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Posted: 13 years ago
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really nyc ..pm whn ya conti
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sorry, i m mother dragged me to the market to buy veggies. so here it goes

aham was stumped for the first time in his life. the gift was not for him. how happy he was to think that gopi had brought it for him. but the truth brought him back to earth. at that moment another image flashed in his mind. the image of gopi decorating their room and he shouted at her. the pain, disappointment and tears in her eyes. oh, this is how she must have felt on that day. how arrogantly he had thought that gopi will love him after all his treatment towards. what a beast he had been to her.
unaware of the turmoil of her husband, gopi came back with his black tea. she found that aham had not moved an inch from where she had left him. she was shocked to see the expression of pain on his face. so she asked him: what happend ahamji? are you hurt? do you want some medicine?
aham lowered his eyes and meet hers. there was concern and worry for him and only for him. how foolish he had been for not recognizing such a gift given to him. how many days he had made her cry. how many days she had been disaapointed by him. how may days she had to bear his anger. still her she was caring for him. what does she expect in return. not even his love. just a kind word. he had been a jerk till now. he decided no more. but i have to make gopi understand that my feelings for her has been changed. but not fast but slowly. so with a smile he took the coffee from her and said: yes i m hurt. that you did not buy any gift for me.
it was gopi's turn to be stumped.


i dont want to move on from this. i hope something like this happens tomorrow. i really cant see any more blasting. with rising competition. sns production house should know that it is goham which gives high trps. so bringing them back to square one, will lose most of its loyal supports.
thank you all for liking this rambling of mine.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Yeah Shruti ..lets hope tomm Ahem will think as he thought in your OS...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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A very nice comment made by Ahem. I would also like for him to say something like that...That would be awesome😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: shruthi2010


unaware of the turmoil of her husband, gopi came back with his black tea. she found that aham had not moved an inch from where she had left him. she was shocked to see the expression of pain on his face. so she asked him: what happend ahamji? are you hurt? do you want some medicine?
aham lowered his eyes and meet hers. there was concern and worry for him and only for him. how foolish he had been for not recognizing such a gift given to him. how many days he had made her cry. how many days she had been disaapointed by him. how may days she had to bear his anger. still her she was caring for him. what does she expect in return. not even his love. just a kind word. he had been a jerk till now. he decided no more. but i have to make gopi understand that my feelings for her has been changed. but not fast but slowly. so with a smile he took the coffee from her and said: yes i m hurt. that you did not buy any gift for me.
it was gopi's turn to be stumped.



gohem ke chakkar mein black tea became coffee by the end of ur OS 😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
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but i have to make gopi understand that my feelings for her has been changed. but not fast but slowly. so with a smile he took the coffee from her and said: yes i m hurt. that you did not buy any gift for me.
it was gopi's turn to be stumped.

Wow shruti! Its beautiful! you floored me with these lines...So simple and meaningful! Loved it!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wonderful update shruthi...glad that ahem finally understands the pain gopi endured due to his behaviour...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nice and cute OS shruti.. loved it... hope it happens this way - very nice and convincing scene going by ahem and gopi's characters
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Aww tat was a cute OS , and i agree with u the CV's shouldnt bring them back to square one but hasnt he managed to surprise us past few days ,he wil tmrw aswell ..atleast i HOPE
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Posted: 13 years ago
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well done!! please continue if you can!! really loved ahems last comment!!

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