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Hi friends, we are back with another OS.

This one is once again a joint collaboration between myself and Swasthi.

We have lot of speculations regarding Ahem's anger and the new promo, so we have put the two together and come up with what we hope will happen in SNS in next few weeks.

Enjoy!


OS: Making it Happen

One and half weeks after the truth came to him, Ahem sat on the sofa with his laptop but unable to concentrate on work. He watched as Gopi hesitantly came into the room with the water jug. He searched her face and felt the same pain in his heart that was visible in her eyes, except her pain was lot worse than his could ever be. HE is the cause of her pain. How had he let things get this far?

He thought back to the day a week and half ago when he realized that Anita knew the truth. The day had started out so well but ended on a bad note. He had been at his worst that evening after the aarti. When he had received the call from Anita he had left the mandir to answer the phone in privacy. When Anita did not say anything on the phone he had been confused at first however persisted on a reply. A few seconds later to his dismay he heard the sound that indicated she had hung up the phone.

He had turned the phone off and looked around but did not see anything. He realized that Anita have found out the inevitable - him posing as Nilesh. He just couldn't figure out who would have told her. He had thought back to seeing Anita in his room when he came home then the explanation Gopi gave for the sari. He was quick to deduce that Gopi had told Anita everything. If only he hadn't been so shallow in his thinking to reach this conclusion, all because his one good deed that has landed him in heap of trouble, his baseless feeling of betrayal had the potential to lose his true love.

Ahem looked up when Gopi came out of the bathroom and started walking out the room again.

"Gopi where are you going?" he spoke sharply as he stood up at the same time he couldn't take her silence any more.

Gopi stopped at her Ahemji's sharp voice but did not turn to face him. What was there to see but more anger and hatred from him? Her shoulders slumped in defeat. She could not take more of his cold and hot attitude towards her.

"I have some work to finish in mandir." She was proud of herself for not sounding like a scared mouse. She walked out of the room without looking back.

Ahem couldn't do anything but stand there and watch her go. This time the wound he inflected on her ran deeper than any other he has ever given her in the past. He doubted the pain of his past mistrust in her had caused her as the pain he caused her this time with his mistrust. Gopi had not betrayed him it was HE who had betrayed Gopi.

Flashback to day of Akshaay thrithi...

Ahem frowned why had Anita not said anything? Does she know it is me who has been calling her as Nilesh? If she does, how did she find out? His mind conjured up possibilities and rejected them quickly but he just couldn't come up with anything else that made sense.

He should have known Gopi wouldn't be able to stand the strain of lying. He should have never involved her in his lies. He had asked her to trust him and keep faith in him but apparently to her his mom's words were more important than his. Ahem felt the pain of betrayal as he walked up the stairs. What if Anita was taking a turn for the worst? Gopi had no right to do this? The more he thought about the consequences of Anita knowing the truth the more he became angry on Gopi.

He thought Gopi loved him and would always support him like he supported her but today she proved that for her he is nothing and his mom and her honesty is everything. He had been afraid of this very thing happening even as tried to work today. He thought his Gopi would not do this to him but she proved him wrong. He heard her calling him but did not answer her and kept walking up. When she didn't give up his anger took over and he blasted her.

"I don't want to talk about it now Gopi," he retorted as a scowled scribbled over his face. He was too far gone in his anger to notice her fear. He turned and walked away before he blasted her more.

Present ...

Gopi leaned her head back against the mandir's pillar and gazed at her kanaji. Everyday for a week now she has come to him to ask him what wrong did she do to keep getting dreams broken over and over. How many times will she fall before she learns to stay down rather than take the next blow? "Not much longer now Gopi ... soon you will be free to do what you want to do."

Gopi felt like laughing hysterically. Free to do what kanaji? Go back to mami's house to be a burden? No not this time she will have to find her own way. She just has to repay the debt to Modi family for loving her and accepting her. It was time for her to save them one last time.

Flashback...

Gopi trembled in fear as her Ahemji walked up the stairs angrily. She frowned and thought why is he so angry? What happened in just few moments to make him behave like this with her? She put it off to it being related to work. Her Ahemji would never yell at her like this anymore. She walked back to mandir thinking about the earlier incident in their room and smiled. She will give him time to calm down before she approached him again.

