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maddy311

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: shruts18
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OMG that was just too good...i was laughing my heart out on this one, my hubby glaring at me like anything...absolutely hilarious...keep on posting ones like this...esp. when SNS tempo is going down😆...picturizing urmi dancing at the songs was unimaginable...🤣.

It might go this way in SNS i think, at least some bits of it, like agents coming and taking urmi stuff or Rashi helping urmi out with her diamond necklace😃

I just loved your OS...fabulous one🤣

Thanks so much shruti for liking it. happy that you laughed a bit😃

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maddy311

@maddy311

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: varshu27
lovely os maddy...urmila greedy and shameless as usua...at least now raashi knows urmis truecolore...she can concentrate on her married life...for a minute there i thought ahem might say to gopi that raashi can have the ring but u can have the rest of the set!!!!

Thaks varsha. You know I also thought that same thing to write for ahem but left it later because the OS was not meant on gohem😃

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maddy311

@maddy311

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Dasuni
I really enjoyed the story specially urmi's dancing fiesta
my god it makes me mad and still laughing

Thanks so much Dasuni. Glad that you laughed reading it😃

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maddy311

@maddy311

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Xarina
A very good OS. I feel sorry that Gopi gifted her the set with such love only for Urmila to make Rashi to sell it. Love the fact tha Rashi saw what her mom is really like. X xx

Thanks xarina for liking it😊 I think its a small sacrifice to know urmi's truth😆

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-Nafisa-

@-Nafisa-

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Maddy, this OS is fantastic the dialogues between the characters are so much like SNS and the also the reactions of Kokila, Gopi and everyone are very close to the serial characters, I love to see that in fan fics, I don't like too much of a departure, as I like to feel like it's an extension almost like an episode of SNS, and your fan fic delivers on that.

It's really really funny and I hope there is dancing at tomorrows party and Urmila does dance to the trendy item numbers like chikney chameli and munni badnaam hui, I can just see it in my minds eye, you've made my evening and it's a really enjoyable fan fic to read.

Edited by Nafisa_blossoms - 13 years ago