Pirate in the MM SS updated page 5 last part

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This is a story influenced by two people..One a character and the other is one of our member who wishes to be invisible😃 But I am not very good at this type of stories so please forgive me my mistakes during this story telling

The MM was quite after all the guests had left. Holi had been a very busy time for everyone in MM. Here we have UrShi, who are raking in the stupidest woman in the world...better known as Hetal. On the other hand is her son, Jigar, who wouldn't be able to stand up to his wife on the grounds he is a fool in love. Then we have Kokila Modi, she tries to clear misunderstandings...to no avail. She stands for truth, justice and LOVE😊
Today at the MM, the most amazing thing has happened. The two elder couples of the younger generation have finally fallen in love but are still not telling each other. It seems that Mr. Ahem Modi has found his true love😳😉

There is one person who is not related to the Modi's or the Shah's. She has been watching all this atttyachar happening right under their noses and is now fed up with it and has made it her mission to expose the guilty and get justice for the innocent. She just needed a cover to enter the MM and become a guest of theirs. And the rest would be a piece of cake. She pondered till her brain could ponder no more. She paced till she had worn a hole in her shoes. She bit her nails till there were none. She finally came up with a plan. She was going to become a friend of Jigar's and enter the house as an unexpected guest. Jigar had a huge heart and he was the easiest to manipulate. There was only one problem...Our little guest was lusting after Mr. Ahem Modi and now she has found he is no longer available...What to do😲 Well we will pass that bridge when we come to it...

And so she spent the next 2 months and made plans to be a guest of the Modi's by holi. And it worked. She had become friends with Jigar. And now when she was in need of a place to stay, Jigar had offered her a room at his family's estate. At first our guest played hard to get, but then Hetal insisted she come and stay as long as needed. This is all the prompting our guest needed and so she went to the MM on the morning of Holi, and rang the door bell. She waited there with her back pack. She was a unique kind of girl. She was a sight to be seen. She had long hair in dreadlocks. She had the sweetest smile. She had long pedicured nails and virtually no makeup. She was what one would call a natural beauty. Her long legs were covered by jeans so tight, it looked to have been painted on. Her jewelry was a little on the heavy side. Not that she wore expensive jewelry...no no no...she wore a lot of it😆 Her bangles jingled every time her hands moved. She had a ring practically on each finger...there was a ruby ring on her pointy finger of her left hand...a large butterfly ring on her middle finger of her left hand. A eternity band on her ring finger of the left hand and a small ring with her initials on her pinky...in a filigree setting it read J.S...On both her thumbs she had gold bands. Her right pointy she wore a ring with a skull and cross bones on it. Very unique. Her right middle finger held a she wore a ruby eternity band. And her right ring finger she had a large ring that looked like it was a class ring of her old boyfriend. And on her Pinky she had the initials A.D.

When Meethi opened the door and saw who was in front of her, she almost screamed, but held it in and squealed for Mota Bhabhi that her guest was here. When the whole house hold came to meet the guest, they all had their jaw drop to the floor. The girl in front of them was nothing less than Captain Jack Sparrow...female version. Jigar, who was the only one who was not shocked came up front and asked her to come in. And lo and behold her name was introduced to the family as Jackie Sparrow and she owned a boat. She was unable to live on it as it needed to be repaired. Jigar had met her in Mumbai, where her ship was to be fixed and Jigar invited her to come to Rajkot and stay with his family.

What are the intentions of Jackie? Is she really here to make or break the family? She wants justice and she believes in family harmony...but is she going to be able to allow Ahem to pursue his wife, or is she going to create a ruckus and take Ahem away from Gopi? Intresting questions...stay tuned😃

I am only going to continue this story in two conditions...One if everyone like it and another if the other person who is the reason I am writing this approves of this. There may be changes made. If you want to see it go some other direction, please pm me. I have no problem taking advice😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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That was fantastic go ahead with it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Different from ur usual style but nonetheless still amazingly well written rupal . I wanna see u go on , but here's a request to that shy but sweet girl this story is for , expose everybody u want to but leave Ahem wud Gopi poor girl loves him so much and she knows how to make his green tea and black tea so he is happy wud her.lol , but seriously pls continue I wanna see how js exposes the witches.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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quite an excellent start rupal...waiting for the update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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great start.. very unique!

continue soon 😊
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Well this is interesting. I like it, but could we not separate Gohem please.

Very well written Rupal, it is different from your usual style, but I am sure I am going to love reading it. Please continue soon.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Good start Rupal. Interesting. Is she going to make or break favourite jodi. Please update soon. How does the member concerned feel?😊
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Originally posted by: Xarina

Good start Rupal. Interesting. Is she going to make or break favourite jodi. Please update soon. How does the member concerned feel?😊




the member concerned wants me to break the favorite jodi and she have a hot and steamy love affair with Ahem...so I am contemplating of either writing and then going into the witness protection program or just go the easy way out and get a sex change...but the second option may be hard on husband😆 for more reasons than one😕
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Originally posted by: Dhabu89




the member concerned wants me to break the favorite jodi and she have a hot and steamy love affair with Ahem...so I am contemplating of either writing and then going into the witness protection program or just go the easy way out and get a sex change...but the second option may be hard on husband😆 for more reasons than one😕

@bold. 😆 He would be surpised. 😆 Break the jodi?😭 Look just give her Nazim (Nazma forgive me) and leave Ahem and Gopi as they are.😆

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