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Posted: 13 years ago
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😡 you are plotting to throw my rashi out of the house! Dhishum dhishum but now tat i ve a chance with jigar 😳 am in dreamland already so by the time i come back i think rashi will not be in MM 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sorry guys for taking so long to update. After Vibha did some of her dhishum
dhishum...I had a long recovery. But I am back and here is my story...
I hope you like it Vibha...next time at least warn me before starting to throw punches 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ok guys this is the last part so it may be looonngg...Sorry about it...
Forgive me my mistakes...

In the middle of the night, Mona got a text from Nazim begging her to come and meet him. She refused to come to the room. But she says, I will meet you upstairs in the terrace. And so it was agreed. Vibha was sleeping and so she quietly crept out of the room and went to see Nazim. And when she was at the door she saw it was wide open and wondered how he knew where it was. She saw him standing near the gazebo and went to him and asked him how he got here before her. He said he had run into Gopi and asked her the way. Mona thought smart...She said what did you want to talk to me about. Nazim said can we start by being nice to me. Mona said give me one good reason. Nazim went to her and Mona went on alert. Nazim stood in front of her and took her hand in his and spoke from his heart. Nazim said Mona, that night when I told you I loved you, I was not lying. But Mona, I have never been in love before. And you are like a complete package and I got scared that I would loose myself in you. He put his finger on her lips when Mona was about to say something...he said let me finish first. He continued, Mona you are beautiful, smart and can get a man to blush with that mouth of yours. And you stole my heart the first time I saw you. I even told my family about you and they were so eager to meet you. Then after that night and the following week were so amazing, I thought there is something wrong with this picture. Nothing can be this perfect. And it took me this long Mona, and a ear full of lectures from my family to realize the only bad part about our relationship was my lack of faith in our love. So please Mona, I beg you...saying this Nazim got on his knees and said...please take me back. I love you and I want to marry you. Mona was left speechless. She was looking at him and he slowly let go of her hand and spread them for her to go into and hug him. And this was something Mona could not resist. She grabbed hold of him and cried into his shoulders. All she heard him say was I love you and I am sorry for hurting you darling, I promise it will never happen again. It took a while for Nazim to calm Mona down and then he slowly moved her enough to look at her and capture her lips with his. And when they met it was like fireworks all over again. Nazim had missed her so much. And this felt like it was where they belonged. In each others arms, loving each other. They stayed there under the stars till almost 2 in the morning. Then Mona who had not allowed Nazim to take their kiss to the next level, said we better go to bed. Tomorrow the show begins. Nazim who did not want to let her go reluctantly agreed. And so they left to their respective rooms. Mona walked into her room and was ambushed by Vibha...she wanted details and she wanted them NOW. And so Mona told her, about the marriage proposal and the reunion. Vibha was beyond ecstatic for her friend. After the two girls caught up they went to bed.

For the next week, Kokila had noticed that Hetal was more distant than ever and she knew that witch DIL of hers was the reason. Kokila tried to talk to Hetal, but Hetal was not having it. And so Gopi convinced her MIL to just let it be and that she would come around when the truth was out. Even Gopi was having trouble believing what Rashi is capable of, but when she had overheard the conversation between Rashiben and Mami, she was convinced and she went and told this to Mona. Gopi wished Devarji would have someone like Mona as his wife. but Gopi also knew that Mona was taken and from the looks of it she and the Ahem look alike were lovers. She was happy for them. Then there was Mona's friend Vibha. Gopi loved that name for some reason. And she also saw the Vibha apparently found Devarji fascinating. Gopi had her mind running at making sure Devarji would end up with her after the whole Rashiben problem was taken care of. Ahem and Nazim came downstairs dressed almost alike. And Ahem announced that Nazim would be coming to the office from now on. Since he was family, he had the right to know all about it and that from now on he would also work there. Jigar was all too happy. He just got up from his chair at the dinning table and hugged his Ahem bhai and said Bhai, you always make the right decision. Ahem then said Jigar, your position is also changing because of Nazim joining our company, but we will talk about that later. But you need to know that when you get to your office, I want you to pack up as it is going to be Nazim's office from now on. I have made other arrangements for you. Jigar was a little shocked but smiled and said jee Bhai. Hetal and Rashi had been pissed at the turn of events, and before Hetal could speak up, Chirag spoke up and said Nazim, why don't we go down to the car dealership tomorrow and get you a new car. Nazim smiled and said no thank you kakaji, I have my own car. Chirag patted him on his back and said good. All the men left for work.

