Barsaat ki ek raat updated RaJi page 14 jan 28/12 - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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greaaat...! hope u write about raji again
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Cute. Welcome to the forum.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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great os...raji changing for ral and living happiliy with jigar was awesome...
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Really explosive! Raji romance would be welcome on screen as well
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welcome in the forum i love your story very nice weldone so when r u coming with gohem scence i want to know about gohem raat dont come to late for them
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Can you add ss in your title. So tat more people will read it and will get included in fan fiction list also add names of all couples.
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raji romance was a steaming one.
😆I guess the weather was too good. Everyone busy in their rooms🤣😆
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This is the story of GoEm and how they discovered each other.

Ahem was driving around the city not wanting to go home. Its not that he didn't like it there, but looking at Gopi was doing things to him he had never felt. Not even with whats her name? He was in a whole new world. Yesterday after washing her and looking at her with wet hair hugging her face, he felt if he should be so lucky as those strands of hairs. He knew Gopi was beautiful and he was physically attracted to her. And Mr. Ahem Modi never had any problems quenching his thirst. There were women throwing themselves at him all the time. Even now after marriage. Not that he ever took up any of the offers. Just that this is the first time he has felt that way for any girl. Just thinking about her with the wet hair hugging her face brought an arousal so strong he had a hard time keeping his mind anywhere else. This was a whole new territory for him. Then she has to go and wear that sari Gujarati style for him to see the delicious flesh waiting to be devoured by him. AARGH!
He needed to think of something else. No matter how hard he tried his mind kept going back to his wife. He smirks thinking there was a time when I would never have even felt she was good enough to be my wife. But she had some magical quality about her. She had won over his whole family, especially his mom. That was achieving the impossible. He had to hand it to her, she got under his skin and not to mention his pants without so much as a touch from her to him. There goes the arousal reminding him of his desires, Gopi. He just wanted to be with her alone and confirm that she still loves him, before he admits his feelings for her. She lived with him knowing he did not love her. Ahem could not live like that. Must be a man thing. He decides to go home and see if he cannot steal a few moments with her. He loved the way she turns pink every time he touches her or he. She knew he wanted her. But she thought it was only physical. Now it was his turn to let her know his attraction for her goes beyond physical and emotional. It is the meeting of the souls. Souls that belonged together. Souls that were lost without the other to affirm their existence. He walked into the house and saw it empty. He asked Meethi where everyone was and she said they had gone to visit Naniji and would be back in a couple of hours. He asked how long had they been gone and she said about an hour. Ahem did quick calculations. Two hours to his Nani's house two hours there and two hours back...which meant he had five hours with his wife alone!!! Could this be the day?!?
He walked into their room telling Meethi he was going to rest and did not wish to be disturbed. But when he walked in he found his beautiful wife sleeping. Damn those medicines that make her drowsy. He hoped she would be awake before his family comes back and they have some time alone. He decides to get some work done while waiting and pulls out his laptop and gets down to business. He hears her stir and looks and what he sees is only another test to his hormone control. She had turned away from him and her back was all bare and open and inviting to him. the sari pallu had fallen thanks to gravity😆
He moaned inside so as no one can hear him and tried to concentrate on his work but it was of no use. Oh boy and her behind was just too tempting to resist. Down boy...
His arousal would not listen. And then as if on que Gopi woke up and turned to see him sitting there and staring at her back side. She turned bright pink and pretended to not have noticed. They greet each other and Ahem asks her about how she is feeling and she says fine. He says he needs to talk to her and goes to the bed and offers his hand to help her get up. She takes it without looking at him. He helps her up and Ahem pulls her close to him and kisses her on the forehead. She is stumped at his actions. She thinks she is dreaming. She looks up at him and sees desires and wanting for her. She sees he is trying hard to control and so she says "Voh...aap koh kuch baatein karni hai? Sab theek hai na?" ("You wanted to talk to me? is everything alright. To this Ahem answers "Nahi...sab theek nahi hai. Mujhe tumse much puchna hai aur phir kuch kehna hai. Tum such such jawaab doongi na?' (No nothing is alright, I need to ask you something and then I need to tell you something. You will answer me honestly?") When she nods yes he continues..."Gopi, mein jab bhi tumhe dekhta hoon toh kuch kuch hota hai. Tumne mujhe pe jaado kar dala. Raat din tumhare yaadoon mein khoya raheta hoon. Gopi kya tum aab bhi mujhse pyar karti ho? Sach sach baata haan!" ("Gopi, whenever I look at you something stirs inside me. You have me under your spell. I am totally lost in your thoughts day and night. Gopi, do you still love me? Tell me the truth!")
