (Guys . . this is just Gopi blaming herself and the wounds of the dark days opening up . . they surely had left a mark on her heart. . though she never held a grudge against her Ahem ji. . but only considered herself not worthy . . )

Everyone was super shocekd at all this. . AHem was just taking in what she had said. . and was looking more like a dried up lump of dumminess . . . but cud not help realise that he was actually in tears. . ..

back to Gopi blasting:: "Anita ben. . .I do not care what yuo say about me. . .you can go to hell. . . but if you say anything wrong agaisnt any of My family members. . my maaji .. and my AHem jii. . yuo will have to go though my wrath. . ."

That got smiles on the faces of all . .. including Ahem who was more concerned with getting this over and fast before anything unwanted happens. . . Koki was now controlled and had a fixed look on Gopi. . with a sence of pride an hurt. . .

Ahem was relising how hard hearted he had been to Gopi. . and how much he now wanted to clear all her misunderstandings of the past and maker her his. . .Koki had a deep hurt inside that that all this GOpi said was true. . . she cursed the days she cud neevr knowck sence into Ahem . . she cursed the time she made Gopi take her vows back . .she cursed the day she allowed Gopi to leave MM upon Ahem's insistence instead of landing a tight slap on Ahem or at least make some moves to make AHem a human???

Koki was realising that she gave rise to a blind to true emotion work-a-holic. . .who only cared abotu koki. . and never about anyone in the family as much as her. ... she realised that it aws GOpi who made Aehm more of a human with her calmness and patience. . that Ahem,, who wud once say that Raji are grown ups dont need anyones help .. . had first time volunteered to take part more in family matters. .

Gopi had turned Ahem to a human . .and been his main source of strength and completed hislife. . .Koki regretted the time she called and blasted GOpi telling her she had distracted Ahem from his goal of being successful . .. She remembered whenever in dark days when there was any pooja or anything. . AHem wud say that he does not believe in all taht. . .koki knew he was uncomfortabel with GOpi . . but at at least Ahem cud have shown more regard for traditions or family practices. . .and paid respect to God. . as everyone did. . .koki really felt it hard. . her obsesson into making AHem successful had pretty much ruined over a year of a Innocent soul Gopi. . if only she cud go back in time. . when Ahem was a kid and she cud have made him enjoy more of life. . and have fun as all otehr kids do . . and given him and GOpi more of a lease intheir own life when things had started to look hopeful for both of them

(OMG. . such things shud never happen in OS writing. . .This was a mindles srant in my OS lol the Koki thoughts part lol. , I will just leave it in there,. . .now where was i before i wrote my Koki thought rant. . .yeah .. back to business.)

Gopi had just used the MY word for her family, ,,Maaji,, and AHem ji . . . . that made he go silent a while. . and felt wierd. . . it was teh first time since Anita bhoot that she felt possessive about Ahem ji. . . (umm I now for got where i put that Ahem, , ,sorry if this leads to a blooper. . )

Anita was taking all this in. . .. .no one else had said anything. . .Anita decided to capitalise on all this . . . . "then why. . . why. . . cant you jsut free him completely of this burden . .and let him be with me. . he is happy with me. .. and he has always loved me. . and you knwo that now. . . why did you stay back all this time. . .why cant you jsut get lost. . . "

Goip heard all that. . and aws too lost to give a politically correct reply. . .and ended up shouting out. . . "BECAUSE I LOVE HIM .. . . . .I CANT LIVE without HIM. . . i'd rather die his wife. . i'd rather die never getting loved by him . . I will survive just knowing that I can at least see him . . and at least serve him . . as best as I can . . . BUT. . . "

This was utterly shocknig for all to hear. . they absolutely loved it. . . . .AHem was over the moon . .. Gopi had triggered his batteris. . and he was no longer in DUMBO mode. . . . (

COMMERICAL BREAK sorry Aish has done such a gud job on repentance track in a way. . that If i start on taht iit will be very stale,, so In this OS i wont be doing a repentance track . .. i will only enjoy Aish's Realising what he has done SS. . )

She swallowed a a breath . . and continued. . in a mroe calm way. . . "I know I have left it too late. . I said befoer that I know he loves you, , I know he married the wrong girl , I know he only did that coz he loves his mom and will never go against her. . .. For his happiness. . I can give my life. . so setting him free will be too less to do for the sake of his hapiness. . . "

Everyone was amazed on Gopi's selfless ness but it was showing loud and clear this time. . . AHem was rolling with tears of hapiness. . .taht GOpi loved him.. . despite all the wrongs that he had put on her. . and he also remembered Gopi holi confession and regrette why he never at elast started making amends to their relation at that time. . then all this would have been avoided. . .And started to make his way in . . .to the room. . .

