SS: Haunted Modi Mansion (updated) 5 march

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Posted: 13 years ago
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For the first time , i am going to write this SS.Thanks for your support (special thanks to Nafisa_blossoms). Part-1 It is morning in the modi mansion and the sun is shining brightly.Gopi wakes up ,goes to the kitchen and takes an utensil to get milk.She is very happy after the last night coz all the differences between raji are cleared.She comes down the stairs and the doorbell rings and she opens the door and tells jai shri krishna to the milkman. All the family members are doing pooja.Gopi does the aarti and gives prasad to all.Jigar gives a smile to rashi and so ahem does.All men except parag start proceeding to the door for office.Kokila stops them and tells that she wants to tell something.She tells "as all the misunderstandings are clear so i am thinking to buy a new house.i have discussed this with baa and she also agreed."all agrees to kokila and chirag tells that he will search a house."in the kicthen gopi is happy and tells rashi"now we will go to our new house"and rashi is elated.kokila comes and tells them to work fast as its 6 in the evening and we have to prepare for the dinner. Part-2 The doorbell rings and ahem , chirag and jigar enters the house.ahem says to gopi "i am very tired and hungry. Give me some tea and biscuits."gopi says "ji"and goes to the kitchen.its 8pm and all are eating dinner.chirag says"i have searched a house near raj marg and its really pretty." 1 MONTH LATER gopi is sleeping her room.suddenly a crackling sound comes from the cupboard.she goes to the cupboard and opens it and a witch drags her in the cupboard and she wakes up screaming.ahem gets up and asks her"what happened?are you ok?"she says"nothing. i am ok". Its morning and all are packing their bags to go to their new house.in raji room,rashi is very happy and tells jigar "it will be so much fun jigar ji"and jigar says"yes rashi. Now lets go.all are waiting for us."all the members come to the hall and come outside. Kokila locks the door of the modi mansion and they sit in their cars and arrive at their new house.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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great starting...😃

please give some spaces between paragraphs it becomes more easier to read (just a suggestion)..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Good start with a nice story line. Do continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hmm intriguing please continue soon Jigarr
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey really nice start. Do write more!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sorry for mistakes and thanks for your suggestion.
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Hey Good Start.. nice story line.. Do continue soon
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Awesome start...plz do continue😊
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great thrilling start...plz continue😊
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great start Jigarr... please continue soon!! 😊

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