Gopi and Ahem were both unaware of the effects this small misunderstanding will have on their marriage.

Later that night when Gopi went to their room her Ahemji had turned the light off and was asleep already. Gopi was again questioning this but did not worry too much about it. She did not start worrying until the next day when her Ahemji continued to ignore her. Gopi was really confused by Ahemji's attitude but did not have courage to ask him why he is behaving like this.

Kokila noticed the strain on her vahu's face and noticed the way her son was behaving and felt the anger build inside her. She knew Anita had been bad news for her son and she was right. First he lied for the girl and now he is ignoring her vahu. She will not tolerate this in her own house. She noticed Rashi glancing at Gopi vahu worriedly and decided to ask her to help save her vahu and son's marriage.

Anita on the other hand was lost in her own world. She was too happy thinking that Ahem still loved her to notice the fact that although Ahem was being friendly with her, he was not acting like a man who still had feelings for her. All she knew was that all was not well in Ahem's marriage and it was because of his feelings for her, after all he only married Gopi for his mom' sake and not because he really wanted to. It was obvious that they are still not a married couple even after being married for over a year.

Anita knew there was only one obstacle in the way of her and Ahem's love - his mother. This time she was sure Ahem would fight for her. Moreover, his mom seeing that he is not happy in his marriage will finally agree to set him free.

Ahem was ignorant of everything and everyone around him. He was going through the motions of everyday routine but not paying attention to the fact that his preoccupation with himself was making people around him plan his life without his knowledge or input.

Gopi was surprised when her maji and Rashiben approached her after the men went to the office the next day.

"Gopi vahu put that down for now," indicating the sabzi Gopi was getting ready to chop, "and come with us," her maji ordered her.

Gopi quickly placed everything on the kitchen table and followed her maji and Rashiben to her bedroom. Once they were in the room maji closed the doors and turned to Rashiben.

"Rashi I have explained everything to you and now I want you to explain things to Gopi vahu," Kokila said as she pulled her pallu over her left shoulder.

Rashi smiled and shook her head. "Ji Kakiji." She turned to Gopi who was looking at kakiji and her in confusion.

"Gopi kaki wants me to help you learn how to please Ahemjiju," Rashi said happily.

Gopi was shocked and turned to Kokila.

"But maji why?"

Kokila turned to her innocent vahu and her heart softened.

"Gopi vahu it is time to let Ahem know what is good and what is bad. If you don't do something you are going to lose your husband. You need to show him and others you have all the rights over him as his wife."

Gopi was not convinced by her maji's words but went along with what she said. She watched as her Rashiben showed her how to tie a tie. She was apprehensive because her Ahemji did not like wearing ties but thought her maji knew Ahemji better than her.

The next morning started what her maji called a mission to show her rights over her husband. Gopi was nervous but determined. After thinking over what her maji said and remembering the way she had felt when Anitaben wore the sari that Ahemji had given her, Gopi had decided she needed to show her place in Ahemji's life.

She walked in the room with Ahemji's green tea. He was on the phone as he was getting dressed and she decided to help him. She placed the tea on the table and went over to help him button the sleeve buttons of his shirt.

Ahem was too involved in the conversation on the phone to notice Gopi come in the room. He was surprised when she stopped in front of him and took over the task of buttoning his shirt sleeves. He lost track of what the other person was saying on the phone and got lost in her. When she moved away he couldn't take his eyes off of her. He watched as she picked up the tie from the bed and proceeded to tie it around his neck. He was too enthralled to be surprised by the tie.

Ahem forgot everything around him and just watched his wife with fascination as she tied the tie around his neck. The cute frown on her face when she concentrated on the task at hand brought a small smile to his face.

Gopi felt Ahemji's gaze on her and felt her hand tremble a little and she almost forgot how to tie the knot but she gave her full concentration to the task and kept reminding herself why she was doing this.

Ahem pulled away from her abruptly as soon as she was finished but Gopi did not notice his closed off expression and picked up his jacket and held it out to him. Ahem did not reject her offer because even in anger he couldn't resist the way she cared for him.

