Imagining the unexpected! Part 6 updated Pg.16 - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh wow kavya u really piqued my curiousity now , very eager for u to move story along.loved theupdate
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
wow the curiosity and suspense is killing me LOL😆 can u send the pm to me from next updates ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Aish3003


Don't ever be unsure about posting your work, ever again.. You rock! Trust me! 😊



Thank you Aish😊 Thats so kind of you😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: varshu27

wonderful update...loved the ahem and gopi scene...waiting for the mystery to be solved...



Thank you Varshu.

Originally posted by: d-luna88

Lovely second part!!!! Gopi dusting Ahem's face lovingly, just adorable. But Ahem should know better then calling out from afar, when she has no proper foothold or maybe catching her in his arms was the plan from the beginning😆 Thanks for the pm and great update dear



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Thank u Kristin.

Originally posted by: famzii05

lovely!! its really nice...who is that person?!?! quick reveal!! continue soon!! 👏



Thank you Fahima.
Will reveal soon.
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Originally posted by: ANJ4

Great job , please continue.



Thank you Anju😊

Originally posted by: sks21

that was a wonderful update...
very curious to find out who it was??
continue soon and thanks for the pm



Thank you Kavya😃

Originally posted by: taniks

Oh wow kavya u really piqued my curiousity now , very eager for u to move story along.loved theupdate



Thank you Taniks😊 I'm glad that u liked it😊


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Posted: 13 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: maddy311

Nice update. PM me when you update. I almost missed the second update.



Thank you Maddy😊
Its my pleasure to pm you when i update😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: munnihyderabad

wow the curiosity and suspense is killing me LOL😆 can u send the pm to me from next updates ...



Thank you munni😊
Will pm you from my next update. Its my pleasure😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
aww Gohem scene was soo sweet ...this getting interesting
p.s could u plz PM me aswel whn u update , i nearly missed the second 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetsugar

aww Gohem scene was soo sweet ...this getting interesting

p.s could u plz PM me aswel whn u update , i nearly missed the second 😳



Thank u 😊
I'll pm you next time wen i update and thats my pleasure😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
Very nicely set!!
Plzzz reveal who's that person na...plzz pm me wen u update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
Thank you friends for the great support😃
I've at last revealed the person in this part.
As the title specifies the person might be an unexpected one.
Hope you all like it.😊
Please hit the Like button if you like it.
All comments are welcome.

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Part-3:
Everybody comes to the dining hall for breakfast. Gopi comes and stands beside Rashi. Koki is still worried and to hide it from others she asks Rashi to serve them. Rashi serves everyone. Jigar glares at her. Gopi looks longingly. Ahem sees this and asks Gopi to give him side-dish. Gopi becomes excited and places the side-dish on his plate. All the family members are happy with the improvement in their relationship.Jigar avoids Rashi and serves himself. Hetal notices this and worries for Jigar.Koki says, "Baa, Mota Bhai,Mota Bhabhi,today I thought of arranging an auspicious puja at evening..."
Baa: "Sure bahu".
Before going to office, Ahem calls Gopi and keeping a stern face he says,
"Gopi i'm the one who asked you to serve me but that doesn't mean that i've allowed you to work...understood?"
"Ji"
"I've bought some books for you and had kept on the table...you read them if you get bored"
"Books!?! Thank you Ahemji"
Ahem smiles back 😳and goes to office.
Baa tells Hetal and Koki that she wants to visit the temple. Koki: "But Baa we have to make sweets and also have to decorate the mandir"
Baa: "Ask Meethi to make them.."
Koki :"Ok Baa let Meethi make sweets and Rashi decorate mandir...Rashi"
"Ji Kakiji?"
"Decorate the mandir for the evening puja"
"tik hey(ok) Kakiji"
All the three ladies go to mandir.
Gopi comes and sits near Rashi. She observes Rashi's confused sad face. Gopi ,thinking that Rashi is worried about Jigar, advises her to be patient and to believe in Kanaji..he'll solve their problem. But Rashi is actually thinking about that person she saw and whether to reveal it or not. Her concentration deviates and she couldn't able to do decorations properly. She gets irritated. Gopi calms her down and promises to decorate the mandir before both the sasumas(MILs) and baa come.
Later they all come and see Gopi and Rashi in the kitchen. Rashi takes them to mandir and shows them the decorations. All the 3 ladies are pleased.
Koki: "Wah Rashi! You have done a good job!"
Gopi stands next to them and smiles at her. Rashi feels bad for being praised for Gopi's work.Koki asks Gopi to rest as she has to attend the evening's puja.Rashi takes Gopi to her room and thanks her for the help. But Gopi asks her not to mention as she's her sister. Rashi is a little melted by Gopi's words.
In the evening, some ladies joined them in their puja. Urmi(I'm sorry Kurmi😆) has also come. Everyone praised the mandir's decorations. Koki and Hetal appreciate Rashi for her work. Urmi is also boasting about Rashi's talents. Koki praised Rashi for the first time and Rashi genuinely repents for the first time. She didn't even speak to her mom well.
Night has fallen. MM Men have come. All the ladies, who came for puja, went back. Gopi goes to her room. Hetal and Meethi move to kitchen. When Koki turns to go towards kitchen Rashi calls her and says,
"Kakiji, I want to speak to you in-person..."
"About what Rashi😕?"
"About the person whom you saw with cell phone and who hided from u"
Koki becomes shocked.😲
Rashi continues, "I saw the person yesterday night and i know who it is Kakiji"
Koki is extremely shocked. She is not sure whether to believe Rashi or not. But still her curiosity to know about that person makes her ask,
"Who is that?"
and Rashi whispers,
"Its Meethi"
Koki becomes traumatised.

Precap :
Koki notices some kind of chain peeping out of Meethi's blouse. She signals Rashi and Rashi moves near Meethi from behind and raises her hand towards Meethi's shoulder.

P.S. Sorry for mistakes.

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