When all Gopi does is looks down and turn pink he knows the answer but he still needed her to tell him. She then looks at him and to his surprise says "I LOVE YOU AHEMJI'
Now it was his turn to be floored. How did she know english? Before he could ask he saw a gujarati/english conversion book on the bed. He looked at her and smiled. He says to her then listen to me carefully..."I LOVE YOU GOPI"
She just looks at him and starts to cry. He holds her and says that we are a couple of kooks who have to do so much just to say i love you to each other...He kisses her on the forehead and realizes they are still standing by the bed. He knows he needs to stay away from the bed or he will loose control. So he carries her to the sofa. He sits on the sofa and puts her on his lap and makes her look at him. He sees tears in her eyes and a smile on her face and her cheeks have turned a beautiful shade of pink. He knew they were exactly were they were supposed to be. He pulls her closer and decides this is the time for action not words. He decides to tease her with his kisses and plants a very soft kiss on her forehead. Then he looks for the reaction. Shyly smiles. Good! Now time for a kiss on her eyes...first the right eye and then left eye. Reaction. Turning a shade darker than pink closer to red. Good! He then kisses her on her cheeks...again first right cheek and then the left cheek. Reaction. No time she escapes his torture and runs but he is faster than her and catches her before she is anywhere near the door. That damned door. It needs to be sealed tight with only them inside. Now that is a nice plan. Wait back to my wife. He holds her and kisses her on the back of the neck. She leans into him unable to control her moan, which escapes her lips. He is delirious by now. He slowly turns her around and lifts her face and says I was not done yet! She tries to hide her face but, he cups her face in his hands and very gently kisses her on the lips. Just like getting a feel for her and allowing her to feel him. They were both lost in their own little world and so this continues for a while. When Ahem could not hold off any longer he goes a little further into the kiss...still holding back. TORTURE!!! He gently tastes her and likes it and she seems to be enjoying as well. Down boy down. He pulls her closer and takes the kiss to the highest level. He plunges his tongue into her mouth and moans when she responds with the same passion. He pulls her closer and then she just shrieked and jumped. She does not understand why there is a bulge hard as a rock in his pants. She looks at his crotch area and is not aware of the war waging in her husbands trousers. He smiles at her innocence and takes her hand and put it there for her to feel him and says this what you do to me. You are unaware of your power over me. I have never wanted anything more in my life more than I want you. But I don't want to make you feel obligated. With that she releases him and grabs her pallu. She does not know what to do with that and what to do next. He comes closer and tells her if he is taking it too far then she should stop him and he won't mind. She stays still. So far so good. He takes her into his arms again and starts where they left off. She could feel his arousal and something in her stirs. She felt like she wanted to touch it more. She liked the feel of it in her hands. But she had let go because he kept looking at her. She had read some books about sex and what to expect but this was a whole new territory. The book only mentioned the actual action not the reaction or the foreplay. She was enjoying. She put her arms around his waist and she also pulled him closer so she could feel his arousal which made Ahem moan with madness. She then starts to caress his back from the shoulders to his buttocks. At first she was hesitant, but when he didn't protest she continued. Ahem on the other hand felt if Gopi asked me to stop now, I don't know if I could. So far so good. The kiss was taking them to a plane of euphoria. They could not think and all they did was stand there feeling each other and kissing with their tongues dancing with each other.
