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@MereMahiyaa.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

Very nice Update Loved it Cant wait to read the next part

&& Thanks for the pm😃

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swasthi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#72

Superb update Miketa.

Ahem's thoughts being expressed on his marriage and love - egocentric, arrogant and selfish.

You have now set the scene from both sides ... looking forward to the build up of the story.

Update soon.

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Mishti Patel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: sks21
so this update got to know ahem's thoughts...very nice dear...
loved the update...very well written

Its very important to know Ahem's thoughts as well - because together its their journey to find out who are they...

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Mishti Patel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: vibz88
Hey its a great update! Ahem s point of view was very touching. Usually i love to hate him in ff s but i felt bad for him.so he will do anything for him mom. Thanks for the pm

Usually, I like story starting of in bad quotes cause at the end its a different tale. Yep, Ahem can do anything for his mother and her happiness - either hurting himself. Deeply.

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Mishti Patel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: Aish3003
Nice look into Ahem's mind!

Thanks for the PM... It was fantastic!

It's important to know about Ahem's thoughts as well!

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Mishti Patel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: varshu27
wonderful update...glad we get to see ahems pont of view...want to see how gopi and ahem interact in ur story...thanks for the pm...

Its gonna take awhile for them to interact. Let's see what's store next in their life.

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Mishti Patel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: _Precious_
That was a short yet sweet update. Loved Ahem's thoughts which I usually enjoy in FF s. Please continue soon.

His thoughts are important - even I enjoy them along with Gopi...

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Mishti Patel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: CHIKA784
Mikita,this update was absolutely fantastic!😃

Awww poor Ahem dikra,but he shouldn't have been so reliant on his mother,he messed up 3 lives! -___________-

Kya! Ahem Dikra doesn't know what he - have done in pleasing his Mom.

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Mishti Patel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: X.Sisi94
Very nice Update Loved it Cant wait to read the next part
&& Thanks for the pm😃

Even I am impatient to post next part of this fiction - before that I need to write next part too and... nah you'll know soon what's gonna happen 😉

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