OS: My Better Half - Page 5

Originally posted by: varshu27

that was an awesome OS shilpa and swasthi...loved how ahem dealt with the whole challenge issue...lovely speech from him... and i liked it that gopi told ahem what was going on...anitha the deluded was over confident...but boy was she brought down to earth with a thud...thank u...

Originally posted by: doc4ever

Swasthi and Shilpa what a Terrific OS! 👏

Anita arranging the party with old friends celebrating Ahem's contract reflects that she still lives in the past and is basing all of Ahem reactions to how he was then and trying to fit it into the present..

Seeing Ahem and Gopi breaking the silence between them and communicating their feelings and fears with each other at the Mandir is indeed something that is anticipated to be seen on screen..

Finally Ahem knows what's going on and all the misunderstandings and doubts are cleared in front of Anita and love the way the whole family is celebrating Gohem's coming together and not giving any importance to Anita at all..was just fantastic!

Thank you so much to both of you! 🤗

Originally posted by: rsk16

nice start . loved it. . wow . really nicely done.

Originally posted by: A2ZV

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Shipa and Swasthi, everytime I read your OS I am overwhelmed with beautiful emotions The emotions that you bring out are so natural and real. I wish they show us something similar in the actual serial too.

Ladies well done. Always look forward to reading your work.

Originally posted by: Justlikethat1

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Awesome👏 and SWEET😳

That was just superb.. Such trust and Ahem in action.. It was wonderful..

Finally .. Finally Ahem put two and twp together to come to the right conclusion😃 What I loved the most was the way he was with Gopi.. In the mandir, at the house, in the room😊

The questions he asked for her sake, the need for the competition, and the way he explained to Anith why he loves Gopi and why Gopi is the right one.. Well done👏

Originally posted by: aris22l

What an OS, Shilpa and Swasthi👏. The way Ahemji dealt with the situation was awesome. I can really see him doing that in the show. The way he made his feelings clear for Gopi and the way he put Anita in her place in front of the family was very satisfying. I needed this to get through the weekend. Will be reading it again and again. Thanks for a wonderful OS.

Originally posted by: poonamahem

So sweet !!!

Originally posted by: Nihira-fan

A superb,heartfelt OS!!i truly enjoyed reading it...it was the perfect ending!!you both are amazing writers!!thanks so much!

Originally posted by: nilani19

😛Love it😛