Barsaat ki ek raat updated RaJi page 14 jan 28/12 - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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welcome to the forum...
its wonderful nice os
and looking forward to ur gohem story too
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dhabu89




😲I am sorry to make you sick. Its just that romance comes in all ages.😉 I will write a warning of who the story is about so the reader can decide if he/she wants to read it!😊



I agree with you. Romance comes in all ages and there is nothing wrong in it. Its a beautiful experience and being aged doesn't mean you stop enjoying life😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It is raining hard and Kinjal is finding it hard to sleep. She hates the rain. She wishes Dhaval would come back from his business trip so she could sleep carefree. She does not love Dhaval but has gotten used to him being next to her at night. She lets out a small laugh thinking how in her own home at MM she was never afraid to be alone and here in this small house she needs Dhaval next to her. This is all because of Urmi and her Kalakaris😡

Just as she finishes her thought Dhaval walks into the room and sees Kinjal awake and looking scared. Dhaval goes near Kinjal and says "Kinjalji aap theek hai na? Aap abhi tak soyi nahi? Kahin aap mere intezaar toh nahi karti thi?" ("Kinjalji are you ok? Why are you still awake? Could it be that you were waiting for me?")

Kinjal at first looks at Dhaval with anger and then decides to tell him the truth which she wants him to know... So she says "Dhavalji mujhe neend nahi aati aur kuch nahi". ("Dhavalji I am just not sleepy nothing else") So Dhaval goes near her and takes her hand and makes her sit on the bed and says "aajaao mein tumhe sulaata hoon. ("Come I will help you sleep") Kinjal was about to protest but just then Dhaval slowly massages her shoulders and asks her to turn around so her back is towards him. This will help in massaging her whole back. Kinjal looks at Dhaval for a sec and decides its safe and allows him to continue...
Kinjal is so lost in the moment that without realizing she leans her back on Dhaval and says "Dhavalji ye masaum kitna romantic hai na?" ("Dhavalji this weather is so romantic, right?") Dhaval who has already lost his senses when she leaned into him just groans. At the sound of his groan Kinjal sits up and turns around to look at him and sees the effect she has on him. She knew he was putty in his hands but never knew to what extent. She could not take her eyes off him... They have a long eye lock moment and then Dhaval thinking it is ok reaches and caresses Kinjal's cheek with the back of his fingers. She is shocked at first but soon looses all her senses as well. Dhaval leans in closer to kiss her and she suddenly becomes shy and runs from there and goes to the window. Dhaval comes behind her and hugs her from behind and kisses the back of her neck. This time Kinjal groans. Dhaval turns her around and holding the back of her neck brings her face closer to him and kisses her with all the passion he has felt for her all along. She can feel his excitement and falls prey to the moment of passion. Dhaval breaks the kiss long enough to carry her to the bed and lays next to her. Dhaval looks at her and cannot believe she is willing to be his tonite. He says "Kinjalji aap bestem best ho" ("Kinjalji you are the best of the best") She turns her face away from him feeling shy and Dhaval continues the pursuit of making her his finally.
He starts to kiss her on her neck and slowly moves down towards her cleavage and tries to undo her top. Seeing that he is having a little trouble Kinjal offers her help. Dhaval looks at her and lets her undo her dress while he continues to explore Kinjal's neck with kisses. He nips her a little and she squeals and giggles. He knew he had her wanting for more. When Kinjal is done undoing her top he puts his hand under her kurta and explores her stomach slowly moving up. He goes back to kissing her on the lips and passion takes over. Kinjal removes his shirt while caressing his body which only makes him groan more...She breaks the kiss and trails kisses on his neck and nips his ear. He looks at her and she just laughs and that just made him hotter for her. He helps her remove her clothes and she helps him remover his clothes. After a long exploration of Kinkal's body he gets on top of her and enters her to make her his forever. They had their eyes closed and their bodies moved as one. Kinjal never knew that loving someone like this would be so intoxicating. She and Dhaval reached their peek together and crashed next to each other. Kinjal moved over to put half her body over Dhaval's body and hug him. She looks at him and smiles. He kisses her forehead and hugs her back. Slowly they both drift of to sleep.
