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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow! Bravo aham did it on a car hood!!!
Wow rupal its hot and steamy
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dhabu89





Hey love, don't give out my story😲I am going a different route, only a little

I was kidding on
I do nt rven knw ur story
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The next morning during breakfast, Mona decided to ask Ahem some questions regarding himself. She asked him if he has ever been to the US. Ahem says no, he studied here itself and that he has not been out of Gujarat. Mona finds this information a little off. She wondered could there be two of the same man? I mean he walks and talks like Nazim, and yet there are so many differences...She decided to call an old friend of hers who would know where Nazim is currently. After a few more questions she felt this was not her Nazim and that he was Ahem the husband of Gopi and the heir to the Modi Industries. When Mona was in her room she heard voices outside and went to the door to see who was talking. It was Rashi who was talking to her mother. She could tell, because, every two minutes Rashi would complain on the phone saying Mummy, I am nothing but a naukar in this house. They treat me like Meethi. Mona could not help but laugh...She had been watching Gopi doing the breakfast and the cleaning up afterwards. She also observed Gopi taking laundry from everyones room for wash. The whole time Rashi had spent trying to avoid Hetal auntie and Koki auntie. And if she was tired was because she was too busy trying to hide from housework.

In the afternoon, Mona called her friend and asked about Nazim, and to her amazement was informed that he had just flown into India and was also asking about her. Her friend had given Nazim the address to the MM and he should be there by tonite. So Mona ran outside her room and told her temporary family she had a friend coming over and that if it is ok. The family was overjoyed and said any friend of yours is a friend of ours...Mona thanked them and yet at the same time did not know if she should warn them or not. Living in this house for less than a day has shown her if you want anything accomplished, you need to seek the help of Koki auntie. Everyone else there are basically to fill air space. Ahem and Gopi seem to be able to bear the burden of responsibilities, but their love seems to be starting new...which was fine with her as long as it wasn't her love, Nazim. She went to Koki auntie and told her about the love of her life and showed her a picture of her man. At first Koki auntie was a little upset thinking it was her son, then when she showed Koki auntie pictures of them together at Liberty Island...where Lady Liberty resides...Koki auntie calmed down. Then she went on to say that was the person who was coming her tonite. Koki understood and smiled and said lets play a little trick shall we. Mona at first didn't understand, but after a little talk with Koki auntie, she was only to happy to help. She called Nazim, who for the first time in months answered her call and told him she was upset with him for not keeping in touch, but she needed his help when he comes over tonite. And explained to him what needs to be done. Kokila and Mona separated...they needed to start playing their game. Kokila had told her Gopi vau about their plans. She did not want Gopi vau to be caught off guard. After so many trials and tribulations her son and DIL were finally a real couple and she was not willing to risk anything. For Kokila getting the dirt out of her house and keeping her house intact was more important than anything. And if in the process she could help such a sweet and beautiful girl like Mona, then all the more better.

Nazim didn't know what had come over him that he agreed to do as Mona wanted. He went to her friends house and picked her up and apparently she was told of everything. And when they came to the Modi Mansion, they all of a sudden started to have second thoughts. But Nazim was here to win back his love. A love he lost because of his own insecurities. Mona was everything a man would want. She was beautiful, had a hell of a figure and was above all the only woman he had ever loved. But that feeling made him so scared that he ran away breaking all ties with her and now he was here to win her back. Even if it meant doing this damn drama for her. He would do it...But damn if he was going to let his lady love slip from under his fingers. They rang the door bell and Mona was the one to answer. And at the first sight, Mona hugged him like nothing had ever gone wrong. Nazim took the opportunity to hold her and say sorry for leaving, but I promise to never leave you again if you give me one more chance. All this was said in her ear while hugging her and that made Mona mad as hell. She pushed him and eyed him in the sexy way he found irresistible. It took all his strength to not pull her to him and kiss her on her lips and make love to her. That would have to wait for some other time. They were led into the main hall where the family had gathered and there he stood. Ahem Modi. His look alike and his partner in crime for tonite. He could not believe how alike they both were. And that girl next to him must be his wife. She kept looking at him with gooey eyes and he did the same with her. There is no way they are related...No brother of his would marry such a typical Indian girl...But then to each his own I suppose.

FB...