Ahem and Gopi were both too lost in their own private world to notice Anita wander by their room to observe them and draw wrong conclusions of their interactions.

The next few days Gopi found various ways to show her rights as a wife to everyone and Ahem, in private and in front of the family. When he left for office she made sure he had everything and was ready with his bag when he was ready to leave. On his return she was there to take his bag from him to take to room and made him comfortable with his green tea.

One morning she noticed the shirt he was wearing had a stain on it so she stopped him before he put on his blazer.

"Ahemji wait, that shirt has a spot on it. I will iron another one for you quickly." She went to the wardrobe and took down another shirt.

Ahem looked down and sure enough the spot was visible. He watched as Gopi ironed his shirt with mix feelings. As soon as his heart melted at the care she showed him he was also reminded of her distrust in him and anger took over making him clench his jaw to control it. He needed to let go of this feeling of betrayal yet he just seemed to can't get over the fact that Gopi cared for him, at the same time didn't trust him and didn't have enough faith in him to take care of things.

Gopi saw her Ahemji frown and wondered what still bothered him. She had felt him withdraw a little and he has been quieter than his usual self and wondered what was going through his mind. She knew Anitaben's situation was still worrying him and she has also noticed Anitaben's attempts to get close to her Ahemji. It was this that made Gopi more determined to fight for her rights over her husband.

As the week continued Gopi's confidence in herself grew with tips and encouragements from her Rashiben and Maji. She wasn't hesitant to show she cared in private or in front of the rest of the family. She did so by straightening his tie at breakfast, or buttoning his shirt as he was leaving for office or making his favorite dish for dinner because he did not like what was made for dinner that night. The more she did this that more she felt the freedom to freely touch her husband as and when she needed. At the same time she sensed that her husband wanted this as well.

Ahem on the hand continued to be hot and cold towards Gopi and be concerned for Anita. He watched Anita closely to see how she was coping with the truth. He feared for her state of mind and was afraid of what she might do when she came out of the shock. He did not realize that his concern was being misconstrued by both Anita and Gopi.

It was three days later when things came to head and Ahem's realization of his wanting to do one good deed had turned his world upside down. He went on to realized how wrong he was to think that his wife did not trust him or have faith in him.

Ahem was sitting in his room thinking about how to approach Anita. He knew she knew about her marriage but neither one of them had come forward with the truth. He wanted to make sure she was in better health to bring it up but was not sure when the right time was for it.

Gopi came in the room with Ahem's green tea and placed it on the table in front of him.

"Ahemji your green tea."

Ahem came out of his thoughts and nodded absently, and continued to think things through.

Gopi watched him with concern. "Ahemji are you okay?"

Ahem looked at her with a blank expression but again he just nodded his head and looked away from him.

Gopi hesitated but moved away to lay out his clothes. When she was finished she noticed Ahem hadn't touched his tea at all. She moved to stand in front of him.

"Ahemji your tea is getting cold. Do you want me to bring you another cup?"

When Ahem didn't answer her, she again called out his name.

"Ahemji do you need anything?"

This time he looked up and the anger on his face made her take a step back. His eyes and voice were cold when he finally spoke to her.

"No Gopi I don't need your help. You have done enough for me," he said, no longer able to control his anger.

Gopi was perplexed by his anger and words.

"What happened Ahemji? What did I do?" she finally asked unsteadily.

"You want to know what you did Gopi?" he said to her in a cold controlled voice looking at her stealthily.

Gopi was shocked at the anger on Ahemji's face. She had finally stopped fearing his anger thinking her Ahemji understood her now.

"Why did you do it Gopi? Didn't you trust me or have faith in me to fix things? Why did you tell Anita I was posing as Nilesh? Do you know what this could do to her or how it could effect her?"

Gopi was too numb to defend herself. Her Ahemji, whom she thought knew she would never do this, was accusing her of telling Anitaben the truth.

"Gopi in your need to assuage your guilt over lying and to make yourself look good in mom's eyes you betrayed my trust and did not think about the consequences of what the truth would do to that poor girl."