GOpi was facing Anita . . .still no idea that all had gathered in the room.. . .by the door. . no idea that Ahem had heard everything. . and was coming in. . . .

Anita then went:: "Good. , , finalyl you realised. . now. . . "" Just then Gopi lifted her hand Koki style took another deep breath . .and said "I know what i need to do. . " Just as she was about to make her way to the door and look up to face everyone that she never knew was there all along. .. she just got close to Anita. . when Anita looked to Koki and said. . "Aunti JI,, see you have lost. . I was right all along. . .You were never even a good mother to AHem . .and have been his life's biggest obstacle. . ."""""

Ahem's eyes were too red now. . .and filled with Anger. .. and speededned up his stride towards the room towarsd ANita. . WHEn . .

BAMmM

Gopi landed a back-fist. . tight SLAP on Anita's face . . .ANita fell about 2 feet away on the floor . .. lookign in shock and completely stunned. . . Gopi was trembling badly. . it was the first time she had gotten that angry and ever raised her hand on someone , , . ..

(she had done taht to ANita bhoot lol but she did not realy remember that ,, , this time it felt she blasted a human .. not a bhoot lol .. . the feeling is defferent lol)

YEEEHAWWW (i felt gud writing that,, dont think i expreessed it well enough though)

Everyone ,, now including Ahem was completely stunned by this side of GOpi. . . . . . she was trembling like a leaf in the windy season . . .Anita was shocked to the core. .. and suddenly noticed eveyrone around and quickly got herself up . . Gopi sure had left a big STAMP on Anita's left Jaw. . . (if Anita really was a ostrich, , she wud have had no head by now lol))

Gopi was about to collapse. . when AHem quickly grabbed her. . . Koki was with mouth wide open . . all house members had no lines to say , coz i am too lazy to give them lines. . just assume the looked like tennis referees seeing left-right-left-right. . .. )

Anit noticed tha the suported Gopi and not her and got no w jealous and desperate. . . to end al this fast, , teh slap made her very mad. . no one had ever slapped her in her life. . . i wish someone really did.. .Gopi broke the record lol. .

Anita was fast to point out. . in pretense "AHem see , ,what she has done. . .. . now even you can free yourself from all this . . .. you never loved her. . . she's . . . usele.s. .. .. ."

Ahem: "ANITA. . . SHUT UP./ . .. . . .. .. .You have crosse all limits of decency and humanity now. . . . get lost from here. . i'm warnign you. . ""

Anita took a step back now. . .feeling impending avalanche on her lol

but still kept talkin . ."No Ahem . . .today you have to gather the courage to tell everyone that you love me and only me and you want to be with me. . you even told me that you would have married me if Koki agreed. . . please have the courage this time. . tha tyou dont care abtu thsi GOpi and that you dont love her. . ."""

Ahem:: "I SAID SHUT UP. . .. . I know I haev been horrible to Gopi. . and I dont know what to do to make it up to her. . . I loose my breath the moment she does not talk to me. . My day starts and ends with her. . I do not consider myself worthy of even deserving such a wife. . that I have abused to the very rock bottom . . and yet she never took any hard feelings against me. . . I began to see her worth too late. . and began faling in love with ehr . .but neve rknew how to say it because my guilt of the past was too much in my way. . I myself was responsible for killing her feelings and love for me. . . I squeezed the very life out of her, , and have in my worst acts put he through soo many bad situatiosn that even my worst enemy wud never do to me. . .. . i dont know what I can do to make her raelise how much I love her and how to make her believe me. . . but I can swear on my mum and my family , ,and Kahna Ji. .. that without Gopi I am incomplete.. I love her with al my heart, mind and soul. . . I cannot live without her. .. . and will di. . .. !!!!!"

Just then . . GOpi put her hands on his mouth. . and said. . "before death comes to you it will have to go through . .m ..."""""

AHem reciprocated Gopi's act . . and placed his hand on her mouth. .. . and had a public eyelock . .. lost in each other now, , ,, ,

they then released each other mouths LOL, , and then GOhem said together conincidentally
"if anything ever happens to you, , even I will be with you . .. even death will you part. . " THEY had become ONE. . . SOUL. . . And hugged tightly , , ignoring anyone around them, . .. . . absolutely lost in a world of their own .. . not wanting to let Go ever. . . .

