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Hey all, thought of the party comin up in SNS. . so here goes:: First make I will assume that you all have seen latest promo . . I will continue on from that. ::: i wont have long to write but will jsut write as much as I can . . .so please bear with me if any errors. . If anyone else has done somethign simmilar, pelase let me know and I will take this OS down, .. i just had a thought and am putting it down now. . I will be ALL GOOOD ++++++++ALSO I will take it in a way that the main reason Gopi is going to party is coz she has gathered courage to be by ahems side and her fear of embarrasing AHem are fading. . and partly coz Ahem looked sad at having to go with Anita.. . so GOpi did not like that fact, but the reason she had refused was coz she was scared of letting down AHem . . (So I will make AHem do more heavy lifting, and very mild versions of Gopi)
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Gopi had just interupted while Ahem - Anita were about to leave. . saying that she wud come to party as well . Ahem was just lost in Gopi coming down the stairs. . and started walking towards her lost in her beauty . . . Anita was shocked at gopi willing to go along . . and looked at her anoyingly. .
Gohem had not reached a moment of typical couple closeness. . coz they are unique. . .feeling sdont always have to be said in words and touch. . . Ahem smile said it all. . and Gopi blushed hard. . Ahem then signalled that they walk to the door. . both had smiles on their faces. . and Anita looked as if life was gettin sucked out of her. . .
Just as Anita turned her back to head along with Gohem . .she noticed Koki at the top of the stairs giving a smiley look at Gohem . . Anita then had flashbacks that Ahem only dumped her coz of Koki. . and Ahem was just putting up a show in front of koki to please his mom. . .
In these thoughts they all walked to the car and Anita was oo lost thinking Ahem was putting up a show for koki adn that she though Ahem loved her alone that she failed to look up and see Gohem chemistry. . Ahem had now opened front door of car to gopi and was letting Gopi in the car first. . (YAY: front seat)
And in Gohem lost nature they totalyl forgot about Anita at the back . . .Ahem started the car.. . and nearly made a rush for it.. . when they heard a bang on the car. . and suddenly Gohem came out of the trance of each other an noticed that they had left chipak Anita outside. . .Ahem the opened the back doo r and told Anita to help herself in. . . Actually i think Anita coming with them is right. . coz Gohem lost in each other in car .. while being drivem means accidents occur lol. . so Anita probably kabab me haddi to save Gohem lives LOL. . Ahem wont get distracted much from driving . . he will concentrate on driving. .
Anita was rather quiet and wasnt takin it hard on herself that she had to sit back . . coz she was too dumb to realise Gohem and was in her own la la la land thinking of Ahem's over concern . .and consoled herself at why Ahem wud have fed cake to Gopi first. . .and why Ahem perhaps cud not tell his feelings to Anita. . Anita knew ahem was slow at feelings rendering coz she had known him too long... and it was Anita who had made Ahem confess his (fake) love to her. .. in the times pre-gohem marriage... so Antia was pretty much again taking advantage of Ahem's slow nature at expressing his feelings. . .
Not long later they had arrived at the party . . and Ahem quickly went to Gopi side and helped her out of the car. . . and Anita was still inside thinking old memories. . but Gopi beauty had trancified AHem soo much that even again they both had forgotten Anita in the car. . . Anita got out of the trance when Ahem slammed Gopi side door back and quickly jumped out of the car to walk alongside Gohem this time. .
The party:: I will assume that its a friends party , get together of some sorrt. . . so here goes this bit. . . .
