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Posted: 13 years ago
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Aham is standing there gobsmacked he is asked to choose which one he knows which one but how does he tell the other one without hurting or destroying her, he cannot just give a answer this way what is to do?

Aham Gopi vahu has asked you its either her or anita what will it be?
Aham looks at Gopi into her eyes her innocent naive eyes, after a while he says Anita,Anita grins at gopi n kokila as if to say i told you so, n then she says in her mind i will take aham now, kokila looks at him n walks away, he sees this n he went after his mother, he said mom u did not hear me out.
Anita was my past i dont know what it was i had then maybe lust she was modern she suited me as the successful business man, but now i know why u chose gopi, she is perfect for me my mom knew best Anita, she knows me more than i know myself, when gopi came into my life at first i resented her she was a unpar gawar but then i dont know how or what changed it but gopi became my life she completed me, she knew what i wanted she completed my sentences she got me out of situations which i did not want to be in, like the other day u came into our bedroom n wanted to chat, my wife was already upset with me but she came n helped me out, i did not want to go to talk to you, i wanted to talk to my wife. when i am around her i feel that i am the luckest man on earth, she is my everything i am in love with her i need her, she once said to me that she could not live without me but the truth of the matter is i cannot live with out her, mom, i have yet to say this to you Thank you for finding Gopi she is perfect for me.
Anita looks gobsmacked n starts to cry.
Aham turns round Gopi I love you, everyone starts to look towards where gopi was standing but she was not there, Aham looks round, he runs upstairs gopi no where, Jigar says Bhai bhabi has gone, Aham has tears he runs down n out of the house she couldnt have got far he tells himself she will go to her mahmas house, but no she didnt go there.
kokila looks at Anita you have heard my son not once but twice he has rejected you, yet u continued to make my vahus life a misery, Aham loves gopi i told you i will keep my vachan to you n marry you will marry arvind the family is nice the boy is nice its either that or get out of our lives
Aham goes to cm no where, Aham starts to drive round where can gopi have gone n then he thinks when gopi was upset on her birthday where does he take her maybe just maybe he goes there n gopi is sitting on the bench looking towards the forest tears are streaming down she closes her eyes n aham says to her Gopi I love you...

no more no next chapter just a one of 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
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lol cool

suk u have many ideas for GOpi leaving lol😉


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Posted: 13 years ago
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oh please continue..that was really nice!!when are we gonna see it happened in sns...when??
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i have always wanted gopi to leave ahams ego n kokilas demands were too much to bear but i still think they need a jolt
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow... lovely ... Loved it !!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG your so evil 😆 its like your giving me a lolly and you snatch it away i want more plz😭😭😭

p.s dont take it wrong way 😳😳😳😳😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: tamzin43

OMG your so evil 😆 its like your giving me a lolly and you snatch it away i want more plz😭😭😭

p.s dont take it wrong way 😳

😈 is my middle name 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It was really nice to read. Please continue writing more. 😊

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