SS: Heartbroken updated 17 jan part 3/page 9 - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Please continue soon, love your OS.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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I thought you had updated.😭 I came running and fell down.😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks everyone for liking it. Its my first attempt at writing something long. There may be some delays in updates but I hope all of you will cooperate. Will be updating part 2 soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 1 on page 1

Part 2

"Oh god what's this I got late" he said worriedly. "Now what about my plans?" Just then he heard the sound of water splashing on the floor of the bathroom. "Oh so she is still taking the bath. Thank god I just woke up in time. God is with me", a slight smile came on his face. "Now its the time for action. Although it involves a bit of risk for her but I am ready for it. Oh god please help her and also me. You know why I am doing this so please save her. I am sorry gopi and I am feeling bad doing it to you but I have to do it since you don't listen to me".

He took the jug of drinking water from the table next to the bed and spilled the water from it just in front of the bathroom at about two steps from the door. Feeling bad from inside his heart, he prayed to god again to save her. He waited outside the bathroom trying to listen to the sounds coming from inside. Ten minutes passed by and the splashing sound of water stopped. "I guess she is done with the bath. Now just a matter of few minutes before she comes out". He waited outside the door completely sticking his body to the wall and holding his breath. He didn't want to make any noise to alert her so he just kept silent and stood there waiting for her. Suddenly he heard the sound of the bathroom lock being opened. Gopi came out of the bathroom drying her wet hair with the towel. She started heading towards the dressing table and noticed that ahem was not on the bed. She didn't notice the water on the floor and stepped on it. Her slippers were already wet from below and completely unaware of the water on the floor, she slipped hard off the water. A scream in an extremely frightened voice left her throat "aaah...". Already waiting for this moment ahem quickly grabbed the opportunity. He quickly took her in his arms from behind and prevented her from falling.

Gopi struggling to find some support quickly held on ahem's collar with her left hand and her nails pierced into ahem's neck. The momentum carried her further down but she held the collar tightly and *chizzz...* ahem's kurta split into two from the middle. Ahem held her tightly and helped her to regain the balance. She was trembling with fear. She turned around quickly and hugged him tightly burying her face into his chest. Ahem was pleased by her gesture. He raised up his hands to hug her and felt the touch of her bare back. The water droplets trickled down from her wet hair onto his chest and stomach and then further down settling above the band of his pyjamas making it a pleasant feeling for him. He closed his eyes to enjoy the moment. Deep in his heart he thought "you don't know gopi how much I waited for this moment. I always want you this close to me". He was happy to feel her soft body rubbing against him but at the same time he felt bad for trapping gopi in her plan, a rather risky plan. He tried to calm her and said "Gopi see everything is alright. Nothing is gonna happen to you when I am with you". His words brought her back to the senses. She quickly pushed his hands away and released him realising what she did. An expression of embarrassment filled her face and she quickly backed off keeping her eyes down. He was constantly looking at her flushed face and his lips automatically formed a slight smile. She turned her back towards him and went towards the dressing table with a disappointed look, a disappointment from herself. She sat down and dried her hair with the towel. Ahem went to the couch and sat there watching every action of hers and smiling at the thoughts of the success of his plan while she was avoiding herself to look at him. He was lost completely in her thoughts but his stare was making her uncomfortable. She was feeling like he was torturing him with his eyes. She kept drying her hair looking away from him and put the towel aside. She moved her hand forward to pick up the comb when she saw her hand with strange red tinge. She looked at it confused and realised that it was blood spreading on her fingers and nails. Then she saw the towel which also had blood drops on it. "Oh no, blood but where did it come from? Did I get some scratch when I fell" She quickly stood up and checked herself and her clothes but they looked alright to her. She looked a bit confused as she had no signs of any wound. Ahem who was watching her all this time noticed her tension. "What happened? Any problem?" he asked in serious tone. "Ji no problem". "Then why are you looking so tensed" "ji nothing". All this time she didn't look at him. "I think I need to go to washroom to check" she thought. She went into the washroom, checked herself and came back after some time even more confused as she was unable to find the cause of blood. Ahem was standing right before the door to enquire what was she bothered about. She tried to look away but her eyes glued on him. Ahem had huge scratches running from the right side of his neck to the middle of his chest and his kurta was also ripped a long way down. Blood was oozing from the wounds and his kurta also got spoiled with it. She understood that she had scratched him during the fall and her hair got the blood while she hugged him. She put both her hands on her mouth in terror. "Ahemji why didn't you tell me? " she almost shouted at him. Ahem looked in disbelief at her and asked "What happened gopi? What are you talking about?"
"look at yourself. You have such a big ..." she choked in the middle. He saw himself in the mirror and came to know the reason for her tension. "But how did I got these scratches?" He was so lost in her thoughts that he hadn't noticed that she accidently scratched him quite badly and tore off his kurta. "Ji I think its all my fault. Looks like I did it when you saved me from falling. Ahemji I am sorry but I did it by mistake. Please forgive me ahemji" she said with a feel of guilt on her face. "Its okay. Its not a big wound and its not your mistake" he said with a concerned look. "No ahemji, its my fault..." "stop now" he said irritated a bit. She stopped immediately and tears came into her eyes. "Now what is this. Why are you crying? I have said its not your fault." "Ahemji please forgive me" she said holding both her ears with her hands. Ahem could do nothing but smile at her childish behaviour but he couldn't see her crying for no fault. "Oh god she is so innocent and pure at heart. Thank you god for giving an angelic wife to me" he thought and felt proud. Then he took both his hands to her cheeks and wiped the tears from her eyes. "I don't like it when you cry. Stop crying now". "Ahemji didn't you feel the pain" "No, because my mind was busy in your thoughts and where you are present, how could pain even think of coming there". Gopi was blushing furiously and ahem was looking at her red face with a huge smile.

