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Posted: 13 years ago
#71
Great writing yaar ! and a well said quote at the end of the part 11.
Im not bale to stand this Ahem... was he the one who first loved her ? how can be become so ruthless .. uff... i cant imagine ...

Pls continue with next parts.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72
Jst read ur part 10,11...m loving it...I jst hope Anand support Gopi to the fullest...jst cant wait to read next update...ur story indeed is becoming thrilling ...
Edited by Hetp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
OMG, how could ahem be this rude..
please continue soon😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
Great update dear!👍🏼

OMG What have you made my poor Ahem look like😭
Edited by shruts18 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
Nice update ... Ahem reaaly needs his butt. kick ... so do the MOdi's
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i hope gopi and anand together make ahem disappear...and his final insult to gopi ...i wouldnt mind if anand killed him...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
please i dont want gopi go to ahem he is so cruall she must stay with anand n let him love her more
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
Hate this ahem but Love this story😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79
I caught up with your last three updates and I am intrigued by Ahem.
His first meeting with Gopi was one of raw anger - he could not take what he had seen and heard. His second meeting was after he had thought a lot about what was happeneing and he was in control of his emotions. I sense that he is still in love with Gopi for his to cast suspicion in Anand's mind. Also it comes across that he had done some enquiring into what legal steps to take.
Where will all this lead to for Gopi, Ahem and their son. Looking forward to the next update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part-12

Days passed and Ahem continued to create nuisance, this irritated Anand. He would have filed a complaint bu now hadn't it been for Gopi, who didn't want any legal hassles.

The honeymoon period was now over, romance was gradually being replaced by responsibilities. Both of them were working hard to improve their standard of living... both worked really hard and Anand was also studying for departmental exams.

One day...

A local political leader was assassinated following which his supporters indulged in arson. Prabal was sick. He complained of stomach ache. Gopi rushed to Anand and asked him to take him to the hospital. Anand said that going out in the atmosphere of violence is dangerous, they might come under attack. He suggested Gopi to give him home remedies and wait for some more time till the violence abates, such problems are common in childhood and as long as he doesn't vomit it is fine.

The ailment was a small one, it needn't have caused the alarm it did, but Gopi was always afraid of losing her precious child. She was a bit like Koki when it came to children. Anand switched on the TV to make Gopi understand the situation outside but the burning tyres and lathi-charge didn't change her mind. She got angry with Anand and stormed into her room...and called someone...

Anand was shocked when that someone came to their house..it was Ahem Modi. He ignored Anand's presence and rushed Prabal and Gopi into the car...no one offered any explanation. While Ahem's words never affected Anand, this display of parental affection shook him.

He saw them rush into the car- Father, mother and child. He felt unsure of himself, they looked like a family whereas he was an outsider. He had refused to go out only because the illness was a minor one and it was dangerous to venture out...he wasn't worried about his life alone, he was worried about Gopi and Prabal too.

He stood firm because Gopi's mind was immune to any reasoning at that stage. The fact that she turned to Ahem shocked him. Was Ahem still a part of her life? Are they close? Ahem showed his care for her by rushing as soon as he got her call...does she think the same?


"Behind closed doors they had what were legendary battles I hear but when the doors opened there was absolute unity. Not a crack could be found. No separation whatsoever. They were locked together for the good of the community.
Maynard Jackson"



Edited by feviewer - 13 years ago

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