Ahem was delighted to meed all his old friends.. and Anita was also happy to meet em all after a long time. . and Gopi , poor girl had never had any friends of her own age coz Rashi had always kept Gopi as her personal slave in RN, and all Gopi ever did was serve Rashi friends with food /tae. . or go do whatever Urmi always told her. . Gopi never had any friends. . and aws absolutely dumbstruck as how to deal with the situation . . Ahem knew that this was Gopi's first ever party with him . . .and wanted to make Gopi feel as comfortable as possible so he tried to stay as close to her as possible . ..
just as Ahem retraced his steps back to Gopi. . Anita was about to grab hold of his arm and envelop his arm in hers.. . but Ahem moved away just in time. . Ahem the said to Gopi::"Dont worry. . . and dont be scared. . . I am there right. . " . . Gopi gave a blushy cuty smile and gathered pace and walked with Ahem more towards the centre stage. . . (not like they are going to do anything there but wait on. . oh I have an idea now. . read on )
Pinakin called over Anita. . and a coupe of other friends, and Gohem slowly joned in. . and they were all talking about thei old days .. . and topic started verginon Ahem-Anita chemistry. . and they asked Ahem why he never married Anita . .. . Gopi was like struck by lightning. . and she remembered the time Ahem slapped her . . telling her that he loved Anita and she really did not want to bring all these dark memories into her mind. . .so she slowly started backing off. . . Anita quickly responded that he was mama;s boy BUT everything was going to be fine soon . . .. AHem gave a mild smile. . and everyone started teasin him that he never had his own choice.. . Ahem was rather angry but really did not know what to do. . . He was more concerned with the tense of what Anita had said. . "everything will be fine soon"" . . . he felt that him being with Anita was probably as hard for Anita that for Him to get out of their past and forget the past once and for all. .
He looked back and saw Gopi somewhere about a few metres away asking for water. . and he went to her. . and said. . u cud have told me. . Gopi just looked on . . and Ahem realised she had felt uncomfortable. . and sat with her for a while and also got some cold drink and both gohem shared something to drink . . Anita was meanwhile distracted with her friends talking of old memoreis with Ahem . . . ((its GUD this is a friends party. . i will have had nightmares if it was only Gohem and Anita. . Anitw wud have gone . .eat that eat this. . and dumbo Gohem lost in each other wud eat even poison. . ))
Anita the slowly tried to get back to Ahem . . and tried to initiate some talk . . Gopi realised that it may lead to some uncomfortable talks and quickly got up as said. . "Anita ben. . where is the washroom . .??, please cud you escort me there. . ." Anita told her that she cud just follow the signs and get there. .. and AHem stood up and said. . "Anita , pelase.. take her with you , she doesnt know much here. . go on. .fast. """ Anita had no option but to comply with that. .
Anita GOpi had reached the washroom. . and Gopi went in. . but ANita thougth that she cud find her way back anyways. . and decided it wud be better if she cud take advantage of the opportunity and be with Ahem more... coz he had been glued to GOpi . . and Anita began noticing that GOpi and Ahem were rather too glued to each other. .
She the left the place and trekked towards Ahem . . .and in the meantime Ahem had caught up his old days with Pinakin (pinochio rather) and that pina guy introduced Ahem to his wife .. after a friendly exchange. . Anita had caught up with AHem . . they all shared more chats about the old days (sorry guys i dont wana know what the talk of. . keeps making me feel bad) )
nooo I miss Gopi now 😭 . .. i will get her back now. . .. . 😃
Gopi had come out of washroom only to find the place deserted. . and noone was around. . and to make matters worse. . there was a short circuit just where Gopi was. . . and it had gone pitch black .. . 😉 Gopi was not scared and thought that Anita had surely plotted something. . and began having wayward thoughts. . .where is Ahem . .has he forgotten her. . is he too lost in his friends and Anita . . she started banging in to things and was calling out for help . ."Ahem Ji , Ahem ji. . .. "
(Sory readers, dont know what happened to me, i wanted this to be aall gud OS,, but its hard to write all GUd without soemthing bad.. dont worry i will try to make ti gud again)
meanwhile . . . Ahem noticed Gopi was not showing up . . and nowhere to be see. . he realised Anita back . .and asked her where Gopi was. . Anita replied that Gopi was in washroom and wud come back anywaysl .. . . Ahem jsut nodded. .. and waited 😭 restlessly looki around. .
meanwhile Gopi had managed to fall down and get a small bruise. . on her palm . . but al was ok. . and she asked kahna Ji to get her out of this darkness. . .she started seeing some light at a distance .. and made her way towards it. . . .
