OS: Ahem and Gopi realize their Love, updated pg1

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Nihira-fan

@Nihira-fan

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

wow!!!that was awesome!!!very well written!

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swasthi

@swasthi

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

A heart wrenching OS with a massive turnaround in the end. Loved Ahem being in charge.

You have brought out the heart felt feelings, thoughts and emotions of both Ahem and Gopi. You have shown an eventually concerned Kokila who told her vahu take rest knowing what the repercussions will be.

Hope to read more of your writing in the future.

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sadiltl

@sadiltl

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Swasthi, always loved your writing. a big compliment from you. thank you. I am planning to write a short series of incidents. It is still halfbaked product in my mind. with all your encouragement, I should be able to do it. Actually writing here is a good outlet of pressure.

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Jammona

@Jammona

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

This is such an amazing story and wished to know how Ahem will handle his mum so pls continue even though I know it's an os

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swasthi

@swasthi

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: sadiltl
Swasthi, always loved your writing. a big compliment from you. thank you. I am planning to write a short series of incidents. It is still halfbaked product in my mind. with all your encouragement, I should be able to do it. Actually writing here is a good outlet of pressure.

You are welcome. I look forward to reading your next set of series.

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Omokhefe Imoukhuede

@fefey

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

loved loved loved it. Good job 👏

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-JollyJabeen-

@-JollyJabeen-

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

This was amazing!😃

Is this your first OS?

I love it!,hats off to you! :)

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ramyaramesh

@ramyaramesh

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Wonderful OS...

Please someone pass this OS to CVs... we want to see this not the baseless track thy are showing...

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Justlikethat1

@Justlikethat1

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Fantastic.. 👏 A happy ending all around.. That is the best thing ever.. 😃

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sadiltl

@sadiltl

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Thanks everybody for liking my OS.

It was really difficult to write the conversation between ahem and koki. I was fed up using Mom so many times, but Ahem uses Mom in every sentence. So I decided to stick to his way of calling his mother. Also, I have to take care that Ahem is not so emotional but conveys his thoughts clearly. OMG writing is fun...

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