Gopi no longer heard his words but realized the meaning behind his anger. No matter what she did she would never be able to take Anitaben's place in her Ahemji's heart. It did not matter if she bent over backwards, she will forever remain a burden to him. She thought he had come to care for her and might even love her but she had been wrong. He was only doing his duty for the sake of his mom and his family. If he had loved her then he would have never believed that she would ever betray him. Today she failed as a woman and as a wife. She stood frozen in the same spot, tears streaming down her face as Ahem walked away from her in anger.

Kokila had been on her way to her son and vahu's room to speak to them about Anita when she heard her son accuse her vahu of betraying his trust. She stopped in her tracks. Like her vahu Kokila was too shocked by the accusation to move. She listened as her son continued to show his anger on Gopi unable to believe what she was hearing. She was just about to interrupt him when she saw him walk away from Gopi who was just standing like a statue unaware of the tears streaming down her face. She felt her own eyes fill with tears and walked into the room to place her arm around her vahu in comfort.

Gopi felt herself comeback to awareness and realized her maji was standing next to her with her arm around her . She also realized her maji had been a witness to Ahemji's accusations.

"Maji I didn't tell Anitaben about Ahemji posing as Nileshbhai," she said numbly.

Kokila had never felt as angry on her son as she did in that moment.

"I know Gopi vahu," Kokila reassured her.

Koki wiped Gopi's tears and made her look up at her.

"Go on the terrace and see if there is anything you can do to help Meethi or just go up and relax," her maji told her. She watched as her vahu walked away in defeat.

Koki was not surprised at her vahu's composure and knew she won't breakdown now but will give into her heartbreak when she is alone and no one is around to witness her tears and pain.

Twenty minutes later Ahem came out of the bathroom a bit calmer and was surprised to see his mom waiting for him and Gopi nowhere around.

"Mom did you need something?" he asked.

Kokila turned and closed the door to her son's room. She turned back to her son and felt the pain of disappointment like she has never felt before.

"Ahem once again today you caused me great pain. I was disappointed with you on many occasions in the past year but today you not only broke Gopi vahu's heart but mine too," Kokila could bring herself to be angry at Ahem because she knew she was equally to be blamed for her vahu's heartbreak.

Ahem was too confused by his mom's words and wondered what he did to once again disappoint his mom.

"Ahem I thought that things were finally going well between you and Gopi vahu, that you have come to know and love her like you should. I though that when you started getting to know her you realized her honesty, her innocence and her ability to love everyone unconditionally but you proved me wrong today by accusing Gopi vahu of betraying you," Kokila said to him, her tone obviously accusing.

Ahem realized his mom had heard his angry words to Gopi.

"Mom, please listen to me," Ahem said wanting to explain his reasons but stopped when his mom held up her hand.

"No Ahem you listen to me. First of all Gopi vahu would never betray you for anything. She did not tell Anita anything. She would suffer herself before she would cause you that kind of pain. It is obvious you still don't know your wife as well as I thought you did or is it a fact that now Anita is back in your life you are once again looking to get rid of my Gopi vahu?" Kokila asked him angrily.

Ahem was shocked by what his mom was saying and shook his head. He was over his feelings for Anita long time ago. Why would his mom accuse him of this now?

"Ahem when I brought Anita in this house I went to talk to Gopi vahu to explain to her about you and Anita. Do you know what she said before I could even explain it to her?" Kokila asked.

"She said she already knew about you and Anita and that she trusts you completely. She told me she had full faith in you but it seems you don't have the same trust and faith in her. You still see her as gawar who is not worthy of you," she said painfully.

Ahem was left to digest the truth on his own and realize what he did to Gopi. He failed to recognize the truth in his need to appease his guilt over Anita and what happened to her.

Ahem didn't waste time and walked out of the room to walk towards the guest room. He knocked on the door and waited for Anita to look up.

Anita was thinking about how to approach Ahem when she saw him standing by the door.

"Ahem you? Come in. I was just going to come look for you," she said with a smile.

"Anita I want to ask you something and I want an honest answer," he said to her.

Anita frowned and wondered what Ahem wanted to ask her and thought may be he wants to know how she feels about Nilesh. She nodded her head and waited for him to go on.

