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Great OS Vinder 👍🏼

Good luck with the exams 😊

Good luck with your exams, Vinder. What an OS👏. I had a big smile on my face the whole time I was reading it. I have never laughed so hard as I did reading the following paragraph. I think I read it at least five times, and laughed even harder each time😆.

All the best for the exams and thanks for a wonderful loved filled os.

Originally posted by: aris22l

Good luck with your exams, Vinder. What an OS👏. I had a big smile on my face the whole time I was reading it. I have never laughed so hard as I did reading the following paragraph. I think I read it at least five times, and laughed even harder each time😆.

"And in Gohem lost nature they totalyl forgot about Anita at the back . . .Ahem started the car.. . and nearly made a rush for it.. . when they heard a bang on the car. . and suddenly Gohem came out of the trance of each other an noticed that they had left chipak Anita outside.."

I wish it happens that way in SNS and Ahemji gives his full attention to Gopi, but what to do with these CV's. I agree with you on what you said here:

"i want a stronget and yogya Ahem . . .and a yogya patni within Gopi that has always been there gets the guts to show her yogyata,, not prove that she is yogya. . .. .. but just be a natural . . . "

THanks everyone for all ur wonderful comments and best wishes for my academics. .

glad u all loved the OS. .. I was feeling wierd about the dance part coz I thought ANita wats to show Gopi doesnt know how to dance. . .so Ahem teaching GOpi in frnot of everyone would prove that point. .. so i went with the foot on foot plan lol. . ANd Anita being dumped at each point esp by AHem is all fiction so far. . I hoe too that he does that in real SNS at all times. . coz sometimes enough is enough.. I am afraid that if AHem does not stand up on time. . to put off Anita. . it will be too late coz Gopi will have taken a toll on the batleground all a lone. . with Koshi and also Hetal applying endless pressure on her. . I am sad AHem wont do any heavy lifting. . I am sad that he might even never know what GOpi has gone through or even remember the holi SD(sorry that cmoes into my frustration lists all the time, coz CV= 99%forgottnen by the looks of it. . ) I really wish this is a tenfold bigger test for Ahem that Gopi. . that one reason I that GOpi goes thru all this agnee pariksha . . .AHem will be a dumbo all the time. . but time will come coz of AHem's big delay that GOpi will be shattered .. . . then GOpi will take some drastic action if AHem stays quiet or does not support Gopi for whatever reason. . And then I really wish AHem suffering starts big time. . . I want him to have to be all alone, , no support whatsoever in dealing with ANita. . then he will realise his mistakes. . and will reggret why he never understood Gopi and Anita as well. .

Also I feel that ANita may play dirty tricks towars Gopi to get her scolded.. like intentionalyl eating wrong medicine. . in pretense . .and since Gopi gives all the medicing AHem blasts her out of frustration of Anita staying sick longer. . . such things might be built up faster by Anita. . Gopi will have to be very stronge. . Ahem will be a shallow minded jerk all time long. . no doubt. . but I hope he gets to cry tears of blood if he ever wrongs Gopi in any way whatsoever. . .I have still never got over his dark day treatment of Gopi. . and though he is gud . . .he has to suffer. . what goes around comes around,... . i really hope that happens and AHem too pays for his deeds . . . a lot more. . . Goppi cried to fill seas of tears. . .Ahem shoud cry to fill oceans. . that scale is astronomical . . But GOpi will always be onhis sicde to ease his repentance. . why cant he always be on GOpi's side more attentively. . and actualyl do something to show it /take steps. . coz I know he is on GOpi side. . but he is too statue guy. . cum on MOVE AHem before its too late. .

Aris, , ,thanks for the most wonderful comment. . glad you loved it 😊 that comment summarises all :)

Ver y very nice os vinder
U wrote everything really well it seemed as I was not readi g it but was watching it in tv n I wish you could have been saatbiya's cv then the show must have rocked 100 times more
Very well done and keep writing as u r such a wonderfull writer