AHem was now gettin restless and restless. . he had noticed some darkness around the area GOpi had gone but no sign of her. . so he decided to mode towards that area . . And Anita quickly signalled some Dj to play some romantic slow coupe style music. . .and called around everyone to get together and in remembrance of old memories to have a couple dance sesssion . .. Ahem was dragged back in the frieds stampede. . .
Anita grabbed his hand. . . and asked him for a dance. . and his friends also staretd pressurising him .. but he wasnt soo easy to budge.. . . Gopi was taking too long. . and he was growing restless by the minute .. . and after all the comotion of tryin to make him dance. . he shouted out. . "ENOUGH. . . ." took his hadn out of Anita. . and then realised what he had done. . and said "Sorry guys. . you all go ahead. . .Anita NOT NOW. . .. i will be right back"""""
Anita had realised that Ahem was now too obsessed about Gopi and really wanted to lay the breaks on that. . she still felt that he was being too mean and trying to make her feel jealous (yeah right, sorry guys i am rather dumb so couldnt think of anything better so decided to butched Anita further LOl to further my OS, i know you wond mind. . ) 😃
Gopi had now made it back to the light lol YAY. . that was a lot of darkness. . . and banged into Ahem . . (you will notice if u read my other OSs i like Gohem banging into each other, plain old destiny milan))
Ahem noticed Goip in pain. . and quickly his eyes got to her hand that she was holding tightly. . her little finger had a bruise. . and there was light blood flowing out of it. . and he was too dumbstruck to do anything medically. . he just grabbed her finger and put it in his mouth 😲 😲 😲 😲 and was too concerned. . Gopi was like 😳 😳 😳😊 both stared at each other like for an eternity. . and Ahem quickly realised his posture,, , and Gohem snapped out of it. . .he then quickly took her to a table grabbed some wated jug , , cleansed her room . . and shouter at her. . "Cant you be a little more carefu!!!! What if yuo got hurt more!!!!! "
And in her mildly lost state she replied "you are there na. . to take care. . . . "" se just stopped. ..well READERS, you all get the meaning, lol .. . line incomplete.. and then Gohem share a cute eyelock . .
Anita was now fuming. . and realised competition for Ahem . .she cud really feel Gopi's threat. . .it was gettin to her more vividly.. .Gopi was a obstacle between her and Ahem . .
she then grabbed her friends and started reminding them of the cuople dances. . .and slowly made her and her friends way to Gohem. . and asked AHem to come a long . . .. Gopi insinctively just followed though she hadnt been called,, coz Gohem were still in a mild eyelock. . . they were not holdin each other but were joint by some divine powers. .
Anita knew from Kinjal that Gopi was illiterate and from RN . .so she presumed that Gopi never knew these kinds of dances and she was certain AHem neve r like imperfect pple in his life. .
She then asked Ahem adn GOpi to dance with each other. .
adn immediately, GOpi took a step back . .and started trembling. . . Ahem realised this. . and knew Gopi had never doe this neither had he ever taught her at least. . . both were rather confused about what to do now. .
Anita smile was now exponentiall increasingy from 😊 to 😃
Commercial break:: READERS:: wahat will happen now 😲
but who knew Ahem was too clever. . .and transformed under the shade of Gopi's never diminishing love. . . he calmly approached Gopi. . and whispered close to Goopi ears. . "Gopi. . u trust me right. . ??""
Gopi "Ye. . .es Ahem ji. . but I dont know . .."
Ahem "yes. . .stop. . i know . . .dont worry , , Amen hoo na. . ." (GUYS i jsut loved the episode before Anita and Ahem saw each other. . shopping centre stuff was awesome ,, ,Gohem were superb .. )
Gopi"" lekin. . . "
Ahem """ Gopi. . . .shaaant. . "" Gopi calm down .. . "now gopi. . put your feet on top of my shoes. . "
Gopi""" kya. . aapko dard hoga.. my shoe sould are too hard " (you will feel pain my shoes. . )
Ahem " no probs .. . ." "Gopi please.. just do as i say. . " . . .