Anita was fuming at all of this . .. .approached Gohem and broke the hug and lalala times (DAMN YOU ANITA,, sorry i need closure for her LOL) "AHem. . .you dont have to put up this farce. . . ."

(sorry my writing patience has run out , , forgive me for the rashness that s going to follow below)

Ahem: "Argghhh. . "" AND BOOOM. . . Another tight slap on Anita's right side. . . .Anita both sheecks now had Gohem full stamp colletion. .. "GET LOST. . .. . .I aws only concerned for you because I considered myself guilty for your situation , , but no more. . . I cannot take you anymore. . . GET LOST" (yay chipkuu told off 😃)

Ahem held Gopi's hands. . and made his way out of the room with her. . . to their Room . .. but before jsut getting to their room .which was witness to msot of their bad experiences . . Ahem called over Jigar. . "Jigar. . check if Anita's "dad" and friend have got their green cards. . .and tell them to come and take her away. .. Oh and please. .book some hotel far from here. . .and send Anita out of this place. . .". . Anita interrupted saying that she can stay here til her collectors come, and before anyone cud say anything, Ahem said. . "Sorry, i cant stand ou anymore in this house. . jsut leave. . . and try to get your senses back. . Mom, , if she stays here me and Gopi will leave this house and come back only when Anita is gone. . me and GOpi actually need a break. .. "

Koki said "no need Ahem, yuo go now to wherever you are going,, I will make sure that Anita gets taken care of and sent of as soon as possible. . you dont have to take a break so soon. . ." 😉

Everyone had smiles on their faces. . .a lot had been learnt of the past , , ,alot needed to be mended. .. as long as they all had eeach others suport all will be well .. . as the 3 idiots say "All Is Well"

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All had been well . .Anita had been knocked out. . and catapulted out of Mm and GOhem lives. . . what more . . . . . Gohem remarriage , ,honemoon . . and loads more after that. . perhaps a repentance track . .but this time Gohem together will come out of thsi strong because all the loose ends need to be mended. . .

GUYS, this will most likely be just THIS ONE PART. . . I will write other OSs .. . as well. ..

hope you liked it ::: I had time constraints. . .and really wanted to get it all into One part and fast done. . coz it was boiling inside me. . . . I decided to leave out all KK revelations, , and other extras. . and concentrated on the RAW known facts. . and feelings relatnig to those know facts. . . ALso A weakness of me as a write:: I kinda am out of creativity ::: coz fo thsi exam stress::: thats why u might have noticed I like making GOpi collapse lOL, ,,and Like getting Anita slapped lol ,, to me that feels kinda repetitive,, sorry cud not help those bits/ I will be more creative after 2moro. . and think straight. and more clearly . .

Hope you liked it. . . I tried my best to write this up within 20 minutes. . .I can get back to revision now. . .wish me all the best 😃 coz i need all the luck i can get for this last Monster Exam. . .its like all the exams hard questions combined to for one exam . . but shud be well . . .but ur wishes sure to pump me up quite a load. . . so let the wishes flow 😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
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😆 Vinder, I could understand the frustration in you and the anger towards Anita. I, more likely, felt that it was you who gave Anita a tight slap. Nice OS yaar😊
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I loved Gopi thwack on Anita's face. In fact I would pay good money, among other things to see that happen in SNS itself.
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Originally posted by: gohem_ka

😆 Vinder, I could understand the frustration in you and the anger towards Anita. I, more likely, felt that it was you who gave Anita a tight slap. Nice OS yaar😊



yup.,,,, i raelyl hate anita lol. . .even in my half attentive states. . .i can only think of a tight slap for her and a good catapult out of Mm lol
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Originally posted by: Xarina

I loved Gopi thwack on Anita's face. In fact I would pay good money, among other things to see that happen in SNS itself.



me tooo. . .really wish . .. i think its really possible. .. .

glad u loved it 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It seems u r very frustrated with this track. Btw, gud writing.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi very nice os..👏.!i would like to see gopi bahu as you described in your os.😍.!i am very happy that gopi gave a tight slap to that witch..!😡


wish you all the best for your exam...!
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👍🏼 ALL THE BEST FOR YOUR EXAM..👍🏼
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gr8 job .loved the fiery gopi
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Originally posted by: Xarina

I loved Gopi thwack on Anita's face. In fact I would pay good money, among other things to see that happen in SNS itself.


I second Xarina here... I would pay to watch this happen. it was awesome...

And thanks a lot for the mention... You have absolutely no idea what it means to me...

The OS was fantastic!! And Best of Luck for your exam... I am sure you will do well... 👍🏼

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