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Posted: 13 years ago
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I was hilarious an sweet at the same time..👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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great story line ...waiting for ur next update ...i cant stop laughing when i read about the hair style fisco (gajini hair style that to jigar 😕)...waiting for ur next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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again sorry for the delay,actually my exams r near so can't be regular on forum.anyways here is the next one,hope u like it.😊
JIGAR-now add some red chilly then add baking powder.finally cover the cooker and kept it undisturbed for 10 minutes.
AHEM-see, i told u that wasn't much difficult.now, we would show the girls we r not dumbos.breakfast pe hum aisa dhmaka karenge ke sab dekhte reh jeyenge aur gopi rashi ke toh chehron ke rang hi udd jayenge.
suddenly,a blast sound strikes the kitchen.goshi were the first one to enter the kitchen.they saw 2 creatures looking as black as shoe polish,smoke coming out from their ears,hair straightened up like a thin nail.
RASHI(SHOUTING)-ahh...bachao..bachao..our home is attacked by aliens.
GOPI(INNOCENTLY)-rashiben..what is alien?
RASHI-gopi,aliena r the creatures who live in other world and they take humans with them to their planet for experiment.
jigar was about to speak when gopi cut him off.
GOPI-alienbhai saab,aap hamare parivaar ko kuch mat kijiye..
RASHI-haan..but if u want u can take kakiji along with u.she would teach ur children how to live a boring..i mean disciplined life.and if u want u can take ahemjiju with u but make sure u have green/black tea on ur planet.
ahem who could no longer hold his anger shouted..
AHEM-enough..enough is enough.can't u see we r ur husbands.tell me do aliens wear this saree and all this stuff.
gopi rashi examined them carefully.
RASHI-tell me what is the password of ur safe,fb account,laptop?
AHEM-mom...
rashi gopi realised they were jihem.rashi was laughing non stop while gopi was trying to catch the situation.jigar told her everything.now, rashi was out of control.
JIGAR-bhai..aapne toh kaha tha ki breakfast pe hm dhmaka karenge aur bhbhi-rashi ke rang udd jayenge.
RASHI-haan toh hua na dhmaka.aur rang bhi udde lekin hamare nahin aap dono ke.wah kya rang nikhra hai..
GOPI-rashi en before anyone arrives we have to clear this mess.
RASHI-no,i will not help jigarji.he cut my hair.
JIGAR-rashi please...ok i m sorry..
RASHI-ok,but first say we r the best.
JIHEM(GRRINING)-we r the best.
RASHI-not u we gopi-rashi r the best.
jigar looks at ahem.
AHEM MUTTERING TO JIGAR-let them fly and say what they want.somtimes we hwve to make donkey our father.we shall deal with them when our time come.
jihem said what they were asked.
RASHI-from now on, u have to do the task which we sall give u.
GOPI-jane dijiye na..rashi ben...
RASHI-tu chup kar..u say agree or not.
jihem nodded as an obedient child.
goshi cleared all the mess and helped jihem to prepare breakfast.koki,hetal,baa were outside ib the garden so they knew nothing about the incident.
AT BREAKFAST:
jigar and ahem were serving everyone.
KOKI-arre wah rashi..suddenly u r turning into a sanskaari bahu.morning u touched my feet now putting pallu on ur head.
gohem were giggling while raji were staring at each other in such a way that they would eat each other instead of toast.
CHIRAG-i m done.btw,breakfast was good.jigar beta..what happened to ur hair?
now, this pour oil in fire.
RASHI-woh..papa..this is my new look.saying so rashi put her head down.
CHIRAG-these children naa...
all left one by one.
RAJI ROOM:
RASHI-jigarji,take this with u while leaving for shopping.
jigar saw the list containing 15-20 items to purchase.
JIGAR-r u planing to shop for the entire year?
RASHI-jigarji,remember u will have to listen to me othrwise...
JIGAR-nahin..nahin rashi main toh bass keh raha tha ki.. ki..
RASHI-kya?
jigar coming closer to rashi while rashi ws stepping back slowly unknown to where she was going and finally hit the wall.jigar blocked her with his arms on either side of hers.
JIGAR(WHISPERING)i ws just saying that.. that u r so beautiful that u doesn't need this stuff to look beautiful.ur eyes r like a deep ocean in which i wan to drown.ur hair r the chains which keep binding me with u.ur lips..
rashi was floating in the sky feeling weightless.
RASHI(STTUTERING)what about my lips?
JIGAR-ur lips r like the sweet candies which attracts me to taste their sweetness but like oher woman god forgot to grant u one feature.
RASHI-what/
JIGAR-brain..yes rashi ur top floor is empty.
rashi's expressions changes from confusion to anger.
RASHI-jigarji...i will not leave u.
jigar ran towards the other side of the bed challenging rashi to catch him.rashi ran after him and her leg hit the bed.she was about to fall.jigar tries to catch her but both of them fell with jigar on top of her.it looks as if the time had come to standstill.the world seized to exist except the 2 passion and love filled hearts.their bodies were touching badly but jigar was coming more and more closer,rashi was encouraging him by putting her hands in his hair.both knew that now is not the right time as they were not themselves but it was not just any physical attraction in which one is attracted to just the external features they were in true love which relates 2 souls.rashi was lost in jigar but quickly regain her senses.she was not ready at that moment.
RASHI-jigarji,please leave me...
seeing her uneasiness jigar got up killing his inner thoughts.
IN MARKET:
KOKI-gopi vau,rashi u go and buy ur sarees while i and motabhabhi will buy some mandir stuff.
jihem nodded and reached o shop.ahem was looking for some sarees when a sari with a small,sleevless red blouse and net pallu caught his attention.he could see his gopi wearing that sari looking very sexy and yummy like a red cherry.
AHEM-oh god, this girl is killing me.i can no longer resist her.i will have to confess fast otherwise i would...
jigar brought him out of his thoughts.
JIGAR-bhai,u got somthing?
AHEM-yeah,this blue sari will be ok.what about u?
JIGAR-don't ask bhai..u r lucky to have a simple andinnocent wife.it looks i have to spend the whole day for shopping.
it was 7 pm in the evning.they were roaming around the streets looking for koki and hetal.
AHEM-where have hey gone?
JIGAR-bhai..let me call them..oh no..low battery.
they were talking when a group of tapori came there and started misbehaving with them.
one guy to ahem-hai meri ras malai.i m following u till i saw u at mandir in that rainy day.i have heard that ur husband doesn't love u.what a fool he is.i lost my heart to u .ur wet hair touching ur waist,i wish that i would be a rain droplet so that i could touch ur body,ur eyes,ur...ahem was feeling as if millions of volcanoes have errupted in his body.he was like a mad bull ready to finish anything that comes in his view.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
nice ...! keep up the good work.. thanks for more raji.. hope u will write in future updates too..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
that was a wonderful update...plzz update soon!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
🤣🤣 you cracked me up!!!! Last line to ahem" hai re meri "rasmalai" goddd!!! I can imagine ahem's face!!!!🤣 cool update !!!!👏
Do continue soon!!!👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
Your ff is very enjoyable and amazing storyline of haunted house. Continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
continue soon.eagarly waiting for next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
Wow! Read all the parts. Hilarious!

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