A Gopi and Ahem story 2 updated must read:)

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hi guys sorry i couldent wait, but heres the series 2, rember it is nothing to do with the story 1, so enjoy:

Part 1


White dazzling
moon stood still like a statue, scanning the entire place of india. Down the
western horizon there lived a city called Mumbai. The moon reflected towards
the modi mansion, where everyone was asleep, except from this one person,
innocent as a child, beautiful as a rose. Gopi. Gopi loves to visit in her
world of fantasy, where all her enchanted dreams comes true, dreams which might
take a long time to be true in the real world. All she dreams about her one and
true love, Ahem. Gopi loves her Ahem so much that she could risk her own life
for him.


Gopi was
staring at Ahem who was in deep sleep.
she was staring at his heart shaped lips, wondering how it would feel like to
trace around it with her own finger. The wind was whooshing through the opened
windows, creating irritating sound. Gopi got up, walked lazily towards the window,
shut both of them together, and locked it. Suddenly, Ahem woke up with a
startle, he looked at Gopi for a few moment; thinking how beautiful she looks as
the white moon was highlighting her fair smooth skin. When gopi finally turned
around, Ahem immediately shut both of his eyes, pretending to sleep. Gopi let
out a huge sigh, and smiled at her lover and whispered " I love you, ahemji". Then
she walked away, ready to fall asleep. Ahem opened his eyes and smiled, he was
delighted to hear the 3 magical words that came out from Gopi, as ahem turned
to the side, he thought out loud and said, " I love you too gopiji", suddenly
gopi got up and looked at ahem, Ahem immediately closed his eyes. Gopi itched
her head with confusion and went back down to sleep, ready to dream about her
Ahemji. to be contued :)




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Posted: 13 years ago
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Yay im glad you've made another story,loving it,continue please😊
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Part 2

The hot blazing sun shined through the kitchen window. It was lunch time and all the men were at work, kokila was in the living room reading newspaper, while her lovely daughter in law was cooking her Ahemji's favourite food. Gopi made so many items for desert, she made 2 different types of Indian sweets and one big plate of yellow, sweet laddoos for her ahemji.

Ding, dong, the bell rang. Kokila got up and opened the big double doors, she was surprised to see her son ahem home really early. 'jai shri Krishna, mom', Ahem greeted. 'jai shri Krishna, Ahem how come your home early?', kokila says. ' Oh, i just finished my work really quick, so i decided to come home', Ahem claimed giving his mom a sweet smile. Kokila nodded her head and went up the stairs. Ahem walked in, then suddenly stopped, the scent of fresh made laddoos struck him like a magic love potion. He followed the scent towards the kitchen and saw gopi preparing all the laddoos on to a plate. 'yum, i am so hungry, but how am i gong to eat them now when gopi is there, i don't want her to know how i much i like her cooking, and im hungry', ahem murmured to himself. But then Ahem thought of a plan to get rid of gopi. He smiled and walked towards the kitchen, and quickly turned his expression to neutral. 'Erm...Gopi..', Ahem called struggling to get the words out. Gopi turned around, surprised to see her Ahemji standing in front of her. 'Gee..aap?' 'Erm...voh...mera blue folder is upstairs, can you get it for me...ple...ase?' ahem was so bad at lying, he hesitated so much but gopi didn't notice. 'Gee', gopi quickly said and went out of the kitchen, while Ahem looked after her. 'yes!!!! Laddooo time', ahem said happily. He headed towards the plate of laddoos and stuffed 2 BIG laddoos in his mouth together, he was finding it hard to swallow and chew at the same time. Ahems mouth was full! Suddenly Gopi came back, as she forgotten to off the gas. Shocked to see ahem's cheek blown up! To be continued.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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what is stopping both from expressing feelings to each other !!! Good start
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Jeej new Story
very nice start Cant wait to read the next part~!
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Part 3

Ahem stood there, frozen into an ice. His face went completely red, so red that it looked like he was itching his face and turned bright red. ''gee voh...aap teek ko?'' gopi wondered, looking worried. Ahem's mouth was FULL with not 1 but 2 laddoos, his cheeks looked enormously huge, his face is still cherry red. Ahem tried to smile with his mouth full, instead he nooded his head and replied ' Mmm...hmmm' ahem moaned and quickly nodded his head, struggling so much to talk. Suddenly gopi looked down at mushroom Bhaji in front ahem, gopi knows that ahem is allergic to mushrooms, she thinks that ahem ate it, gopi panicked! 'Ahemji!...aap..aap mushroom kaya...kyun?...you know your allergic to mushrooms, so, why?'' gopi panicked, putting both of her hands on her mouth. ' look at your cheeks..is all blown up!' gopi said worrying. 'How stupid can Gopi get, but Ahem you have to save yourself from those laddoos, mushrooms are the only solution', Ahem thought. So then Ahem nodded, 'Emm...mmm..hmmm', he moaned, nodding non stop with his mouthful. 'Maaji...maaji...jal-' gopi couldn't finished her sentence as she was calling her mother in law really loud, meanwhile Ahem quickly ran towards her and covered her mouth with his hand. 'Mmm..hmmm.' Ahem moaned, shaking his head looking worried. Her quickly let go of his hand and ran out of the kitchen and headed towards the downstairs bathroom. He finally swallowed his food and looked into the mirror. 'Oh god AHEM, you are saved, thank god Gopi didn't notice you ate the laddoos!' ahem said to his reflection, calmed down a bit. Knock knock, 'Ahem dikra, Ahem, tum ne mushroom kaya, kyun, tim teek ho na?' kokila said banging on the door. 'Mom, mein teek hu, my face is fine now as i washed it with cold water', Ahem lied, shouting through the door. He panicked and hesitated. 'Ok fine but come out now' Kokila claimed. Ahem gave out a huge sigh, closed his eyes with shame and came out. Kokila was shocked to see her son in a perfect condition, she eyed him suspiciously. 'Ahem..tum ne choot..bola, kyun?' Ahem felt more stupid than he ever could, his body spread the nervousness to his face. 'nehi..voh..I only had ...1 small piece of a mushroom..so the effects faded quickly' ahem said lieng to his mom, however kokila knew his son was a bad liar. Suddenly gopi went up to them, she found to see that Ahem was ok, more than ok. Gopi was staring at him, looking confused then she knew that ahem had laddoos as two of them went missing. Gopi blushed tensly, while Ahem was looking at gopi, embarrassed as ever. 'Oh god, i think she knows what i did', Ahem thought out loud. 'gee...aap ne kuch kaha?' Gopi asked, looking confused. 'Erm..nehi..kuch nehi..main..kapre (clothes)..' Ahem couldn't finish his sentence as he was embarrassed, he qickly turned away and headed up stairs, leaving his two favourite people behind into fit of laughter. To be continued..

