SS: Finding My Love last part page 44 updated - Page 4

Fantastic Shilpa and Swasthi! 👏 👏 👏

Marvellous piece of work. I can see the serial going this way most probably. Well done Shilpa and Swasthi. thanks for the pm.

want the next part soon, good job as always!!!!!

wonderful os shilpa and swasthi...

Originally posted by: navyab

Well Shilpa & Swathi ...Let me tell u that I also had this feeling that in SNS Ahem will find Gopi only in the mandir & he will remember that she told Jigar that she always asks her kanaji to help her & then in your SS, I see it 😉 ...all of us are so tuned to Gohem 😛 !!!

Well it will be intresting to see how Ahem will fight against Gopi to make her believe in his love ...he will have to do it tactfully without being harsh on her & at the same time making her trust him !!!

Thank you so much Navyab. Yes we are also tuned into Gohem and this is why Swasthi and I both think we should relax and enjoy the Gohem moments.

We will see how more of Ahem's feelings as the newness of Anita's return wears off and he starts to realizes that he has never loved her.

Originally posted by: ANJ4

LOVE IT thanks for the PM ...

Thank you so much Anju.

Originally posted by: dipsy80

wow!👏...waiting for the next part!

Thank you so much. We will have the next part up soon.

Originally posted by: Vinder90

raelly good SS so far, cant wait for next part awesome work

Thank you so much.

Originally posted by: svtsns

Its very nice of u both swasthi and shilpa. Loved it. It will surely help us to deal with sns pace. Eagerly waiting for next part.

It is our pleasure, thank you for reading and commenting. We hope to keep bringing you positive updates to counteract the negativity of the show.

Originally posted by: gohem_ka

Wonderful Swasti and Shilpa behen. Your SS spoke my mind in many areas. I feel better.
A right SS at the right time. 👏👏

👏Waiting for the next part😊
Thanks for the PM😊

Thank you so much Kavya. It is our pleasure to bring you this track related SS as swasthi said in her comment it has been enjoyable to come up with our own take on Anita track, this our take on how it should happen. Glad you enjoyed the firs part.

Originally posted by: Xarina

Great start Shilpa and Swasthi. Can't wait for the next part.😊

Thank you so much Xarina. We will update soon.

Originally posted by: Aish3003

Wow... I mean... WOW

This is so beautiful!! Esp the last bit... What must Gopi have felt when she saw him standing there right next to her? I would have fainted.

Lovely... Please update soon... PM if you can. I would hate to miss this!!

Thank you so much Aish. I think she might be surprised at the fact that he came looking for her.
Added you to my friends list for PMs.

Originally posted by: tiny..TV

loved it.. beautifully written..i wish things could happen that way😊
update the next part soon..

Thank you so much, we will post the next part soon.

Originally posted by: X.Sisi94

Must say amazing SS shilpa and Swasthi

Great idea too make a ss together

Nice too see ahem figure out about his Feeling

I thought Gopi left MM when ahem was Looking for her

But he Finds His Gopi

Very intresting Begin Cant wait tooo read the Next part!

If you guys send pms when you Update Pleas add me too the list dont want too miss a part!😉

👏

Thank you so much, it has been a wonderful experience working on this SS together.

We hope to see SNS Ahem come to this conclusion as soon as possible and confess or make plans to confess and make Gopi believe that he only loves her.

I added you to my friends list for PMs.

Originally posted by: varshu27

terrific start shilpa and swasthi...cant wait to read the next part..

Thank you so much Varshu.

Originally posted by: kamjal

thanks for the pm and for such a wonderful collaborated story...it was aweeestanting and eagerly waiting for the next part and pls no delay as am impatient now😉

Thank you so much Kamjal. We will be updating soon.

Originally posted by: hana89

👏 Lovely ss cant wait for the next part.

Thank you so much, we will be updating soon.

Originally posted by: taniks

Great start it gives a different take on ahems disturbing behaviour in last epi , which I am really finding difficult to accept as anything but jealousy . Thanks this actually made me feel a little better . Beautifully written ,well done shilpa and swasthi,eagerly waiting next part

Thank you so much Taniks. Don't lose hope. Swasthi and I both feel it is too soon to tell what Ahem is feeling but for the moment his behavior is normal. It is happening so suddenly so he does not know how to react. We will soon see that he only loves Gopi.

Originally posted by: tamzin43

wow wow wow 👏 waiting for part 2 with eager eyes 👏

Thank you so much. We will be updating soon.

Originally posted by: -neela-

Thank You Shilpaben and Swasthi 🤗

You both have done such a fantastic job. How you have portrayed Ahem's feelings is what I believe Ahem in the show is feeling.

Eagerly awaiting the next part. Thank You for the PM 😊

Thank you so much Neela. Yes we also think his anger is related to lot of his own mistakes he made in the beginning of his marriage. We will be updating soon.

Originally posted by: Scarlet28

⭐️Thank you so much for this OS...Shilpa and Swathi. You have portrayed Ahem's emotions and confusion so well...like the your version on how SNS might go, hope to get an update soon...Cheers👏

Thank you so much Scarlet. We also wish to see this on the show and hope that we at least see some of it. We will be updating soon.

Originally posted by: gmjudv

we have some really talented writers in the forum. job done well. great SS. Thanks.

Thank you so much, we are glad you liked the SS.

Originally posted by: Justlikethat1

Lovely Swasthi and Shilpa.. 👏

It was a soothing start to a wonderful SS.. 😛 Aham is I believe still trying to place his feelings in the right slot even in SNS.. His anger, I think is justified too.. Your SS shows exactly why. Beautiful..👏 I am eagerly awaiting the next part.. the first part and I am smiling.. I am sure it will be better and better with two most wonderful writers on the forum collaborating... Hats off to your both😃

Thank you so much Harini.

Swasthi and I both think he is just been hit with this too suddenly. He was happily going on with his life and getting close to Gopi and suddenly his past comes in front of him so his anger and sadness is all natural reaction for the moment, but his feelings for Gopi has not changed suddenly either.

It has been an enjoyable experience to work with Swasthi on this SS, we are glad you liked it.

Originally posted by: Dhabu89

👏Shilpa and Swasthi...another collaboration that is very successful. This is a fantabulous SS and I cannot wait to read further on how this story progresses. My wish is for Rashi to be caught red handed and put in her place...but I guess that is always going to be wishful thinking.

Back to you guys, I always look forward to reading your stories and I am not disappointed. Thank you for this wonderful, mind blowing start to a new story. It was much needed for my sunday.You guys rock big time 👍🏼 Please PM me when ever you update...

And BTW I loved how you have described how Ahem was feeling and his struggle with his own anger and how he is coming to terms with what is reality and what never was...I hope the CV's read this and take some much needed notes 😊

Thank you so much Rupal.

I really wish for Rashi to get caught but I have put that down as a lost cause.

We have been discussing the current track and thought it would make a nice SS if we wrote out own take on how it should happen so here it is. It has been fun discussing the issues and coming up with what we want to see happen.

I wish our CVs came on to the forum, they would find many things interesting to read and make note on, including your take on the Gohem love story Rupal, you are the most experienced of all of us.😳😉