Saathiya Love Times - My Heart Will Go On

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Posted: 13 years ago
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One minute scene in the beginning and one minute at the end but said it all!

"You are the only person who can complete my life."

Ahem had only two things on his mind in the past- his mom and his work! But now there is one more addition to it - his wife. His life revolves around these three things only now.

He came out and saw his sherwaani instead of formals lying on the bed. And got surprised for a while! For he had simply forgotten that today he had to be at home for the puja. How could he remember when all the time Gopi is on his mind...same way when she kissed him and he had forgotten everything , his mind going blank with the unforgettable pleasure! This is what love does to a person, being forgetful all the times! And so is love playing now on him!

When Gopi made him remember, he got suddenly pleased at the idea of being at home with her. But when she said she had to go down for some work, he felt disappointed! For as she was going, he looked at her with such expectant eyes! His mind works fast in making plans and he is a quick thinker, so he took no time in concluding on how to spend the few minutes he has early in the morning with her, but he got very very disappointed seeing her going away!

It must have been very hard on him staying upstairs without her for he doesn't like being alone at any point of time now. So the moment he came down, he was already in despair and was looking for her presence all around the place. She's the only thing on his mind, even more strongly when he's at home now.

And when his brother noticed his tension, he decided to approach and help him, just the way he's doing for him now-a-days. Upon realizing that he's been caught, Ahem surrendered, as if putting his hands up! Almost saying "here I go again, and no defense this time!". He looked so in love and didn't pretend denying it a bit.

"For you see, each day I love you more
Today more than yesterday and less than tomorrow."

After being shown by Jigar where she is, he looked at her immediately without feeling self conscious and felt so glad. Finally relieved at her acknowledging his presence! Now home for him means her presence by his side is a must and can't stand being alone for a moment without her. He needs to know where she is and that's enough to relax him!

"Soul-mates are people who bring out the best in you. They are not perfect but are always perfect for you."

Upon finding her and feeling peace of mind, he turned around to silently thanks his brother for helping him out with this though small, but in a way, big gesture of his! Quite a contrast to the relationship they had previously! And this is just due to one selfless soul he's staying with all the time now, so these changes are bound to happen!

But then he returned to his reserved shy self and even little scared of his naughty brother now-a-days. Who knows he might start teasing him again so thought it better to go from there and protect himself and his sanity. And be able to look at her where those eyes of his brother won't be there to make him drown in embarrassment on being caught again!

Love makes your soul crawl out from its hiding place!

Are the days of waiting gone for his beloved? For she has started giving him acknowledging smiles! Have they indeed come a step closer coz of just a day of separation? What would be the other thing that would trigger another spark in their journey of recognizing each other as their better halves?😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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👏 A two minute scene and you have articulated it so well.. Fantastic Shruts.. Great going⭐️
Loved the way you connected his surprise and him thinking about her all the time.. 😳 It looks like it now.. He was pleased when Jigar pointed Gopi out to him. He did nod his head no but he was also pleased that at least someone is understanding his feelings 😉 The one he wants to is sitting right across helping others while he stands there looking for catching sight of her once.

One small comparison comes to mind.. During Kinjle's engagement Aham was attracted to the girl in green but his hate was too much then to acknowledge the attraction. The minute he found it was Gopi, his mind switched off.. But today he is searched willingly for his wife hoping to see her.. Aham is indeed in love..😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😊awww!!!!!!! poor ahemji!!!!!!!😃 aaj kal to unka heart kuch aise hi songsss gata hoga like my dil goes hmmm,kuch to hua hai,kaisa yeh ishq hai-ajab sa risk hai ☺️etc!!!!!!! waise wonderful analysis shruts 👏and very well written as always👍🏼 😊!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Justlikethat1

👏 A two minute scene and you have articulated it so well.. Fantastic Shruts.. Great going⭐️

Loved the way you connected his surprise and him thinking about her all the time.. 😳 It looks like it now.. He was pleased when Jigar pointed Gopi out to him. He did nod his head no but he was also pleased that at least someone is understanding his feelings 😉 The one he wants to is sitting right across helping others while he stands there looking for catching sight of her once.

One small comparison comes to mind.. During Kinjle's engagement Aham was attracted to the girl in green but his hate was too much then to acknowledge the attraction. The minute he found it was Gopi, his mind switched off.. But today he is searched willingly for his wife hoping to see her.. Aham is indeed in love..😍




Hey I am going to put my two cents in here...for the bold above. I saw that episode recently and I don't think he got turned off. I think he was really surprised that his unpad gawar wife of that time could get him to notice her beauty. He still kept looking at her when no one was looking. I think that is the first time he was physically attracted to her. But Ahem being Ahem did not acknowledge it. Although now he may even say those 3 little words we have probably been waiting for more than Gopi😆



@Shruts...thanks for the insight. I always look forward to those😊
Edited by Dhabu89 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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As usual very nice. I cant understand how ahem is being success in non revealing of her emotions to gopi.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dhabu89




Hey I am going to put my two cents in here...for the bold above. I saw that episode recently and I don't think he got turned off. I think he was really surprised that his unpad gawar wife of that time could get him to notice her beauty. He still kept looking at her when no one was looking. I think that is the first time he was physically attracted to her. But Ahem being Ahem did not acknowledge it. Although now he may even say those 3 little words we have probably been waiting for more than Gopi😆



@Shruts...thanks for the insight. I always look forward to those😊

@ Bold .. Really Rupal? I need to go back and watch.. He was mesmerized that day I remember and Hetal praises Gopi... Let me go back and watch the scene again..😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dhabu89




Hey I am going to put my two cents in here...for the bold above. I saw that episode recently and I don't think he got turned off. I think he was really surprised that his unpad gawar wife of that time could get him to notice her beauty. He still kept looking at her when no one was looking. I think that is the first time he was physically attracted to her. But Ahem being Ahem did not acknowledge it. Although now he may even say those 3 little words we have probably been waiting for more than Gopi😆



@Shruts...thanks for the insight. I always look forward to those😊


yeah infact i also think he was very much surprised as to how he got attracted to her...😆he had got some doubt on his tools for the first time😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ahamji was so cute today. the way his eyes were searching for her was sweet. and jigar never misses an opportunity to point this out. since jigar has seen the worst of aham i think he is happy to see his bro all love stuck or is he trying to repay aham for bring him close to rashi.
shruti you analyis has landed me in lala land. these days i m missing it. had the changed the bg ?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: shruthi2010

ahamji was so cute today. the way his eyes were searching for her was sweet. and jigar never misses an opportunity to point this out. since jigar has seen the worst of aham i think he is happy to see his bro all love stuck or is he trying to repay aham for bring him close to rashi.
shruti you analyis has landed me in lala land. these days i m missing it. had the changed the bg ?



I didnt get whatz in bold😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awww...he just can't take his eyes off of her! I just can't wait until he tells her---all in frank mode. I bet he'll be yelling at her when he confesses---but I would still love it because it's so Ahemji's style to dish out the deepest feelings from his heart in anger! I hope it happens when the lights go out...to make a full circle on how they first met--in the dark with a diya! Awww...I'm gonna go now, study...sorry Shruts for ranting (about the lovelies). 😍

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