She makes an effort to divert his attention "Ahemji its a big wound and must be hurting you. I will bring the first aid box from maji's room" and she started to leave. "Stop" he ordered her from behind. "No need to tell anything to mom. She will get worried. Don't worry it will heal soon. Do your work and get ready otherwise mom will come here calling for you". She nodded her head in disagreement but she couldn't go against him, so she went towards the dressing table to get ready.

As she passed by him she took a peek at his face. His eyes were filled with overwhelming love for her and but she kept her distance from him. Ahem watched her as she passed him and could see the concern on her face. He sat on the couch thinking of what had happened in a matter of few minutes. "Oh god you are not with me. Its paining so much and I have stopped her from getting first aid also". He slightly touched the wound with a finger and felt like someone had placed a burning candle at his chest. He was feeling a lot of pain and was very uncomfortable but didn't want to show it to her. "It was my plan but looks like gopi's kanhaji is not happy with me for doing it with her. Kanhaji you paid back so quickly but it was not for a bad reason and you know it better". In spite of making all efforts of hiding his pain, gopi noticed the uneasiness on his face but Ahem smiled immediately to remove her doubt. She gave a slight smile but her eyes were still wet.
He turned his back to her and cursed himself "you are a fool ahem. So much pain for such a small moment. The great plan of a great brain of great ahem modi was a very painful success". But atleast he was happy that gopi was worried about him getting hurt. She loves me but doesn't want to accept it. But I will make her confess her feelings. Suddenly a thought came into his mind and that evil smile returned on his face again. "Thank you kahna ji for showing me the way".

To be continued soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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RESERVED!😊

yayy im the first one!😆

Mandy,i loved loved loved it!

How cute,Gopi tore off Ahem's Kurta😆 and Ahemji!,naughty naughty,what a plan!😉

Really loved it,update soon and PM me when you updatee😊
Edited by CHIKA784 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great update! But wat s ahem s fascination with water first on the couch now on the floor next time he s gonna drop it on her or drag her to a shower.
Hmmm i wish it was longer!!am really glad she scratched him and tore his kurta she s a wild cat.
Edited by vibz88 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wonderful update...ahems plan did not include him getting hurt,did it?...what other sneaky plans he has in store i wonder...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Liked it ...😉 Ahem never realised the plan will have benefits of him being hurt 😛 waiting for his next plan !!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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maddy loved the update...it was amazing
oh ahemji thought it will be easy but now got to know its very tough
poor guy got scratched from gopi
well what plan does he have next??cant wait to read the next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow maddy It is brilliant!

Something that could actually happen...Gopi accidentally hurting him(physically and innocently 😉) and Ahem not even noticing till she tells him...Awesome moment !!

Loved it...thanks a lot for the PM...would have been very sorry if I had missed this!

And I understand that you might be busy because of your exams so another thanks for taking out the time!

Cheers...
Aish

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