OS(on Holi) - LastPart Pg8- Thank you Note Pg 12

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@Arnisha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

nyc one lovely plzz continue want he hear the next part...

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FlowerHater

@FlowerHater

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

yaaayyy!!!!!! But I hope AHEMJIII isnt under the bhangg effect!!!!!! I so hope this!!!!!!😍 and hey as always!!!!!👏 awesome post!!!!!🤗

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navyab

@navyab

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Shruti 😭 ...the part got over quickly ...

😊 liked it & enjoyed it...is Ahem also actually under bhang ? I understand after all Gopi still has some doubts on Ahem's love & needs Ahem to actually show his love by word & deed...waiting for the next part 😛

So Rashi's truth is finally out before Jigar & Kokilla...how will they mend her !!! What else can we expect from Urmilla !!!

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Vidisha

@Veni-Vidi-Vici

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Please continue...and make it more steamier than the pool scene😉...I read that scene four times...

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Sumit chopra

@Jiggarr

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Shruts...the part was awesome...especially the pool scene.just want cvs to read it and plan sumthing like this for holi instead of showing urshi klakaries

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Scarlet28

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Thanks for writing this OS...👏please continue

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angelirebelli

@angelirebelli

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Yet another great update Shruti.. 😊

More please !!

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kavya

@Kavya.S

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

wow shruthi that was brilliant...
loved it a lot...and loved gohem scene
plz update soon...cant wait to read the next update

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

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Posted: 13 years ago

#39

Awe...Shruti this was a fabulous, fantastic, the most wonderful update ever.

Wow, Urmila and her big mouth and the trait runs to her daughter also. I want all you wrote to happen in the show on Holi.

I just loved drunk on bhang Ahem confessing his love and confused Gopi.

Will he remember what he has done? Will he be able to convince Gopi he meant every word of it?

Can't wait to read more.