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Part 4

It was dinner, the entire Modi family sat down on their chairs and ate their dinner. As Gopi was serving food, Ahem was staring at her 'wow, she looks so pretty, i love it when her cheeks turn into the colour of a pink rose', Ahem thought out loud, 'Gee...apne kuch kaha?', gopi asked, looking confused. 'seriously? Is she telepathic or something? Ahem thought, 'Nehi...kuch nehi', Ahem said sarcasticly. The Modi family finished dinner and walked towards the living room and sat comfortably on the sofas. Meanwhile Gopi came in and brought some delicious desert.

As Gopi was offering some laddoos to everyone, kokila grabbed gopi's attention with an eye contact and cheekily gesturing towards Ahem to offer him more laddoos, gopi winked at her mother in law and went up to Ahem. 'Ahemji...aap aur laddoo chaiye', Gopi offered, holding back her laughter. Ahem's face turned luminous red, he glanced towards his mom then to Gopi. 'Nehi..mujhe nehi chaiye', Ahem said in a stubborn voice. Gopi felt bad, she did make those laddoos specially for Ahem and he didn't want them anymore. So then. Gopi automatically held up Ahem's right hand and placed a laddoo on to it, Ahem was shocked and looked up at his innocent wife, he was lost in her light brown eyes, however, Gopi cheekily winked at Ahem. That very moment Ahem's heart began to sink. He felt the desire to kiss Gopi on her pink soft cheeks, he wanted her to wink again, as he found it fascinating and very cute. Gopi also got lost in Ahem's chocolatey eyes, she could melt into them. Unexpectedly, Kokila gave out an attention cough for both of them to come back to reality. Gopi straightened herself up and quickly walked towards the kitchen, smiling. Ahem flush with embarrassment looked straight down, pretending to read the magazine.

Ding dong, the door bell rang, everyones head turned around, wondered who might it be. 'ill get it' Jigar jumped up and jogged towards the double doors, opened it, shocked! 'OH MY GOD, AAP!'' to be continued...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing...i have read all the parts now in a lightning speed now again going to read slowly taking in each word..so...do update ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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theres plenty more to come so please stay tuned, theres gonna be romance, jealousy and laughs xox
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Part 5

'Jigar! Mera jigar', Raj said, hugging Jigar tightly. 'Raj bhaiya, aap, you are here in india! Seriously! I missed you so much cousin!!', Jigar claimed, hugging at his dearest cousin tightly. Raj was a young, handsome man age around 26. He originally came from London, and decied to visit his close cousin Jigar. Raj was Hetal's big brother's son. Raj was the nicest guy in the whole world. However, he used to bully Ahem when they were in their childhood time, he used to take Mickey out of Ahems weight as he used to be really skinny and short, Ahem always hated Raj, always. Raj also doesn't like to party, doesnlt like to drink. He is so handsome, however he never had a girlfriend in his life before, as he hates modernised british girls. 'Come in raj, why are you standing there for, come in' Jigar ushered him and carried his suit case. Everyone stood up and walked towards him, they were all shocked to see Raj all grown up.

'Oh my gosh..raj dikra,' Hetal's eyes lit, she went up to him and hugged her tightly. ' Jai shri Krishna auntiji, and kokila auntiji", he greeted to his aunt hetal and aunt Kokila, as both of them smiled. Meanwhile his eyes slowly drifted towards Ahem, that very moment Raj was shocked to see the short, skinny little boy, transformed to tall, tanned handsome man. ' AHEM MY MAN...NO WAY...SHUT UP...THAT IS NOT YOU DUDE!!!!!!' raj was paralysed with shock. He went up to Ahem and hugged him soo tightly, Ahem stood there frozen, disappointed as ever. 'what...y did he come...after so many years..so many bloody years!!! Im not gonna let him bully me this time' Ahem thought, sinking into the past. Raj let go and smiled at him, while Ahem gave a fake smile. 'wow..dude, your a man now arnt u', raj claimed with his strong british accent. Ahem didn't say a word, he just gave a fake smile to his childhood enemy. In the corner Gopi was smiling, ready to meet Raj, suddenly her eyes shifted to the opened door, so she decided to close it. She quickly walked towards the door, suddenly she tripped over by one of the wire plugs, she instantly was about to fall, but someone quickly grabbed her arm. She looked up to see who it was. Raj. To be continued...

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