BUT Gopi cud not bear to hurt her Ahem ji . .and as everyone was busy watching the top and not the feet. . she just tossed away her shoes. . and Ahem gave a teasing smilee . . "Tum bhi na. . koi baat nahi .. "
Gopi had seen Raji dance on Rahsi;s birthday so knew the posture vaguely. .
Ahem "Ab tum .. . "
Gopi had alraedy put her feel on top of Ahem's shoes (THANK GOD AHEM HAS BIG FEET. .Gopi has more stable solid to step ON)
NOW GUYS:: think of ur favourite slow romantic songs. . . READERS CHOICE here. .
And GOpi slowly slightly tremblingly mover her hands acros Ahem's shoulder, . and he made his right hand to hold her back. . . . . and the just got lost in each other at a romantic song playing at the back . . and Gohem dancing together beaturifully slowly .. and everyone around stopped.. . and just watched Gohem . . .Anita was left to 😡 to 🤢 🤢 🤢
just as song ended. . . there was a loud applause for Gohem . . and there were some couples and Ahem old frieds sayin at the back . .wow. . "That was superb . .truelly made in heavep couple.." they look made -for -each other. . """ Every word stabbed Anita's brainz. .
Gohem were still lost in each other. . and not moving. . eyelock was eternal . . until interrupted by some faster music . . .. awww. . .And Gopi nearly tripped since her feet were on Ahems. . and Ahem moved over his other hand and grabbed her tight. . and both had a rather ambarrasingly cute fast huggy moment in front of everyone
i dont think I need to explain Anita looks:: she pretty much looked like a badly very badly strangled ostrich by the exact middle of the neck . .
And the party graudually ended. . . ANITA BAnged hard . . . . Gopi just naturally inclined to be with Ahem . . . she felt rather uncomfortable with Anita. .. . . but true love proves that you accept each other as you both are. .. the skil sone does not know can be learnt by another just to increase couple's AUTARKY which is always a good thing (Google the word Autarky :: I facied it))
Gohem will undoubtedly improve. .. . Ahem alertness and love for Gopi is what has hkept Anita at bay . .. Gopi strength is being increased by Ahem himself . .. Ahem realises what Gohem as a couple have been deprived of and is making everyeffor tto make up for the shortcomings fro mhis side with Gopi. . and Gopi never lets him down . .
What will Anita doo?? ? ?
i honestly cant be asked. . . .
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i personally really wished Ahem had a lot more to do in this track . . . but oh well things never turn out as we want. . . but in my preferred version i want a stronget and yogya Ahem . . .and a yogya patni within Gopi that has always been there gets the guts to show her yogyata,, not prove that she is yogya. . .. .. but just be a natural . . .
Guys I have always had problems with continuity .. . so I covered a only possible good party scennario . . .but I think i am a better writer when it comes to writing negative ot Bad party stuff LOL. . but I was in a gud mood so i did a good , ,all gud stuff OS. . less of negativity. . .but ig in mood / / or if you guys insist I will do a bad party evil version . .. .
ADVERT lol
Also my other OS,, Worst Nightmare in Reality I have been having a evry ahrd tmie updating that. . . i am struggling to find a solid writing mood. . But i promise I will update that as well . .but cannot guarantee at all whe,, I also have exams coming up thsi week . . so I might not spend time doing what I cant do off the fly. . . but stuff like this ,,, whatever comes to my mind i just let it flow in writing. . .and just ,, thats basicalyl it. . .but i will try updating. .
I will handle exams well as long as you all wish me 😃 . .. SNS forums gives me the strength to do well . . more strength actually. . .thats how I roll . . So i will be rather active here as well. . coz I jus tlove the forums. . and they always give me peace. . and I can let out my ideas faster. . and then concentrate on my work. . and dont worry about exam timings, this all took me under an Hour.. so all gud... i fee nice now lol..