"How did you know it was me who was calling you as Nilesh?" Ahem asked.

Anita was shocked. She didn't think Ahem knew that she knew it was he who has been calling her as Nilesh.

"I didn't know until the day of the puja. I found out my marriage broke when I watched the DVD that was delivered to me then wondered why Nilesh was still calling me. When I called him to find out he told me he hasn't been calling me at all. I was suspicious when you injured your foot on that glass in your room because I had heard something break when I talked to Nilesh. I decided to test you myself and called the number. I was shocked when I saw you answer the phone. I was behind the pillar upstairs," Anita said.

She was relieved to have that out of the way and make it easy for Ahem to tell her why he posed as Nilesh.

Ahem was enraged at himself for doing what he did to Gopi. Once again he let his anger and ego get the best of him and hurt her beyond reasons.

"Ahem I know why you did what you did. In a way I am glad my marriage broke now we can talk about our feelings openly," Anita continued unaware of Ahem's lack of attention to her.

Ahem frowned at Anita's words but it did not register that she misunderstood his intention in posing as Nilesh. At that point he was too lost in his thoughts about Gopi and the hurt he caused her. He left the room without saying anything.

For rest of the day he and Gopi both avoided each other. What they will not realize was that the avoidance and the misunderstandings were going to cause even more problems for them.

The very next morning the bell to Modi Mansions rang loudly in the quiet environment of the house. Meethi went to answer the bell and came back with someone that shocked everyone.

Ahem glared at the newcomer.

"What are you doing here Umang?" he asked angrily.

"I am here to check on my sister Ahem. Where is she?" Umang said matching Ahem's anger.

Rashi spoke up. "She is resting and shouldn't be disturbed."

Umang looked around at the Modi family then turned his attention on Ahem and his mom.

"Fine I will come back to see her. For now let me also explain my other reason for being here," he said.

"Ahem Modi you have managed to ruin my sister for the second time and this time I want justice for her. I am going to give you two days to come up with a way to restore my sister's reputation or suffer the consequences to Modi name. I will ruin you and your family's name. By the time I am finished no one in Rajkot will want to do business with the Modis," he said with a smug smile.

Umang watched the varying expression of shock on Modi family members and felt elated. This time he had them where he wanted them. He will make sure that his sister got what she wanted.

"I will be back in two days," he emphasized. "Be sure to have a plan ready or say goodbye to Modi name," he said before strolling out of Modi Mansion.

No one reacted for a moment then Kokila looked at Ahem and walked away.

Gopi had slumped against the pillar away from the dining room. She had stayed away from breakfast to avoid Ahem and had come in just as Umang made his appearance.

After the incident Chirag decided to stay home and also told Jigar and Ahem to stay home and come up with a plan to secure Modi industries and the family.

Ahem was angry for being pushed in the corner and he is not going to give into Umang's empty threats. He knew Umang had no clout over Rajkot community. For rest of the day he made sure that Umang had no hold over them to make them do anything. His kaka and Jigar supported him and aided him in securing their business.

Unknown to Ahem, Gopi had reached her own conclusion and decided the best way to save the family name was for Ahemji to marry Anitaben and for her to move out of their way. She would achieve two goals with her plan. Ahemji and Anitaben would finally be free to be with each other and the family name would be saved also.

With this in mind she approached the family with her suggestion.

"Maji I wanted to say something to you and rest of the family."

She spoke up quietly when the family was sitting in the hall waiting for Ahem and Jigar to come back.

Kokila felt uneasiness at her vahu's request.

"Ha, Gopi vahu kaho," she said gently.

Gopi looked at her family and felt the pain of leaving them but put it aside to deal with later.

"Maji I think you should give Ahemji permission to marry Anitaben," she said quietly, her voice devoid of emotions.

Hetal gasped in shock and Rashi felt remorse seeing her sister in pain. She finally realized what her small act might end up costing her whole family.

Kokila's throat clogged with emotions and didn't know how to answer her vahu. She felt her husband place his hand on her shoulder for comfort and felt the tears threaten to overflow. Did they have a choice in this? May be its time to correct the mistakes of the past.

She nodded slowly then looked at Baa and Motabhai.

