OS: My Better Half - Page 6

Originally posted by: Hetp

indeed its an awesome OS...enjoyed it while reading...hatts off to both of u 😊 👏
Onscreen I also want ahem firmly to make anita realise that he loves gopi...and now gopi is everything for him

Originally posted by: gohem_ka

Wow...Awesome! 👏 👏 👏
Swasthi and Shilpa behen -duo ⭐️
Wonderful OS with Ahem in action. 😳

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Originally posted by: vijayarvi

nice os shilpa and swasthi...!👏thanks for the excellent os ..!😃you both made my day thank you very much...!

Originally posted by: _naksh_raz

as usual awesomely wriiten!!perfect for a treat fter stdying for foir hours...loved it

Originally posted by: taniks

Wow ,that was incredible , and y wouldn't it when it was collabration from both of you. Shilpa ur understanding of gopi and her philosophy in life is second to none and swasthi ur interpetation of ahem ,his actions ,feelings and his silence cannot be challenged it is always totally accurate . Now with you two as a dynamic duo can anything you write together be less than brilliant. What I found especially endearing and I am convinced will happen in the series is the confession , which was so totally them . Gopi and ahem are not showy ppl therefore that declaration was explosive cos it was geniune ,heartfelt and confirming of Gopis place in his life and the value he places on her ,I believe those words spoke far louder than I Love You ,and considering his audience and their conservative nature I have to admire the fact that ur ll outlined his committment , devotation and affection for Gopi respectfully and with dignity . This is a total contrast to how Anita wud want a confession but so in keeping with gopi and ahems nature. In gopi and ahems minds in my opinion the words ' I love you' is too timid to descibe the intensity of their feelings , it will be sed but only to each other in private . Their love , devotation and committment for each other shines as brightly as the lamp gopi held when they first met in the darkness on the day of their engagement ,in their actions and their silence .thank you guys I really enjoyed this os

Originally posted by: ritika-gohem

Again, nice one, love the way of ahem declaring his feeling infront of ahem nd gopi.

Originally posted by: Arnisha

wowww great os jus loved it n loved the way ahem answered anita back stupid girl thought tht he still loves her bt he loves his wife great one. kep it up n thanx 4 the pm...

Originally posted by: Aish3003

This is exactly what should happen when Ahem finds out about this challenge thing... It would be awesome!!

Thanks for the PM!

Originally posted by: svtsns

That was awesome os swasthi n shilpa. Loved each n every part. thanx for the pm.

Originally posted by: gohemmania

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