FF: Rang badalte rishteyEND part17updated pg 17

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Hi,

Let me first confess that I love Gohem ...Since Hetal is changing, a thought came to my mind about what if Gopi had a past? What if she has a secret?




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It was 9 P.M and Ahem hadn't arrived home, Kokila tried calling Ahem but failed. Kokila feared that something untoward might have happened coz Ahem looked distressed yesterday evening too. What's wrong? Why was he behaving like this? Gopi had gone to Haridwar for fulfillment of a vow and would come back in two days then why is he anxious? Gopi had called her today and she sounded fine, Chiragbhai told that everything is fine on the business front. Then why is my dikra worried??


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Posted: 13 years ago
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U got me hooked on...so what the secret Gopi is holding on !!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Secret secret everywhere! Please let this one out😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Gopi has a secret!!...nice concept update soon..will wait 4 nxt update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sound good but what the secret of gopi
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Part-2

It was 10.30 and Ahem was still in office, but he wasn't working. He laid slumped on the chair after drinking bootlegged Vodka...Yes!! Ahem drank alcohol violating the prohibition in the state. He thought that he could drown his sorrows in it...He had been cheated and he couldn't come to terms with it. Gopi told the whole world that she is in Haridwar - how could she lie like that? He had seen her in Rajkot, clandestinely meeting a guy. That guy didn't seem to be Gopi's type..(but do I really know Gopi to know her 'type'). He looked like an intellectual...one of those eccentric scholars. What business does Gopi have rubbing shoulders with people of that kind? Ahem would have kept quiet if it was just rubbing shoulders...he saw them greeting each other with a hug and a peck on the cheeks.

Ahem screamed "how could you do this to me Gopi? Why did you do it? why?". Ahem knew it was the only place where he could shout it all out without anybody hearing him. His heart broke into a million fragments and each fragment shouted "why Gopi? Why". Ahem had the habit of jumping to conclusions without asking the other party for explanation----he did the same now too. Moreover he thought that cornering Gopi is useless as she will now become alert and hide secrets and make more excuses.

Ahem was stung by her rejection.his love was no longer his. /things would have been different a year ago, but now that he is in love with Gopi, unreciprocated love was killing him.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Let me guess, the guy is gopi's brother?
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Originally posted by: Jiggarr

Let me guess, the guy is gopi's brother?


No😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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WOW interesting story. I am a little afraid to read what is next. But I like the writing and I like how you have changed everything. Please update soon...and I hope in your story GoEm stay together😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Finally ahem is the one suffering for Gopi and not the other way around😃

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