Forgive any erros, and typos,, I like keeping my writings raw. . .non edited non eror checked, non proof read.. . so you all get it in a piece, including my thougths while writing. . coz i tend to try to make readers not read if I personally think you will not perhaps like it. . 😊
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Gopi had just interupted while Ahem - Anita were about to leave. . saying that she wud come to party as well . Ahem was just lost in Gopi coming down the stairs. . and started walking towards her lost in her beauty . . . Anita was shocked at gopi willing to go along . . and looked at her anoyingly. .
Gohem had not reached a moment of typical couple closeness. . coz they are unique. . .feeling sdont always have to be said in words and touch. . . Ahem smile said it all. . and Gopi blushed hard. . Ahem then signalled that they walk to the door. . both had smiles on their faces. . and Anita looked as if life was gettin sucked out of her. . .
Just as Anita turned her back to head along with Gohem . .she noticed Koki at the top of the stairs giving a smiley look at Gohem . . Anita then had flashbacks that Ahem only dumped her coz of Koki. . and Ahem was just putting up a show in front of koki to please his mom. . .
In these thoughts they all walked to the car and Anita was oo lost thinking Ahem was putting up a show for koki adn that she though Ahem loved her alone that she failed to look up and see Gohem chemistry. . Ahem had now opened front door of car to gopi and was letting Gopi in the car first. . (YAY: front seat)
And in Gohem lost nature they totalyl forgot about Anita at the back . . .Ahem started the car.. . and nearly made a rush for it.. . when they heard a bang on the car. . and suddenly Gohem came out of the trance of each other an noticed that they had left chipak Anita outside. . .Ahem the opened the back doo r and told Anita to help herself in. . . Actually i think Anita coming with them is right. . coz Gohem lost in each other in car .. while being drivem means accidents occur lol. . so Anita probably kabab me haddi to save Gohem lives LOL. . Ahem wont get distracted much from driving . . he will concentrate on driving. .
Anita was rather quiet and wasnt takin it hard on herself that she had to sit back . . coz she was too dumb to realise Gohem and was in her own la la la land thinking of Ahem's over concern . .and consoled herself at why Ahem wud have fed cake to Gopi first. . .and why Ahem perhaps cud not tell his feelings to Anita. . Anita knew ahem was slow at feelings rendering coz she had known him too long... and it was Anita who had made Ahem confess his (fake) love to her. .. in the times pre-gohem marriage... so Antia was pretty much again taking advantage of Ahem's slow nature at expressing his feelings. . .
Not long later they had arrived at the party . . and Ahem quickly went to Gopi side and helped her out of the car. . . and Anita was still inside thinking old memories. . but Gopi beauty had trancified AHem soo much that even again they both had forgotten Anita in the car. . . Anita got out of the trance when Ahem slammed Gopi side door back and quickly jumped out of the car to walk alongside Gohem this time. .
The party:: I will assume that its a friends party , get together of some sorrt. . . so here goes this bit. . . .
Ahem was delighted to meed all his old friends.. and Anita was also happy to meet em all after a long time. . and Gopi , poor girl had never had any friends of her own age coz Rashi had always kept Gopi as her personal slave in RN, and all Gopi ever did was serve Rashi friends with food /tae. . or go do whatever Urmi always told her. . Gopi never had any friends. . and aws absolutely dumbstruck as how to deal with the situation . . Ahem knew that this was Gopi's first ever party with him . . .and wanted to make Gopi feel as comfortable as possible so he tried to stay as close to her as possible . ..
