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Posted: 13 years ago

#91

nice love it thx for pm me

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Nihira-fan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#92

just read your story...loved it!!beautifullywritten!!!waiting eagerly for the next update!!

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Mandy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#93

thanks for the PM! love the update! 😊

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Fahima

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Posted: 13 years ago

#94

fabulous!! loved it so much...continue soon...

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swasthi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#95

Very good update.

He is so attracted to her yet stings her just to see how she hurts all.

Update soon.

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Raunika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#96

really lovely chapter.n very interesting as well.plz do update soon.

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Mishti Patel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: _Precious_
great update. nice to see the monologue of both Ahem and Gopi and the little conversation between them. His entry to the room was not bad as he saw Gopi in just underskirt and blouse and he was able to restrain himself without doing some thing nonsense. Keep going dear. Thanks for the pm.

I''ve realize monologues are so important in fiction... Indeed his entry wasn't bad par he is Ahem Modi (who only things about his interest over others)

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Mishti Patel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: X.Sisi94
Amazing Update
dont lik this ahem in this story i hope he gets better
Poor Gopi How can she live with such a person

Very nice Update & Thanks for the pm

It's just the starting - there are going to be many changes and major twist that would bring some sense into Mr. Modi 😉

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