Nazim was to only pretend to be working along with Ahem, but since Ahem had found out he was also an MBA graduate, he offered him a job and Nazim said ok for now and we will see how things go after all the fiasco at your home is over. They shook on it and went to work. Nazim was a fast learner. He overlooked projects and handled some of the bigger projects for the company. About a month into this game, Vibha decided to go and visit Nazim and ask him about how they are planning to oust that Rashi girl. Vibha had some stake in it. She and Jigar had become fast friends. And she was sure he was attracted to her as she was to him. And when Vibha got there, Jigar was sitting in the front of the office and she was over the moon to see his face first. Jigar got up and greeted her and welcomed her to the company. Vibha said she was here to see Nazim about something and Jigar said they all went to some business luncheon. Before Vibha had a chance to pout, Jigar offered to take her to lunch. They went to a nice cozy restaurant and got a corner table. Jigar loved spending time with Vibha. No one in the family knew but Jigar had seen the true face of Rashi. He kept quite so that his family would not be broken about his broken marriage. One day jigar had gone to pick Rashi up from RPN, he was early and so he decided to surprise his wife. And the conversation he heard from their mouths had him go week in the knees. He could not believe any one could be so selfish. He also found out Kaki and Kinjal were Kagdi...And he also found out about how they had set the fire before the marriage, so Rashi could rescue his mom and look good in their eyes. The thought of loosing his mom for some stupid kalkari was the last straw. He wanted out of this marriage and he was looking for it. He found a friend in Vibha. Even though he did not tell her anything about the state of his union, he felt she had some idea. And crazy as it may be, he was attracted to her. And why not, She was tall but not too tall, and she was well educated in business and had been on her own since she was young. Her parents lived far away and she sent them money on a daily basis to help support them. While eating lunch, Vibha asked about his new position...Jigar went all sad and said so far I am just answering phones and looking at some paperwork for a new business they are starting in a few months. Vibha said well that good that they trust you enough to ask you to over look. Jigar said I wish it was that, but I was asked to look at mistakes and make corrections. Vibha didn't know what to say and so she just said sorry Jigarji...and then caught her self and said I mean Jigar. Jigar caught that slip of the tongue and found it flowed so sweetly when she said it. He liked it and damned it to hell he was falling for her and he was falling for her hard. Now what was he to do. He had a wife who did not love him, and this girl who was perfect and he could not have due to his marriage. And divorce in the Modi was not an option. What to do. He silently sent up a prayer to Khanaji asking to make sure Vibha always stayed in his life, even if it meant only as a friend. He did not want to loose her.

At home, Kokila had come across some papers and she knew what that mother/daughter duo were unto and so she decided to show them to a lawyer. One day she took Mona and went to visit a lawyer. The lawyer confirmed that with these papers signed, the house would then belong to this girl named here Mrs. Rashi Jigar Modi. Kokila had her suspicions, but to hear it was like a kick in the stomach. She did not know what to do. And when they were about to leave, And Kokila turned around she saw Mota Bhabhi standing at the door with a shocked expression on her face. Kokila knew she had heard everything. She went to Mota Bhabhi and held her hand and brought her in to sit in the lawyers office and requested the lawyer to bring something to drink for her. The lawyer, who was on the Modi payroll did as he was told. And he came back with some cold drink. Hetal looked at Kokila and saw Kokila look at her with so much concern that Hetal knew she had trusted the wrong person. But before the lawyer had the chance to give Hetal the juice, Hetal got up from the chair and folded her hand towards Kokila and said please forgive me...I don't deserve it, but I am so sorry. You always did take care of everything so I had less to do and all I saw was what Rashi was showing me. And Kokila held Hetal's hand and said Mota Bhabhi, please don't embarrass me by folding your hands...I am younger than you. They hugged and went home to confront Rashi with the lawyer. And when they got home, there was a man talking to Rashi. When they inquired who the man was Rashi said it was her lawyer and now with Ahem jiju's signature, this house belongs to her and she wanted them all out. Just then the men came home and Jigar brought Vibha with him. They had spent the whole day together. Vibha had joined him at office and stayed and talked to him and helped where she could. Spending time with him was like a dream come true. Jigar went to Rashi and said what is going on here. The whole family gathered around Jigar. Ahem saw that his kaki and mom were back to normal and was grateful for little miracles. He held Gopi's hand secretly to make sure she was still his and that sealed the deal, his family was all here. Rashi yelled at Jigar saying, you need to stop being so mean to me. I now own this house and I want you all out of here. Kokila said how did you come about owning this house? Rashi showed them papers that clearly had Ahem's signature on it and it said Ahem had signed the house to Rashi starting today. Rashi smirked an evil smirk and said Mummyji, I knew you were going to find out about Kakiji today. So I had to expedite my plans. You see I could care less what you people do or don't do. I only care about my well being. Jigar was so riled up, he wanted to go and hit her, but he felt small hands hold him back. And when he looked he saw Vibha hold his hand and beg him to let it go with her eyes. The look was enough to stop Jigar in his tracks and smiled at Vibha and squeezed her hand. Ahem then said to the other lawyer, let me see those papers...the lawyer handed them over and when Ahem saw it, he said Mom this is my signature, but how did she get it. Rashi smiled and said Its for me to know and for you all to never find out...Urmila came downstairs in one of Kokila's sarees and said, Dikra, these people are still here. Kokila didn't know what to do...she wanted to slap Urmilaben for touching her things and yet at the same time she wanted to laugh because Urmila ben was stupid enough to wear her blouse...which are too big on her. Ahem then handed the papers back to the other lawyer and said to their family lawyer, do you have the legal document I asked you to find. Their lawyer went into his briefcase and pulled out a document that clearly states, that to make this house in the name of someone else, each and every family member had to sign it. Then Ahem turned to Rashi and said I don't know how you got my signature, but guess what...it is meaningless. Maybe you should have dug a little deeper and found this document as well...Ahem then smirked and said we are the Modi's and we have had to deal with the likes of you for a long time. We are not morons...we know how to take care of our own. Then he turned to Hetal and said Kakaji, I have a confession to make. I was going to gift Jigar a company of his own and that is why I asked him to empty his office. Nazim and I are not really brothers...you see, we just happen to look alike and Mom thought of using this to our advantage to get to her (pointing to Rashi) truth. Jigar turned to Ahem and said Bhai a company for me. Ahem said yes Jigar, you are ready and we need another company to handle the advertising aspects of the business and that is where you seem to flourish and so I decided to gift you the company. Jigar said but Bhai, I was only proofreading those company documents and I have no clue what is going on. Ahem said by proofreading you know what is going on...you had to read each and every word, right? Jigar nodded and said yes Bhai. Jigar felt another squeeze on his hand and could only turn around smile and squeeze back. Rashi and Urmila were fuming and Rashi turned to the lawyer and said are they telling the truth. The lawyer was looking nervously and said yes they are. Kokila phoned the police and said to come to MM. But Mona asked to cancel that. Kokila had come to trust Mona and so told the police to never mind. Mona turned to Nazim and said do you want to stay in this town and work with Modi family? Nazim said it is a good job and the pay isn't bad either...but we have our own life back in New York and we should go back. Mona agreed and said thank you so much for everything. They all hugged and went to pack. Ahem turned to his Mom and said what are we going to do about these two. Kokila smiled and said Mona is going to give them a ride to their destination. Urmila and Rashi smiled thinking at least we are not going to jail. We will go back to RPN and rethink what to do. And when Nazim and Mona came down they again hugged and did their pranam to the elders with a promise to come to the wedding and left taking UrShi with them... They drove to Mumbai with the UrShi pair complaining all the way. It got so bad that Nazim had to put scarfs around their mouth to shut them up. And when they got to Mumbai, Mona found her boat ready for departure and all four got aboard. Leaving the Mumbai port, Mona turned to UrShi and said there is this small island near the florida keys that I think you will find amusing...There is no one there, you two will be alone and you can do whatever you like to each other...