just as Ahem retraced his steps back to Gopi. . Anita was about to grab hold of his arm and envelop his arm in hers.. . but Ahem moved away just in time. . Ahem the said to Gopi::"Dont worry. . . and dont be scared. . . I am there right. . " . . Gopi gave a blushy cuty smile and gathered pace and walked with Ahem more towards the centre stage. . . (not like they are going to do anything there but wait on. . oh I have an idea now. . read on )
Pinakin called over Anita. . and a coupe of other friends, and Gohem slowly joned in. . and they were all talking about thei old days .. . and topic started verginon Ahem-Anita chemistry. . and they asked Ahem why he never married Anita . .. . Gopi was like struck by lightning. . and she remembered the time Ahem slapped her . . telling her that he loved Anita and she really did not want to bring all these dark memories into her mind. . .so she slowly started backing off. . . Anita quickly responded that he was mama;s boy BUT everything was going to be fine soon . . .. AHem gave a mild smile. . and everyone started teasin him that he never had his own choice.. . Ahem was rather angry but really did not know what to do. . . He was more concerned with the tense of what Anita had said. . "everything will be fine soon"" . . . he felt that him being with Anita was probably as hard for Anita that for Him to get out of their past and forget the past once and for all. .
He looked back and saw Gopi somewhere about a few metres away asking for water. . and he went to her. . and said. . u cud have told me. . Gopi just looked on . . and Ahem realised she had felt uncomfortable. . and sat with her for a while and also got some cold drink and both gohem shared something to drink . . Anita was meanwhile distracted with her friends talking of old memoreis with Ahem . . . ((its GUD this is a friends party. . i will have had nightmares if it was only Gohem and Anita. . Anitw wud have gone . .eat that eat this. . and dumbo Gohem lost in each other wud eat even poison. . ))
Anita the slowly tried to get back to Ahem . . and tried to initiate some talk . . Gopi realised that it may lead to some uncomfortable talks and quickly got up as said. . "Anita ben. . where is the washroom . .??, please cud you escort me there. . ." Anita told her that she cud just follow the signs and get there. .. and AHem stood up and said. . "Anita , pelase.. take her with you , she doesnt know much here. . go on. .fast. """ Anita had no option but to comply with that. .
Anita GOpi had reached the washroom. . and Gopi went in. . but ANita thougth that she cud find her way back anyways. . and decided it wud be better if she cud take advantage of the opportunity and be with Ahem more... coz he had been glued to GOpi . . and Anita began noticing that GOpi and Ahem were rather too glued to each other. .
She the left the place and trekked towards Ahem . . .and in the meantime Ahem had caught up his old days with Pinakin (pinochio rather) and that pina guy introduced Ahem to his wife .. after a friendly exchange. . Anita had caught up with AHem . . they all shared more chats about the old days (sorry guys i dont wana know what the talk of. . keeps making me feel bad) )
nooo I miss Gopi now 😭 . .. i will get her back now. . .. . 😃
Gopi had come out of washroom only to find the place deserted. . and noone was around. . and to make matters worse. . there was a short circuit just where Gopi was. . . and it had gone pitch black .. . 😉 Gopi was not scared and thought that Anita had surely plotted something. . and began having wayward thoughts. . .where is Ahem . .has he forgotten her. . is he too lost in his friends and Anita . . she started banging in to things and was calling out for help . ."Ahem Ji , Ahem ji. . .. "
(Sory readers, dont know what happened to me, i wanted this to be aall gud OS,, but its hard to write all GUd without soemthing bad.. dont worry i will try to make ti gud again)
meanwhile . . . Ahem noticed Gopi was not showing up . . and nowhere to be see. . he realised Anita back . .and asked her where Gopi was. . Anita replied that Gopi was in washroom and wud come back anywaysl .. . . Ahem jsut nodded. .. and waited 😭 restlessly looki around. .
meanwhile Gopi had managed to fall down and get a small bruise. . on her palm . . but al was ok. . and she asked kahna Ji to get her out of this darkness. . .she started seeing some light at a distance .. and made her way towards it. . . .
AHem was now gettin restless and restless. . he had noticed some darkness around the area GOpi had gone but no sign of her. . so he decided to mode towards that area . . And Anita quickly signalled some Dj to play some romantic slow coupe style music. . .and called around everyone to get together and in remembrance of old memories to have a couple dance sesssion . .. Ahem was dragged back in the frieds stampede. . .