After the talk that Kokila and Gopi had, Koki left there to go to the main hall and start her part of the drama. She went to the sofa and sat there where she knew any minute now Mota Bhabhi would be coming to make tea for Baa. As soon as she heard Hetal come downstairs, Kokila started to cry in soft cries that were meant to look like she was hiding her tears. Mota Bhabhi came to her and, even though at first hesitant, went to Kokila and put her hand on her shoulders and asked what happened. Kokila said Mota Bhabhi, I just got a call from the doctor that delivered Ahem and said that I had two babies and that the nurse stole one of my twins. She apparently could not have a child and so she took mine. Mota Bhabhi, you and Mota Bahi were in America and Ahem ke Papa was in some poetry convention. I had to have a emergency C-section and so even I did not know about all this. Mota Bhabhi, the doctor said the nurse was admitted into the same hospital and told the truth before dying and that the doctor sent my son over here tonite to meet us. Mona came running to her...Kokila thought she was good...too good. Mona said Auntiji all this is happening and I am being selfish, let me cancel my friends visit. Before Kokila could protest, Mona had her phone out and had canceled her friends visit. Mota Bhabhi got up and went and called the whole family home from work and said we needed to come home right away. And when everyone was gathered they were told the story. Gopi told Ahem to go upstairs and change. And when he went upstairs, Gopi followed and told him the truth so he would not be emotionally attached and also do his part. Ahem was not liking doing all this drama, but one look from his wife, and he would have jumped off the tallest building. Ahem said I will do anything if I get my prize now. Gopi knew he just wanted to be kissed and so she shyly agreed and so the game was on...and this game was to be called OUT WITH THE EVIL AND IN WITH THE GOOD...

Back to reality...

When Nazim had walked in, Ahem had to take a double take. But then one look at his wife by his side and he knew he had to play the part. Ahem walked upto Nazim and put his hand out and said hi I am Ahem Modi. Nazim also introduced himself and then he and his friend were asked to sit down. Kokila came to Nazim and said my god you both look so alike. Nazim did not know this lady and so Ahem reading his face said Mom give him some room and give him time to take this all in. Nazim got the hint this was his so called Mom and he bent and took her ashirwaad and then he and Kokila sat down together. Chirag and Parag were left with their mouths gaping. And Hetal knew what was going to happen and she did not like it. But it seemed her son could have cared less about all this. Jigar had gone and shook hands with Nazim and said pleased to meet you and I hope we get a chance to get to know each other better. Nazim shook his hands and just nodded. After the initial conversation, they all had dinner and then Nazim was shown the other guest room. He was not happy. He thought he would get some time alone with Mona, but at the same time maybe it was safe to sleep elsewhere tonite. Their friend Vibha, decided to spend the night with Mona so they could talk all night. Vibha was already smitten with Jigar. She thought he was quite handsome and his smile seemed to brighten up the whole room. All were settled in their room except Hetal and Rashi. Rashi had called Urmila and told her of the happenings at MM and Urmi had given her strict instructions on how to light a fire under her MIL. And so while sitting in the kitchen, in the pretense of making hot milk for Jigar, Rashi started her plan. She kept telling Hetal that now that there were two older boys, Jigar was going to get nothing out of this whole fiasco. And she further told Hetal, now Koki is going to rule the Modi Industries and MM. And she kept telling Hetal how they were going to be left to just pick up after the older boys, while Jigar would only be a water boy for them...


Next part last...promise.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Good update. Will come back to edit.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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he he nice update again...well done rupal!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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fantastic rupal...so vibha made an entrance too did she...loving it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Rupal ...loved all the 3 parts...somehow I missed the story...finally got to read it today 😉 So Rashi's truth is going to come out !!!
Both look a likes have different tastes in women 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: navyab

<font color="#993399">Hey Rupal ...loved all the 3 parts...somehow I missed the story...finally got to read it today 😉So Rashi's truth is going to come out !!!</font>

<font color="#993399">Both look a likes have different tastes in women 😛</font>

hahaha thats soo true
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Posted: 13 years ago
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roopal you gave a nice twist to the story. naz and aham as twins .
why do you want to end it?
i like the story very much.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: shruthi2010

roopal you gave a nice twist to the story. naz and aham as twins .
why do you want to end it?
i like the story very much.




😳Shruthi, you seem to have more confidence in me than I have. I am doing this story for that one person and I cannot wrap my brain around how to go from here...but I have a great idea, you are welcome to continue this story. I would be so relieved. Let me finish this last part and then you can take the idea or continue another story...I have confidence in your writting 😳

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