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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 13
It was morning, the sun was smiling through the calm clouds. Everyone woke up and went downstairs, while Gopi was in the temple preparing aarti. When everyone finishes their pooja, they were at the breakfast table.
Gopi was serving everyone some delicious food, throughout the whole of breakfast time, Ahem was staring at Gopi who was still angry at him. It was burning the inside of Ahems body. Normally he would stare at him back, he wishes she could cheekily wink at him again, or read his thought telepathically and say "Gee..apne Kuch kaha?" even though it was annoying that time, he wishes she could do that again. He could do anything for Gopi at this moment. He even could dress up as a clown and apologize to her effectively. Few minutes later Raj came down and sat down in his usual seat. "sorry everyone I'm late again.. Just finished packing ready to leave after breakfast." Raj said, taking a piece of a dokhla and put it ion his plate. Eveyone was shocked...they put their folks down and just glared at raj. Ahem was also paralyzed of guilt. "wha...what..raj u can't go now, it's been a week I stayed?" hetal and ahem said it at the same time. Ahem stood up and glanced at raj. Suddenly raj started talking. "I got a phone call last night and it was best friend...he is in hospital ina critical state, I must leave immediately, also he's mu mums friends son" raj said looking serious, "but guys seriously, u lot r so kind and gave me so much love, and Ive also taken so many photographs of u
lot, I will always cherish them all my life. Once again, Thank u" raj said it in his strong britsh accent,
Ahem looked at raj with his apologetic face. "raj can..I talk to u for a minute.. Please?" ahem asked,
looking dead serious. "if it's about my Gucci guilt perfume then no I dnt have that perfume anymore, I
finished the whole bottle but I got it fro-" raj was joking about, Ahem immediately stopped him from
talking. "no raj it's not about ur perfume, please come outside. Raj nodded his head and followed
Ahem.
It was quiet atmosphere, thebirds were flying across the sky, the sun was smiling. Ahem
looked at raj and kneeled down, ready to say sorry. "raj I'm sorry..please forgive me...I...I
misunderstood u-" ahem couldn't finish as raj held his shoulders and dragged him up. "dude r u crazy..
U r ruining ur reputation and u dnt want that. Look I know u created the whole STD thing, but
seriously I know y u did this." raj said looking at his confused cousin. "U..u do?" ahem asked. "yes, u
did it for Gopi babhi. Look. I know u love her ahem and she obviously without a question loves u, but u
have to give her a chance, jigar told me all bout u and her difficult relationship. Dudeits time for u to fix
this." raj said patting on the back of Ahems shoulder. Ahem looked at him softly and nodded. "yes.. Ur
right raj, I will tell her I love her tonight, but I lied to her will she..accept my apology?" ahem
questioned, looking nervous as ever. "ahem.. Love is powerful, Gopi will have no choice but will indeed
forgive u, u just have to show ur romance on her." raj said, grinning when he said the last sentence.
"Ahem smiled and nodded, then he gave raj a manly hug." raj.. Thank u and sorry, ur a gr8 guy and if
u do want a pure indian girl..then.. GO TO SHAADi.COM!" ahem joked, then both of them burst out
laughing, "oh..man ur a joker!" raj said, laughing so much. "Thanks again, and please dnt go, just stay
for little" ahem said in a friendly way. Raj shook his head and ushered ahem back to modis house.
Ahem was just glad to find a new friend in his life.

Everyone was outside saying goodbye to raj
as he was already in the drivers car. He gave a last smile and a wave at Ahem and Gopi, then cheekily
winked at Ahem. He then instantly took off.
Everone headed back inside and found the big
mansion already so quiet without raj.

It was beautiful night, the stars spread across the
midnight blue, moon was scanning the entire place of India. Ahem was on the bed pretending to read,
waiting for his beautiful wife.
Gopi came in, she shut the doors and locked it, then she grabbed
her night wear sari and headed to the washroom. She came out and shocked, her Ahemji was leaning
down on one knee. Pleading. "Gopi sorry" ahem apologised. Gopi made a "not good enough" look and
turned away. Ahemquickly grabbed her arm and pulled her towards his chest. "Gopi..I'm sorry, deeply I
apologize,I treated u like shit and u deserve more than this, I'm sorry gopijee." ahem said it very
passionately. Gopi looked up to see if he meant it. Then she slowly smiled, believing every words of his.
"fine.. Dnt ever lie like this again, if u do..then I'll upload my picture on SHAADi.com and marry someone else." Gopi said it seriously the. They both stood their laughing out so loud. "u heard mine and raj's conversation?"" ahem asked, "yes, and that was sweet of u, thank u, glad u said sorry to him" Gopi smiled and hugged her ahmji tightly. "deal, I won't ever lie to u again, but I will love u. Forever." ahem said it in a sweet velvet voice, while Gopi closes her eyes and held her lover. "yes I got my sexy wife back!" ahem thought out loud, "Gee..apne Kuch kaha?" Gopi asked confused. "nehi...Kuch nehi." ahem
Smiled and closed his eyes, holding his beautiful wife. All night, ready to make love. The end x
Edited by Nadiamimi18 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved it,it was unbelieveable,amazing,i hope u make another story!,loved how Ahem said to Gopi 'limeshit'🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
LOVELY,,, very nice...sooo sweet! raj and ahem scene was nice!!
whens the next FF coming up?? LOL...loved the story...

x.x.FAHIMA.x.x
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Posted: 13 years ago
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A Gopi and Ahem story 3 will be done over Xmas holiday xx glad u guys enjoyed it :) xx
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nadiamimi18

A Gopi and Ahem story 3 will be done over Xmas holiday xx glad u guys enjoyed it :) xx



hey!! xmas holidays has one and a half weeks left!! please try to update sooner...thankyou!! xx
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I'll try...but this week I'm really busy, also it gets me thinking of more cute scenes lol, so thanks famzii, ur story is amazing too, xx keep it up xx
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nadiamimi18

I'll try...but this week I'm really busy, also it gets me thinking of more cute scenes lol, so thanks famzii, ur story is amazing too, xx keep it up xx



aww, take ur time.. sorry to bother you!! well i know what ur stree is like, always see my sister feeling all stressed!! well update at ur pace. aww, im happy you like my story...xx will do!!


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Posted: 13 years ago
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No ur not bothering me at all, I find it pleasure writing stories for u all, xx thanksxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was very good...wish u had not ended it..
will be waiting for ur next ff
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Posted: 13 years ago
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What a great story... Made me feel so good. THanks for making my evening.

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