SS: Haunted Modi Mansion (updated) 5 march - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Good start with an interesting story line ... update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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great start .. please cont...
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Thanks to all for the lovely comments,here is the next part all the ladies were preparing for the grahpravesh pooja.The doorbell rings and panditji enters.Pandiji started performing the rituals.He asked for oil to pour in havankund.Rashi handed him the oil and urmi starts praising her. Urmi-see vevanji my dikri is so intelligent.U gave her the responsibilities of pooja and she handled them very well.Kokila stares at her.When panditji poured oil in kund the fire in the kund quenched.Koki examined the oil and shouted rashi.Meine tumse kya kaha tha? Rashi-kakiji woh.. Koki-kya ji woh? maine tumhe kund mein dalne ke liye kya lane ko kaha tha? Rashi-ji oil.koki-And what did u bring?water.Hey krishna bhagwan.Is ladki ka main kya karoon.panditji,kya hum dobara pooja shuru kar sakte hain?Pandit-yes ofcourse.But i have a feeling that something wrong gona happen.Since this upshagun was done by a younger member of the family i feel that all the younger members will have to face a big problem in their life.But i will complete the pooja now.The pooja completed peacefully.After dinner,all members except raji and gohem left for nani's home.Nani was not feeling well so all decided to stay there for one night.Rashi war upset about what she had done and was crying.Just then jiger enters and sat on the bed beside her.Jiger-why r u crying rashi?what hapened was not ur fault.I know u r trying ur best to become a good wife and DIL.Rashi-jigerji main...Jiger cupped her face and calm her.He kissed on her forehead.Scene shifts to gohem room.Since gohem had resolved all their differences.But ahem hadn't confessed his love to gopi yet.He considers her as his friend only.Gopi was going towards the cupboard.She had not seen the water on the floor and was about to fall when ahem comes from the bathroom.He saw her falling and tries to catch her but in vain.Both of them fell on the bed with ahem on the top of gopi.They landed in such a way that ahem kissed gopi on her cheek.As they had met with a similar accident so they were comfortable with other.Ahem got up and said sorry to gopi.Gopi-its ok ahemji.Ahem-haan,kabhi-2 aisa hota hai,he said teasingly reminding her their first kiss just a few days ago.It was 1 am in the morning.Gopi woke up suddenly.She was feeling dizzy.She was going towards the bathroom when she suddenly stopped in front of the mirror.She saw ahem standing before the mirror.Another thing surprised her.Oh kanha ji,this could not be true.Am i dreaming?Then she came back from her shock and screamed loudly. What gopi saw in the mirror?Keep in touch.suggesions r welcomed
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Posted: 13 years ago
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good job.. please continue soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey guys i have prepared really hard for this updat.please comment.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nice update dear!! pls continue!! 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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That was a very interesting Update.. I loved it..😊 So what makes Gopi scream? Is Ahem hurt?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey this is so interesting!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Should i bring some more twists?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome !!! Waiting for the next part

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