In the morning Kinjal wakes up with only a flimsy sheet covering her and Dhaval. She sits up with the sheet barely covering her bosom and looks over at Dhaval. He is sleeping with the sheet barely covering his personal effects. She sees that he has a FINE body. His hard stomach and his strong muscular arms were like eye candy. She could not believe this is the man she wanted nothing to do with. She regrets how she treated him and vows to be a better wife and lover. Last night she just needed to be held but, after his kisses she knew she wanted him and it was spectacular😳 She also vowed that she would make up for all her hateful words she had spurted at him. And she thanks god that she did not take over a year like her brother to realize what a gem she has got next to her. Dhaval was watching her and wondering what she was thinking and he sits up and sees a smile on her face. He knew that last night would not be called a mistake but a beginning of something special.
He kissed her back and says "what are you thinking Kinjalji?" She turns around and sees him sitting next to her and she just hugs him tight and says "thank you for showing what love really is. I am sorry for not understanding you earlier...But from today I will be the best wife and lover for you...promise". He says "really? So lets start now by replaying last night". He kisses her and they both show each other how much they love each other and how much they belong together...And that dear friends is how their love blossomed😉😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome os...kinjal realising the value of dhawal...who is next raji or gohem...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Welcome to the forum. Hey i loved both the stories but a bit more partial to korag!! It loved them romancing and the hindi dialogues made me blush!! Cant imagine parag n koki. The dhaval kinjal had me thinking tat kinjal was super impressed with his skills and was bowled over. Looking forward to other stories
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Posted: 13 years ago
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After a long day at the office Chirag liked to just relax in his room. He did not like the way Rashi is treating his wife and son. Just then he hears the door open and Hetal walks in. She gives one of her beautiful smiles and goes to change clothes. He cannot believe how much effect she still had on him after all these years. Theirs was a quite love. Not the kind where it was talked about or even mentioned among themselves. He also realizes that it has been a while since he and Hetal have been romantic.
Hetal comes out of the bathroom and sees that Chirag is in deep thought and walks up to the foot of the bed and says "Shu tahiyu?" (whats wrong?") He comes out of his daze and sees her in a lemon yellow night sari...his favorite color. He looks at her and says "kya baat hai, aaj mere maan pasand ke rang ki sari pehni hai?" (What's up, you are wearing my favorite color sari?") Hetal realizes where is mind is drifting off to and says "haan! Voh aap ko patana joh tha!!!" ("yes, since I had to seduce you!!!")
And with that Chirag gets up and walks over to Hetal and takes her hand and kisses it giving Hetal the giggles. Chirag loved the way Hetal giggled. That was one of the main points of his attraction towards her. The fact that she was beautiful was just a bonus. He moves closer to her and he is now holding both her hands in his and holding it close to his chest and says "Hetal mein hamesha aap se pyar karta aaya hoon. Aaj bhi itne saaloon baad kuch nahi badla". ("Hetal I have always loved you and after all theses years nothing has changed.") Saying that he leans down and kisses her. She looks timid and quite but is quite a tigress when they are alone. She stands on her tip toes and kisses him back putting her arms around his neck. When they part from the kiss Chirag says "ek din aaisa tha jab mein tumhe utha sakta the...lekin...aab nahi kar sakunga". ("there was a day when I use to carry you...but...now I cannot. Saying that he leads her to the bed and lays down pulling her along so she lands on top of him. He knows that is how she liked it. She always said her likes and dislikes in love making so there would be no disappointments. She giggles again and they continue to kiss. After what seemed like years, she starts to caress him in all the right places. After all the years they have been together she knows all his sensitive areas. One thing leads to another and when they see fireworks behind their closed eyes, they fall into each other arms and fall asleep. The next morning Chirag is woken up with a steaming kiss from Hetal as a thanks for an amazing night. And Chirag promises it won't be the last. And Hetal is going to make sure he stands up to his promise😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Welcome to the forum 😛
And it was absolutely lovely1😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey there...