"Gopi vahu is right Baa. I hid the fact that Ahem and Anita had a relationship in the past. I made Ahem give up Anita to marry Gopi vahu. Now I realize it is best to correct what was done in the past. Ahem is still not over his past and this is the only way to save the family name." Kokila said with a heavy heart.

The family was too stunned to protest. Gopi was relieved and turned to go to her room but stopped when her maji called her.

"Gopi vahu I am not yet finished. I will grant your request but you will do as I say and not leave this house until I give you permission," she said firmly.

Gopi nodded her head. "Ji maji."

Ahem who just entered the room stood shocked at what he just heard and what his mom just agreed to. He moved to shout but stopped when he felt Jigar's hand on his arm. Jigar shook his head and Ahem nodded. He will wait until Umang showed up again to clarify things with everyone.

Present ...

Gopi woke up abruptly and looked around her. She must have dozed off while thinking about the events of the past week and half. She stood up and walked to her room for the last time. Later this morning everything will be settled and she will be free to leave.

Ahem had not slept a wink and looked up when Gopi walked in the room. He watched as she took out her clothes for the day and walked into the bathroom without glancing at her.

She had avoided him for three days now. She continued to serve him but she no longer went out of her way to show her care and affection. She did her duty and that is it. He realized he will have to work hard to earn her trust again. Gopi has closed herself and her heart off for him.

First he had to get rid of Umang and clear Anita's misunderstanding regarding his feelings for her then he will work on building Gopi's trust and his marriage. He has to put his heart and soul into earning her love.

The family had all gathered in the hall after breakfast to wait for Umang to show up. They all looked up when the doorbell rang and waited for Meethi to open the door and let whoever is at the door in, to their disappointment it was Dhawal and Kinjal and not Umang.

But right behind them they saw Umang also enter the house.

Kinjal gasped when she saw Umang.

"Umang you are here. I knew you would come back eventually. Why didn't you wait for me like you said you would? I knew my family had something to do with it," she said turning and glaring at her brother.

Umang laughed in her face.

"Kinjal you are very stupid. I had no intentions to wait for you. I only used you to take revenge on your brother. You were an easy target and you did everything I told you to do without question. You ordered the necklace and blamed it on that gawar, and you even stole your own jewelry to pay the blackmailer." He shook his head at her stupidity.

Kinjal staggered back in shock and would have fallen if Dhawal hadn't caught her.

"Why are you so shocked Kinjal?" Umang continued. "You didn't think I would really marry you did you?"

By now Anita had also come down and joined the group downstairs.

Ahem had enough of Umang and shouted in anger.

"Enough Umang, you have said and done enough now it is my turn to say and you to listen."

He looked around at his family but did not see Gopi at first then he spotted her standing away from everyone. He went to her and brought her to stand with his family. He then turned to Anita.

"Anita I need to clarify a few things with you. First I am sorry for the way things ended between us in the past. I hurt you badly and I cannot go back and undo what was done but hope you forgive me. I am sorry your marriage to Nilesh broke but I did not set out to break your marriage, what happened in the cloak room was an accident."

Anita shook her head in denial.

"What are you saying Ahem? If you didn't mean to break my marriage then why did you call me posing as Nilesh? Why did you bring me here?"

"I only called you as Nilesh to calm you down at the hospital, it wasn't supposed to continue. It was only for that one time but things went out of hand and I had to continue," Ahem explained.

"If you don't have feelings for me then why did you promise to come back to me? What about that goodnight call and I asked you for a kiss..," she trailed off in confusion.

Ahem glanced at Gopi and saw her flinch. He sighed another mark against him. He turned back to Anita.

"Anita I am happy with my family and my present. What we had is better left in the past. I have moved on with my life. You should do the same. I am sorry you misunderstood my guilt of the past as something more but I don't love you. I don't want to be with you. I only want to be with my wife Gopi," he said quietly but firmly.

Anita looked up at him and then glanced at Gopi. "No I don't believe you are happy with your wife. I saw with my own eyes the distance between the two of you."

Ahem shook his head. "No Anita I am happy with Gopi, I don't know what you saw but we are happy together."

