OS: The Morning After Holi

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angelirebelli

@angelirebelli

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Super take on the morning after Swasthi... I love the fact that GoHem are looking forward and not holding bac... 👏

Great OS.. Do write more 😊

Great VM yet again S... Fab choice of song n scenes... 👍🏼

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Nihira-fan

@Nihira-fan

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

oh wow!!such a beautiful OS!!!amazingly well written!i wish CVs would come up with such a wonderful ideas!!thanks swasthi...loved it!

please do write some more!

@shilpa,loved your vm...i love that song,one of my fav song ...also loved all the scenes you chose and well edited!

thanks both of you for giving us wonderful wknd treat!!

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swasthi

@swasthi

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: famzii05
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Fantastic Swasthi!! very nicely written...👏

the train of thoughts from Ahem are perfect and the couple do belong together... aww... it was soo nice... loved it!!

Fabulous VM as well Shilpa... loved it!!

well done Swasthi and Shilpa!! 👏

Thanks so much.

Glad to read that you found it an enjoyable read Fahima.

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Ashwin Maharaj

@ShaunSA

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Amazing job swasthi! 👏

Hopefully the scene goes something similar to your OS. 😃

And now to watch the VM! 😎

Woo Hoo! VM was just as outstanding! Great work Shilpa! 👏

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Nandita / Tina

@5cents

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Swasthi, awesome and beautiful👏...ABS LOVED your LIMPID style of writing!! I wish Cvs followed it...crisp. clean, to the point confession😳.

Shilpa's Vm was icing on the cake. Very beautifully made & flows well with the story. ⭐️THANK YOU🤗

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@Arnisha

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

nyc 1 lovely OS i reali do hpe sumthing like this happns n lovely VM... 👍🏼

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Amal Aziz

@-AmalAziz-

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

well done Swasthi and Shilpa... loved it 👍🏼

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taniks

@taniks

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Wow swasthi that was incredibly beautiful , loved it

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swasthi

@swasthi

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: abbay
👏Awesome !!!!!! here a thumbs up👍🏼!!!!!!!! i hope something positive happens in the show too😎 otherwise our gopi be again heartbroken🥺!!!!!!!!

I would like to ask one thing that did last yr she remember after coming out of bhang effect that what she has said to ahem😕?????? plz reply for sure😳!!!!!!1 thank u🤗!!!!!

Aww shilpa awesome work👍🏼!!!!! the best part of the vm was the end⭐️!!!!! how beautifully u have embedded the promo in the vm 👏!!!!!!! hatsss offf!!!!!!!👏

Glad to read that you enjoyed the reading the OS.

Last year the day after Holi Gopi did go up to him in their room and apologise to him but he pretended that there wasn't anything that she had done.