FF: yeh raaste hai pyaar ke// Journey Complete//

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Hi, this is my new ff..plz do share your opinions with me through your comments 😊

"Ever has it been that love knows not its own depth until the hour of separation."


- Khalil Gibran

Part1

Gopi !! we have reached home so please unfasten the seat belt and come out honey.

Gopi was brought back to her senses and looked at Ajay who had already opened the door for her. She got down and went inside her house with a faint pain in her heart. Something was pricking her...were they fragments of her heart which was broken by Ahem two years ago??. Her heart revisited its old haven of love..where she and Ahem had dreamt of a life together. Alas, not every dream comes true.

She thought that the flame of her love for Ahem would be extinguished once she married Ajay...and she believed that it happened...but today, when she saw Ahem at the party, she realized that her heart still has embers in it and the fire threatened to rekindle once again...

She went inside her bedroom and draped a blanket around her chest, hoping naively to extinguish the fire...nothing could put it off- neither the blanket nor her tears of pain, anguish and betrayal.

Ajay sensed that Gopi was in an emotional turmoil but failed to come up with a plausible cause. He said "Are you ok dear? Was anyone rude to you? Please tell me". Gopi claimed that she had a bad headache which was troubling her. Ajay offered to get her some medicines but Gopi refused by telling that she doesn't want to get into the habit of popping tablets for minor ailments. Ajay agreed and went to sleep. It was quite late in the night and Ajay soon fell asleep totally unaware of the feelings that have woken up in his wife's heart.

Gopi spent the whole night thinking about her past...Ahem and heartbreak were the dominant in it.

Flashback-

Gopi was the youngest among the three children of Jitu and Urmila Shah. Theirs was a happy family..she was spoilt rotten by her elder siblings Rashi and Dhaval. Jitubhai encouraged Gopi to study well and dream big. Gopi was groomed to be an achiever but it bothered Urmila that she wasn't interested in household chores. She was worried about how she would manage to fulfil her duties in her marital home. What if her inadequacies ruin her relations with her in-laws? No matter how well educated Gopi was her MIL would expect her to balance her career and family...and what if her in-laws refuse to let her go out and work? Gopi was career minded and such a situation was a perfect recipe for disaster.

Rashi got a rishta from Mehta family- it was for their elder son Abhay. The families met and finalized things while Gopi was out on some official work. The Mehta's saw Gopi during Rashi's engagement. Abhay's younger brother - Ajay was enamored by her beauty, wit and confidence...and confided in to his mom..his mom was also of the view that it would be desirable to bring in sisters as daughters in law of the family. It would reduce the incidences of bickering among them.

Mrs Sarala Mehta approached Urmila for Gopi's hand..Urmila felt as if all her worries were taken away from her. The Mehta family had liberal views and moreover Rashi would bail Gopi out whenever she managed to get into trouble. It seemed perfect and Urmila accepted the proposal with alacrity.

Gopi was shattered when her mom informed her about the proposal. Things were at a dangerous point. Rashi's wedding might be called off if she refused ... she couldn't do that to her didi...but she couldn't live without Ahem...

Gopi confided into Rashi and she advised her sis to talk to Ahem and make him talk to his and her parents. She urged her not to worry about her as she can manage to convince the Mehta family, as they were broad minded people...and that she is willing to break her alliance for Gopi's happiness.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Good going Vidhisha.. That is a great start👏
What did Aham tell Gopi? Did his family not accept her? Why did Gopi marry Ajay? Questions waiting to be answered😛 Super⭐️
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved ur FF!!! 😃 Good to see Rashi in a positive light! Can't wait for the next part!! ⭐️
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wonderful start to another lovely ff vidisha...cant wait to read more about ahem and gopis past...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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great start vidisha...cant wait to see why ahem and gopi did not marry...
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Really nice! Am glad rashi is in it but why no jigar?? Its torture to imagine them with someone else.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Fantastic start vidhisha 👏⭐️


So what did Ahem do to break her heart... did he break her heart to save Rashi's marriage... ? 😕 i know you won't give such a sweet Ahem in your OS... anyways will wait for ur take on the story ,,,,


loved it 👏
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👍🏼Beautiful start..so what happened between Gopi and Ahem that shes married to Ajay??.. waiting for next update 😊
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Amazing Start Cant wait tooo read the Next part!
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Part-2

Rashi and Gopi decided to act on their own without telling anybody. Gopi called Ahem on his mobile but couldn't reach him… in sheer desperation she sent emails to him, hoping that he would see it as he was in the habit of opening the inbox quite frequently….days passed and yet there was no response.