A week later, at the Modi Mansion there was a big celebration, an engagement party of Jigar and Vibha. And Jigar made sure to invite his best friend Dr. Tejas Patel to the party. They had not seen each other since his Bhabhi's accident. Since then Tejas had become like family. And when the party was in full gear, Tejas walked in with his beautiful wife in his arms. He came and introduced Jabeen to the family and said they met at a medical convention...Ahem and Gopi were happy that Jigar had found his true love...They were happy to be together in love and vowed to never go to bed angry. Kokila forgave Hetal, but the guilt was too overwhelming for Hetal and so Hetal decided to make it up to Kokila any and every chance she got. Nazim and Mona were to be married in a month in India and so the whole family had decided to go and enjoy the wedding. MM was finally back to normal. Except to this day no one had heard from UrShi. And to everyones amazement no one complained either...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
One word. Excellent. You have excelled yourself Rupal. Well done.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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what a perfect way to end it...fantastic rupal...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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What the!?

KYA!? Hatam bhi hogaye!? You can't end it! Me and Tejas just entered, Shaadi and SR abhi bhi bakhi hai!🤣😳

Jokes aside, Brilliant Rupal, Loved it, Love how most members of the forum are in here, Its classic and funny!😉

La La my Tejasji!😳 Atleast someone remembers me😃

Now let me tell you the real story, Kya hai na, Tejasji and i were in the hospital, I slipped on a banaba peel and than the next moment i was in Tejas's arms having an eyelock, Hai hai, My heart went dhak dhak and...😳😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: CHIKA784

What the!?


KYA!? Hatam bhi hogaye!? You can't end it! Me and Tejas just entered, Shaadi and SR abhi bhi bakhi hai!🤣😳

Jokes aside, Brilliant Rupal, Loved it, Love how most members of the forum are in here, Its classic and funny!😉

La La my Tejasji!😳 Atleast someone remembers me😃

Now let me tell you the real story, Kya hai na, Tejasji and i were in the hospital, I slipped on a banaba peel and than the next moment i was in Tejas's arms having an eyelock, Hai hai, My heart went dhak dhak and...😳😆

🤣 ur hilarious
what the what the...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: AdaaNazArshi

🤣 ur hilarious
what the what the...


No Ayesha, Its how Khushi said it:

"WHAT THE WHAT THE WHAT THE WHAT THE!🤣" :P
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Originally posted by: CHIKA784



<font size="2" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">No Ayesha, Its how Khushi said it:</font>

<font size="2" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">"WHAT THE WHAT THE WHAT THE WHAT THE!🤣" :P</font>

aye same thing
What the what the what the what the
One of thw beat dialogues ever in show it crackd me up

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