He held his breath and hoped Gopi didn't say anything. He turned to Umang.

"As for your threats Umang, they don't effect us. You have no influence over Rajkot business community but you can give your best shot and try to ruin us. You will not get far."

Umang took a step towards Ahem but was stopped by Anita.

"Stop it Umang! You have done enough damaged in the past. It's time to let it go. Let's leave from here. I want to go back to my life and start again."

She turned back to the Modi family.

"I apologize for causing trouble when you were kind enough to take me in when I had no where to go."

She looked at Ahem one last time then turned and walked out of Modi Bhavan without looking back.

Kinjal let Dhawal lead her out of Modi Bhavan. No one stopped them. There was plenty of time to deal with Kinjal and her past actions.

Ahem turned towards his mom and Gopi. His mom nodded her head at him but Gopi turned and walked away without looking at him. His shoulders slumped in relief.

Ahem managed to dodge the latest crisis without sacrificing his family and Gopi. Now it was time to repair his relationship with his wife and work on making up not only for his past treatment of her but for the most recent one also.

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Shilpa and Swasthi that was fantastic, the way everything turned out and the idea of Rashi actually doing something good for gopi was fab!! Loved it to the core!! and also Ahem now will mend his relationship with Gopi! Well Done both of you!! 👏
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Shilpa and Swasthi...what a masterpiece you both have written! ⭐️👏 Speechless!
It was a revelation to see Gopi stand up to Ahem's anger and not look back at him...This time he betrayed her...not the other way around...he didnt trust her. It's these small misunderstandings in real life too that sometimes end making a mountain out of a mole hill.

Was a beautiful change to see Rashi be a sister to Gopi and help her become a wife in the true sense to Ahem-the green tea moments, tying the tie on him, buttoning his shirt...All these things we wish to see on screen soon...The OS has made them come true!

Kokila was Gopi's mother standing up for her daughter's truth and making Ahem realize his mistake that he let his anger get the better of his judgement and he hurt the very person who has become his life.

Ahem-Umang conflict leading to Gopi wanting to leave which led to Ahem clearing all the misconceptions between him and Anita and working towards fixing his relationship with Gopi and making her his again.

Beautiful...Teary eyed! Thank you both of you for this out of this world ten star OS! 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#4
really nice update both of u . loved the way it went . gr8 stuff
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Posted: 13 years ago
#5
What an OS👏. It acted like a balm to my wounded thoughts. Loved how you built the whole thing and kept the characters true to themselves. Everyone positive with very little negativity. Loved Gopi, Ahemji, Kokila, and even Anita in the end. Really liked how the whole family came together to resolve the problem. Even mota bhai and Parag bhai had their part😊. The OS is all what I am hoping happens in SNS. Kind of what I am expecting in an unexpected way.
Edited by aris22l - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#6
Now this is what i call creativity...simply superb OS...absolutely loved it!!
thanks so much both of you for writing such a beautiful piece...loved every bit of it!!i can't express how much i enjoyed reading this OS!!thanks again!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#7
really awesome...hav no words to explain
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Posted: 13 years ago
#8
👏 that was fab gals!!!!
A positive twist to the tale!!! Everyone is really nice except for umang.🤢 glad that you included kinjal getting to know his truth and also everyone knowing about the necklace fiasco!! Fantastic start to my sunday!! Loved that rashi was positive and actually felt bad for gopi.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#9
Shilpa when you and Swasthi get together and write any kind of OS, we all know it is going to be one fantabulous story and it is going to satisfy our need to see the story with so much drama and yet have an ending with nothing but love.

Thank you very much Shilpa and Swasthi for another successful and romantic OS. It is about time Ahem work hard at keeping his marriage intact. I also want to see Gopi doing everything in her power to show that Ahem is hers and only hers. She needs to step up to the plate and make sure everyone knows Ahemji belongs to her and she is the only one who has a right over him...

A stupendous, fantabulous, awesome, outstanding, mind blowing OS that can take you to lala land in no time at all...Thanks to two of the most talented writers on this forum. Your names along with other writers should be on some hall of fame for hidden talents 👏 ❤️ 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#10
amazin reali nyc n thanx 4 the pm...

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