Ahem released her from his grip to Gopi's dismay and then proceeded to undress her. She was shy at first but then got over it and helped him. When the sari had come off her top and he could see her standing in front of him in all her glorious splendor, he couldn't resist and leaned and tried to suck her breast thru the blouse. The feelings of him touching her was driving her mad. She would rather die than ask him to stop. She started to unhook her blouse to which Ahem realized was a better plan. In his need to have her he lost all senses. When she was released from the confines of the blouse and bra. He admired her for a second and then just bent down to continue. His back was going to give out if he kept bending this way. So he grabs her by the waist and walks to the wall and pulls her up so her breasts are leveled to his mouth. she went insane and tried to put her legs around him without success. He noticed and knew her petticoat was getting in the way. So he pulled her skirt up to her waist and pulled her down to him. They were both so much into each other, neither of them thought of using the bed. This was too comfortable and pleasing to move. Ahem rips her panties, no patience for anything else. And then he removes his pants and boxers. But just before entering her he realizes this is her first time and it is going to hurt her. so he carried her holding on to the same position and took her to bed. He told her it is going to hurt because it is her first time and not to worry he was going to be as gentle as possible. Gopi on the other hand was wanting more and could care less about how much it would hurt. She just wanted him. He continued to tease her with kisses on her breasts and navel. He wanted to go south but decided to play that card next time. Something to look forward to. When he saw that she was ready and he knew he had been ready for quite a while now, he told her to hang on. It was going to hurt. She in turn held his shoulders and when he entered she let out a little whimper. She wanted to scream but knowing this is evening time, anyone could be home. He on the other hand was very gentle with her and kissed her tears and told her how much he loved her over and over again. Then the love making took a turn towards passion and all senses and pain and the world was lost to both of them. When he felt he could climax he held off. He wanted to have her be pleased as well. And they both reached their peek together. In their own little world, after the fact. Ahem kept kissing Gopi on her lips and face without moving from his position of love making. She did not want him to move as well. He looked at her and said that wall thing felt like fun. Since it was her first time, he brought her to bed. But next time it is going to be there. Gopi hid her face in his neck and he just laughed loud enough for her ears only. Just like the I love you's and the other endearments being said during love making. About a hour later Ahem filled Gopi in about his family's whereabouts and said we should get dressed and go downstairs. She agreed and they straightened up their room and went out. They talked to the family like normal and ate with the family like nothing changed. But Kokila knew something in their relationship had changed and it was for the better. It was her time to stay out of it and stayed out she did. At night Ahem asked Gopi to go and keep ba company since he had to finish some work and he would not be able to concentrate with her around. He told her to come back in 30 minutes.
Thirty minutes later the whole house was asleep. And Gopi made her way to her room, smiling. She was on cloud nine and she couldn't hide her happiness for long. When she walked into her room she saw that Ahem had a bouquet of her favorite flowers on the bed and he had a sexy gown laid out for her. She could not see him anywhere. As soon as she crossed the threshold of the room she heard the door latch and turned to see Ahem standing by the door and smiling with his arms wide open for her to fall into. She ran to him and he picked her up and said have I told my beautiful wife I LOVE YOU lately? She nodded no and so he kissed her all over her neck repeating those three little words. He let go of her and asked her to wear that and come back out. Just before she was about to close the bathroom door he says, listen don't wear the underclothes. It is a waste of time and winked at her. She could not face him anymore and shut the bathroom door. He just smirked. He had the same effect on Gopi and She did on him. Perfect match. When she came out he could see only the outline of her body and not the face. He went closer and she was the same shade of hot pink as the gown. He says you look awfully sexy Mrs. Gopi Ahem Modi. She hugs him and starts kissing him all over his face like he did her earlier. He was enjoying the attention and the ability to let Gopi show her love for him. He picked her up and went to the same wall and said were did we leave of at? She smirked and let her shoulder straps fall to expose herself to him. He was in awe of the sight in front of him. She encouraged him to go on. Didn't have to ask him twice. She grabs his face and makes him look at her and she says...Mr. Ahem Modi you are the sexiest man I have ever seen and I get to have you all to my self. I feel like the luckiest woman in the universe. Ahem could not control his emotions and lowered her a little so he could kiss her on the lips. She obliged and then she did something that he never expected. She said she wanted to feel him inside her while she was on the wall and this time he obliged. The love making was something out of the books. Beyond their wildest imagination. The feel of him inside her melted her like butter and the feel of her on him made him see stars and fireworks. This was the beginning of a love that was meant to be. It took long because it was to stand the test of time. Nothing can come in-between them. NOTHING!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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omg that was a super hot update😍...well done

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