OS: Making It Happen - Page 2

It is just as i want to see. I really like to see if gopi ignore ahem a lil bit. But never want to see that if gopi will say to koki for ahem nd anita. Marriage is not like a saree when u wish u can give to other one. Nd really like the way as ahem made out nd replied to umang. a nice os.

Just hope something like this happens!!!!! loved it SHilpa and Swasthi!!!1

this was pretty good.. . I dont mind anything provided Ahem has to loads of suffering, at least 10 times mor that GOpi. . . I absolutely dont want to see Gopi doing all the hard work this time round, I wud haev even preferred her to go dumb till Ahem completes his repentance lol

but based on current scenario your OS is brilliant and best possible way I can see if it really happens. . now CVs brains need some banging to come up with awesome stuff like this. .

Shilpa and Swasthi. What a collaboration. Loved this OS and my heart went out to Gopi. So nice to see a positive Rashi and glad that Anita leaves. Great piece of writing. I salute you two.👏

nice... nt nice bt actually very sad(i hav tears in my eyes)... i cant bear d thopught of ahem as gopi betrayed him... hw many times he vl do dat...he can ask her directly if he felt like dat... i am scared in real story also it vl cm like dat... always poor gopi..really very hard 2 read d story...hw much pain she takes into her heart...

i think you should send this script to those brainless git cvs.
this is fabulous. i love the whole think.
why oh why cant those idiots who get money to write a story spoil it.
you both are just wonderful.
keep churning more stories. bcos i m living in this story land.

🤗⭐️👏 ladies once again a well depicted class of a story you have made. thanks for the pm and hope some thing like it happens

Thank you Shilpa and Swasthi.. It was such a heart wrenching piece from the beginning and the end was filled with hope, a hope that will make it more brilliant as the story goes👏⭐️

What a beautiful way to take the story forward.. I am sure SNS will move completely or atleast partially this way with Ahem being angry on Gopi for all the wrong reasons... Ahem does not learn easily does he?😕
Poor Gopi is in for another heartbreak.. Only this time Ahem's ego and guilt overshadowed his trust for Gopi. It was beautiful to see him realize that he has made another bad mistake, maybe the worse till now and I am glad Koki was there for Gopi when he was not..
His realization like Gopi's pain will be one of the final ones..Gopi will take some time to risk her heart again and Ahem will think twice before ever mistrusting her or jumping to conclusions.. It is good both ways.. Ahem will start to work towards strengthening his marriage. Gopi deserves that her husband fight for her..
It was an awesome read and shows us that there are more tears before we can get happiness again.. But that the pain will be worth it.. Thank you for the wonderful piece🤗

👏Thank you Swasthi and Shilpa for once again coming up with such a fantastic OS 😊

👏👏excellent os shipa and swasthi...!👏 you both are great writers..!feeling happy😃 thankyou very much for both of you..!👏