SS: To Belong Part *Note on page 70*

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angelirebelli

@angelirebelli

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#441

OMG.. that was simply super !! Where on Gods earth do you get these ideas from ?

Needless to say, loved every bit of it... it was just awesome.. you are my JM for no reason.. ⭐️

Each and every scene fit in beautifully, I love the way Ahem is putting Gopi first and thinking for her and them. Love the fact that is isn't uptight or shy.. The best bit was Ahem playing Cupid.. This Gopi is one lucky girl...😊

Thank for taking the time to update *superwoman*.. you are on a roll.. and we aren't complaining.. 😃

Keep 'em coming Babe...I am anxious to read the next part but please take your time.. 😳

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Hetal

@Hetp

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#442

Today for d first time i read ur SS n i was completely shocked...Shock i mean i have no words to appreciate u...ur story is beyond d appreciation words mindblowing,awesome,excellent...it touch my heart...n today for the first time in my life i was actually crying while i was reading...Thank u my dear friend for writing such an awesome SS... i m desperately waiting for ur next update to come😊

Will u plz do a favour for me ...plz. plz ...when u will update d next part plz sent me a pm informing that u have posted d next update...Again plz😊

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@MereMahiyaa.

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#443

AmazinG Update😃

LOved it

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kavya

@Kavya.S

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#444

shilpa i loved it...wow amazing update
divya seems to be very sweet and will be a wonderful partner for jigar...
well cant wait to see how they will tell their feelings to each other
and gohem i just love them...i enjoyed the whole update
cant wait to read about the ceremony

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sweety

@sweetsugar

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#445

Fabulous part Shilpa , Ahem is such a darling Hubby , the joy and happiness within him clearly come out as his changed behaviour ,it is due to those around him.

And finally VICTORY Comes with PATIENCE , Ahems proposal to gopi was soo heart touching and i am soo glad Gopi gave in this time 😃

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ANJ4

@ANJ4

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#446

what a fantistic update ... love all the gohem scenes ...they are so cute

also love how close ahem n jigar have goten...

looking forward to the update

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navyab

@navyab

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#447

Hey Shilpa...do you know why I like your SS so much...because it is so close the real characters in SNS...Ahem doubtful of himself when it regards Gopi...Gopi giving Ahem another chance without a hesitation...Koki trying to sound stern...& Gopi showing her ring...

You have written such a wonderful part where Ahem has redeemed himself of all the past doings...& giving so much to enjoy & lookforward in life 😉

Well everyone in the family has been aware of Ahem & Gopi...but one person has missed it ...so will she throw in a suprise????

The marriage & Godh Bharai...are the ceremonies which Im definetely waiting for...will Ahem also finally be content belonging to his love...currently he is happy to see Gopi is letting go herself & belonging to him...will he also do that & let her know about it 😉

Well the greed in me says...I need the next part 😛