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-JollyJabeen-

@-JollyJabeen-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

Shruti and Shilpa,

A massive recommendation, Both of you please do an OS together!😃

Your both FANTASTIC writers and it would be awesome if you both combined and produced some work for us! 😉

Shurtti, That was an amazing update as usual, Love how Ahem is now teasing his lovely wife with the nick-name 'gawar'

And how can you write in your PM 'If you don't want this ignore it', Are you silly!?

Who would ignore such a lovely OS, Love love love it and do continue! 😉

Thanks for the PM! <333

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kavya

@Kavya.S

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#52

omg wow shruthi...that was just brilliant
amazing dear loved it a lot
very well written shruthi👏 it was just awesome
and love the vm too...

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ANJ4

@ANJ4

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#53

WOW ... what a chapter , and what great VM ... I think this chapter need to be read a couple of time and the VM need to be listened to a couple more times ... Lovely

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suk19

@suk19

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#54

reading it fantastic loving it

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Justlikethat1

@Justlikethat1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

Wow.. That was superb👏 Fantastic end to a wonderful OS⭐️ Superb Shruts.. Loved it..😃
The part I loved the most was the confession, the second one that followed her questioning.. Aham's pain and him reiterating the fact that he loves her and is lifeless without her.. Superb..😛

The decorations made up for the way he discarded her appreciation before and what a surprise package Gopi was.. Loved the entire OS Shruts and the last part takes the cake.. Well done😊

Thanks for the VMs with the story.. They are excellent Shilpa.⭐️.😛 All 3 songs are my favorites and they so well matched with the OS.. Thank you Shilpa for making them and Shruts for adding them to the OS.. Beautiful😃

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varshu27

@varshu27

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

shruti that was absolutely awesome...loved it...gopi and ahem alone in a farm house...thats what dreams are made of...loved their coming together...hot and steamy...and shilpa beautiful vms...u guys are incredible...what a treat for the weekend...loved the fact that raashi finally has some kind of realisation and work to earn jigars love...thank u...

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Vidisha

@Veni-Vidi-Vici

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Posted: 13 years ago

#57

OMG...The description of passion was so good. The update was long and steamy😉...loved it to bits. Never read a more passionate ff. I felt as if all the scenes were being played out in front of my eyes.

P.S - My huz is already asleep. Won't get lucky like Gopi😳

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Rope_of_Hope

@Rope_of_Hope

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Posted: 13 years ago

#58

amazing shruti...!woww...!excellent👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏...

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swasthi

@swasthi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#59

Superb last part to a fabulous OS.

You have brought on a lovely surprise of the family farmhouse and their haven for their SR. Ahem wanted to make sure that everything was perfect right down to the matching underwear. He had made her feel so loving, belonging and wanted.

Shilpa all three VMs were very enjoyable and supebly made. My favourite was Hume Tumse Pyar.

I look forward to reading more stories from you Shruthi again.

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

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+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#60

Res.

*Edited*

Shruti, what can I say, I just loved, loved this whole OS. It was outstanding and brilliant. What a planner Ahem turned out to be, he is a best business man for nothing. And he put on the whole playful Holi scene for her and then surprising her with the Farmhouse and a romantic first night. What a way to declare his love for her. Just perfect.

Loved the way you the way you placed the VMs just at the right place. And Brilliant choices of songs. Thank you for having the confidence in me to choose the right scenes for you to go with your update.

I love all three songs, so I enjoyed making this VMs on my favorite couple. Glad you approved of the work. Thanks again.

Edited by sbp1971 - 13 years ago

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