Welcome to the forum...you are gonna love it here.
And am waiting for Gohem! 😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😉Ready for RaJi? Here goes...
It had been over two months since all her kalakaries were exposed. Koki kaki was the worst. She knew Rashi wasn't innocent but she did not expect this much hatred towards her Gopi Vau. Now two months later Koki had calmed down a little and was even civil towards her to the point of teaching her right from wrong. Rashi finally felt like a member of the family. And she also realized that all she needed to do was be a good daughter-in-law in order to be treated with love like Gopi. I guess better late than never. Rashi had everything she wanted. Her in-laws loved her, she was finally a sister to Gopi and they shared all their ups and downs together. Infact it was because of Gopi she was given another chance in this house. And for that alone Rashi would never go back to her old ways. Rashi's dad had retired and moved to Ahmedavad so Urmi could not interfere in her life. Everything was all set except for Jigar. He still had not forgotten and he had not forgiven. When the whole truth came out he was mad as hell for putting his pyari bhabhi thru all this hell. At first Rashi hated Gopi for having such a effect on Jigar. But now she knows that when Jigar loves his family he would do anything to protect them. But when would he forgive her? She had to do something to seduce him. But what?
One week later Jigar came back home from a business trip and Rashi was over the moon. She knew this would be the time and she was not going to let this moment pass. Gopi had told her that all Jigar did was ask about her when he had called.
Rashi decorated their room as if it was suhaag raat. Just the thought of it made Rashi blush. She knew she would have to make the first move since Jigar was unwilling to cave in. She made sure she bought a sexy dress with buttons that went all the down the front. And of course special underclothes to wow Jigar. It was all in his favorite color...RED!!! Jigar had told her it was the sexiest color but in those days Rashi could have cared less. Now she was going to do everything in her power to make Jigar forgive her and make her his. Again thinking of all this makes her blush again.
Jigar had just completed his report to his bhai and dad in the study. He was in no hurry to go to his room. He loved Rashi and he could see she had changed...but...he could not forget his bhabhi's face when she was blamed for everything by Koki kaki. And it was all because of Rashi. He wished he could forget. He had no choice but to go to his room. He was walking when he heard his bhabhi calling out to him. He turned around and waited till Gopi bhabhi caught up to him. She came close and said "Devarji...voh...mujhe malum hai ki aap ko Rashi ki baare mein kuch nahi sunna...Lekin...Devarji Rashi ben sach mein badal gayi hai. Unko ek mauka aur de do ...Please?".("Devarji...well...I know you don't want to discuss Rashi...but...I really think she has changed. Please give her a chance to prove it)" Jigar could not believe that after all she had been thru she was willing to forgive. He just smiled at her and nodded. Gopi prayed to her Kanaji that Devarji and Rashi come close enough to mend their broken trust and love.
Jigar walks in the room and sees Rashi lighting a candle. At first he is elated. Then he goes back to the angry young man attitude and says "Rashi, ye kaun sa naya natak hai tumhara? Ye mat samjo ki mein pattne walla hoon!!! ("Rashi, what is this new drama of yours? Don't assume I am going to cave in")
Rashi sees Jigar and goes to him and holds his hand and kisses it. She then gets on her knees and folds her hand in front of Jigar and says "Jigarji ye koi naya natak nahi...Mein sach mein aap se pyar karti hoon. Mere rom rom mein aap he basse hain. Aap mujhe ek mauka doh mein app ko eahsaas dilaoongi...Kasem se" ("Jigarji this is no new drama. You are the one and only for me. Please give me one more chance and I will prove it to you...promise.")