Rashi asked her whether they could meet his sibling or cousin and inform them of the situation she was in..Gopi shook her head and told that she doesn't know them and Ahem's family is very orthodox and approaching them in Ahem's absence won't work.

"Didi, I had urged Ahem to disclose our relationship to his parents but he refused by telling that we should wait for his sister Kinjal to get married… This was after Yash had come to see you and chose me instead, remember how Mom acceded to his request…and I shouted at him by telling that I reject the Man who is blind enough to reject my sister…when the fury died down I realized that Mom is very keen on getting me married and I may not be able to delay things, so I told Ahem everything…….Guess he never wanted to marry me didi, he made some excuse then and is ignoring me now".

"Dil chota nahi karte Gopi…I am sure he is too busy to check the mails"

"No didi, a lot of days have passed and this means only one thing…Gopi started sobbing and Rashi rested her head on her lap….she was at a loss…..Ahem was in America- and he wasn't responding….God knows why is he doing this to Gopi…how to interpret the situation?

Urmila rushed into the girl's bedroom and was bursting with joy. She informed them that Mrs.Mehta had requested her to allow her sons to take them out…and then she realized that Gopi was crying and asked her the reason. Rashi protected her by telling that Gopi is crying because she is sad that she has to leave this house. Urmila laughed at her and said that they can meet frequently as they are going to be in the same city..Moreover you'll have Rashi with you..The Mehtas are cultured people. Stop worrying you silly girl.

Saying this Urmila went to the cupboard and asked Rashi to wear her blue-silk salwar kameez..Gopi was to wear a heavily embroidered Maroon salwar-kameez. The girls were relieved once their mother went outside. Rashi patted Gopi's head and comforted her to sleep.

The girls were to meet the Mehta boys today. Gopi braced herself to the fact that she has to put up this pretence till Ahem responds favourably. Urmila took special interest in her daughter's dress and make-up..Dhaval was amused, he sang songs and made faces to tease his sisters.

The Mehta brothers soon came and greeted the elders. Urmila and Jitu looked at them approvingly. They had all the hallmarks of well brought-up men..and they looked fabulous in formals. Rashi threw frequent glances at Gopi to ensure that she was calm.

I was a full fledged date and the brothers were chivalrous in their behavior. They took them to the movies, played games at a gaming zone, treated them to lunch…well pretty much everything to break the ice between them and communicate freely- an essential point in all marriages esp the arranged ones.

They were exposed to the jovial side of them..Ajay teased Abhay by telling Rashi that Abhay bhaiya could barely hide his happiness on seeing his neelam pari….Abhay got back by asking him whether he wasn't happy with his red rose? Ajay replied by telling that Gopi wasn't a red rose…cupid's arrow struck his heart and he had dyed her dress red with the blood from his heart…All laughed (Gopi included), Gopi got scared to find out the extent to which Ajay was interested in her…it could mean that she couldn't marry Ahem without souring her family's relations with the Mehtas….and as a result Rashi won't be able to marry Abhay. Gopi suddenly felt that she was being too selfish. She decided to accept Ajay with a clear heart if Ahem doesn't respond to her.

Once they were out of the mall the guys decided to amuse themselves at the girls' expense. They quizzed them about their full names. Rashi told it was Abhay and Ajay Mehta…her answer was greeted by laughter…it was only after a few minutes that Abhay cooled down and told her that their names had been changed by their numerology-obsessed Grandpa when they were in primary school. Their official names were Jigar and Jatin, their mom still prefers to use the old names though.

The day went by with much mirth and enjoyment. Gopi and Rashi had a conversation as soon as the guys dropped them home. Rashi asked her whether she was all right..Gopi told her about the decision she had taken and recollected the time she had spent with Ahem.

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