Anita grabbed his hand. . . and asked him for a dance. . and his friends also staretd pressurising him .. but he wasnt soo easy to budge.. . . Gopi was taking too long. . and he was growing restless by the minute .. . and after all the comotion of tryin to make him dance. . he shouted out. . "ENOUGH. . . ." took his hadn out of Anita. . and then realised what he had done. . and said "Sorry guys. . you all go ahead. . .Anita NOT NOW. . .. i will be right back"""""
Anita had realised that Ahem was now too obsessed about Gopi and really wanted to lay the breaks on that. . she still felt that he was being too mean and trying to make her feel jealous (yeah right, sorry guys i am rather dumb so couldnt think of anything better so decided to butched Anita further LOl to further my OS, i know you wond mind. . ) 😃
Gopi had now made it back to the light lol YAY. . that was a lot of darkness. . . and banged into Ahem . . (you will notice if u read my other OSs i like Gohem banging into each other, plain old destiny milan))
Ahem noticed Goip in pain. . and quickly his eyes got to her hand that she was holding tightly. . her little finger had a bruise. . and there was light blood flowing out of it. . and he was too dumbstruck to do anything medically. . he just grabbed her finger and put it in his mouth 😲 😲 😲 😲 and was too concerned. . Gopi was like 😳 😳 😳😊 both stared at each other like for an eternity. . and Ahem quickly realised his posture,, , and Gohem snapped out of it. . .he then quickly took her to a table grabbed some wated jug , , cleansed her room . . and shouter at her. . "Cant you be a little more carefu!!!! What if yuo got hurt more!!!!! "
And in her mildly lost state she replied "you are there na. . to take care. . . . "" se just stopped. ..well READERS, you all get the meaning, lol .. . line incomplete.. and then Gohem share a cute eyelock . .
Anita was now fuming. . and realised competition for Ahem . .she cud really feel Gopi's threat. . .it was gettin to her more vividly.. .Gopi was a obstacle between her and Ahem . .
she then grabbed her friends and started reminding them of the cuople dances. . .and slowly made her and her friends way to Gohem. . and asked AHem to come a long . . .. Gopi insinctively just followed though she hadnt been called,, coz Gohem were still in a mild eyelock. . . they were not holdin each other but were joint by some divine powers. .
Anita knew from Kinjal that Gopi was illiterate and from RN . .so she presumed that Gopi never knew these kinds of dances and she was certain AHem neve r like imperfect pple in his life. .
She then asked Ahem adn GOpi to dance with each other. .
adn immediately, GOpi took a step back . .and started trembling. . . Ahem realised this. . and knew Gopi had never doe this neither had he ever taught her at least. . . both were rather confused about what to do now. .
Anita smile was now exponentiall increasingy from 😊 to 😃
Commercial break:: READERS:: wahat will happen now 😲
but who knew Ahem was too clever. . .and transformed under the shade of Gopi's never diminishing love. . . he calmly approached Gopi. . and whispered close to Goopi ears. . "Gopi. . u trust me right. . ??""
Gopi "Ye. . .es Ahem ji. . but I dont know . .."
Ahem "yes. . .stop. . i know . . .dont worry , , Amen hoo na. . ." (GUYS i jsut loved the episode before Anita and Ahem saw each other. . shopping centre stuff was awesome ,, ,Gohem were superb .. )
Gopi"" lekin. . . "
Ahem """ Gopi. . . .shaaant. . "" Gopi calm down .. . "now gopi. . put your feet on top of my shoes. . "
Gopi""" kya. . aapko dard hoga.. my shoe sould are too hard " (you will feel pain my shoes. . )
Ahem " no probs .. . ." "Gopi please.. just do as i say. . " . . .