With that she gets up and goes to the radio and puts in a CD and starts her song...careless whisper by George Michael. She turns around and starts dancing in a very sexy way and goes to Jigar and rubs her body to his to see his reaction. Jigar shows no reaction only anger...Rashi is thinking to herself...try as you may I know that had a huge effect on you as it did me...And on the other side Jigar is thinking If she continues like this I may not be able to stop myself. Then Rashi does something that takes Jigar by complete surprise...On this side Rashi feels she needs to go bold so she stands in front of Jigar and slowly starts to unbutton her dress. Jigar's jaw drops and then he sternly looks at her and says "Rashi...ruko. Aage kuch mat karna. Varna aacha nahi hoga". ("Rashi...stop. Don't go any further. Otherwise nothing good is going to happen")
Rashi feels sad thinking there is no hope so she slowly turns around and with tears in her eyes she starts to button up her dress. She did not even notice Jigar coming around and standing in front of her. Jigar puts his hand on top of Rashi's and she is shocked. She looks up at him and sees him smiling. Now she is totally confused. Jigar says "Mera matlaf tha ye kaam mujhe karna hain. ("I meant to say that I wanted to do this")
Rashi is so floored by this comment coming from Jigar that she cannot hold her tears and just jumps on him and hugs him. Jigar holds her and comforts her. He says "Rashi, I know you love me. I also love you more than myself. I was just hurt by your actions. Today I was not in the mood to deal with you , but when I came in and saw all that you had done I lost myself. I want you more than you realize. He opens his arms a little to allow himself to face Rashi and kisses her on the forehead. He then says, by the way...thanks for wearing my favorite color inside...Rashi blushes and then Jigar says I like red because when you are shy your cheeks turn red. Like right now. With that he carries Rashi and sits on the bed and puts Rashi on his lap. He then takes a lock of her hair and moves it from her face. He slowly brings Rashi's face towards him and starts to gently touch his lips to hers. He feels Rashi shiver. Slowly and surely he increases the depth of his kisses. When the kisses get steaming hot he puts her on the bed and starts unbuttoning her dress. Rashi looks at him dazed and starts taking offf his shirt. She cannot believe she is going to be loved by her Jigarji in such a intense way. Jigar drops little kisses down her neck moving south slowly. He takes her hands and puts them on his body willing her to explore him. She enjoys the feel of his skin under her hands. Rashi and Jigar both moan to the feel of the others hand. Jigar comes back to Rashi's face and starts kissing her lips again. And slowly when he felt that Rashi was ready he moves in between her legs and makes love to her. All the pent up emotions and love were being poured out from each of them. Jigar makes Rashi look at him so he can see that she is also enjoying this as much as he is. They loose themselves in the moment of explosion😳
After a few moments Rashi leaves Jigar's side to get up. Jigar asks "where do you think you are going?" Rashi in a very shy way says "to wear my clothes". To that Jigar says " who says I am done with you?" Saying that he pulls Rashi back to bed and under him and says after such a long time you and I are together...I don't want this night to end. Rashi could not control herself and starts crying. Jigar says "kya hua?" ("whats wrong?") And then he realizes why and he caresses her and kisses her on her lips and says "let the bygones be forgotten, Rashi. Today after you and I had such a beautiful experience together I want to concentrate on that". Rashi turns to Jigarji and initiates the kiss on his lips. Jigar did not have to be hit over the head to get the message. The make love again before finally falling asleep in each others arms. In the morning Jigar wakes up and sees it is still too early and looks at Rashi and all her god given beauty and sighs. Rashi feels Jigarji's eyes on her and she tries to cover herself but Jigar stops her and brings her closer to make love to her once more. When they were done he turns to Rashi and says "I would like to wake up like this every morning". Rashi blushes and says "me too. Thank you Jigarji for loving me. I love you with all my heart and soul..."And I promise to never make you feel disappointed in me again. Jigar with a smirk on his face says "well last night and this morning was a good start". When he sees Rashi going red he just laughs and hugs her till it was time to wake up and start the day. A new day. A new beginning for both Jigar and Rashi😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow..! great.. u should write more... raji was too awesome...
Edited by rashi.krishna - 13 years ago

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