BUT Gopi cud not bear to hurt her Ahem ji . .and as everyone was busy watching the top and not the feet. . she just tossed away her shoes. . and Ahem gave a teasing smilee . . "Tum bhi na. . koi baat nahi .. "
Gopi had seen Raji dance on Rahsi;s birthday so knew the posture vaguely. .
Ahem "Ab tum .. . "
Gopi had alraedy put her feel on top of Ahem's shoes (THANK GOD AHEM HAS BIG FEET. .Gopi has more stable solid to step ON)
NOW GUYS:: think of ur favourite slow romantic songs. . . READERS CHOICE here. .
And GOpi slowly slightly tremblingly mover her hands acros Ahem's shoulder, . and he made his right hand to hold her back. . . . . and the just got lost in each other at a romantic song playing at the back . . and Gohem dancing together beaturifully slowly .. and everyone around stopped.. . and just watched Gohem . . .Anita was left to 😡 to 🤢 🤢 🤢
just as song ended. . . there was a loud applause for Gohem . . and there were some couples and Ahem old frieds sayin at the back . .wow. . "That was superb . .truelly made in heavep couple.." they look made -for -each other. . """ Every word stabbed Anita's brainz. .
Gohem were still lost in each other. . and not moving. . eyelock was eternal . . until interrupted by some faster music . . .. awww. . .And Gopi nearly tripped since her feet were on Ahems. . and Ahem moved over his other hand and grabbed her tight. . and both had a rather ambarrasingly cute fast huggy moment in front of everyone
i dont think I need to explain Anita looks:: she pretty much looked like a badly very badly strangled ostrich by the exact middle of the neck . .
And the party graudually ended. . . ANITA BAnged hard . . . . Gopi just naturally inclined to be with Ahem . . . she felt rather uncomfortable with Anita. .. . . but true love proves that you accept each other as you both are. .. the skil sone does not know can be learnt by another just to increase couple's AUTARKY which is always a good thing (Google the word Autarky :: I facied it))
Gohem will undoubtedly improve. .. . Ahem alertness and love for Gopi is what has hkept Anita at bay . .. Gopi strength is being increased by Ahem himself . .. Ahem realises what Gohem as a couple have been deprived of and is making everyeffor tto make up for the shortcomings fro mhis side with Gopi. . and Gopi never lets him down . .
What will Anita doo?? ? ?
i honestly cant be asked. . . .
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i personally really wished Ahem had a lot more to do in this track . . . but oh well things never turn out as we want. . . but in my preferred version i want a stronget and yogya Ahem . . .and a yogya patni within Gopi that has always been there gets the guts to show her yogyata,, not prove that she is yogya. . .. .. but just be a natural . . .
Guys I have always had problems with continuity .. . so I covered a only possible good party scennario . . .but I think i am a better writer when it comes to writing negative ot Bad party stuff LOL. . but I was in a gud mood so i did a good , ,all gud stuff OS. . less of negativity. . .but ig in mood / / or if you guys insist I will do a bad party evil version . .. .
ADVERT lol
Also my other OS,, Worst Nightmare in Reality I have been having a evry ahrd tmie updating that. . . i am struggling to find a solid writing mood. . But i promise I will update that as well . .but cannot guarantee at all whe,, I also have exams coming up thsi week . . so I might not spend time doing what I cant do off the fly. . . but stuff like this ,,, whatever comes to my mind i just let it flow in writing. . .and just ,, thats basicalyl it. . .but i will try updating. .
I will handle exams well as long as you all wish me 😃 . .. SNS forums gives me the strength to do well . . more strength actually. . .thats how I roll . . So i will be rather active here as well. . coz I jus tlove the forums. . and they always give me peace. . and I can let out my ideas faster. . and then concentrate on my work. . and dont worry about exam timings, this all took me under an Hour.. so all gud... i fee nice now lol..
Forgive any erros, and typos,, I like keeping my writings raw. . .non edited non eror checked, non proof read.. . so you all get it in a piece, including my thougths while writing. . coz i tend to try to make readers not read if I personally think you will not perhaps like it. . 😊
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