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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Nafisa_blossoms
well the title of your OS has brought to my mind Cheryl Cole's "Fight for this love" 😆

video http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4umc87T5UMs&ob=av2n

lyrics http://www.metrolyrics.com/fight-for-this-love-lyrics-cheryl-cole.html

MY FAVOURITE SONG!😎

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Fahima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

lovely...it;s so lovely...read it after sooo long, i bookmared the page and read it today!! well what can i say... you have narrated the incidents in the epi nicely...lovely OS...loved how ahem doesnt want to leave gopi now!! and he promised to be a true ssaathiys!! Awww...very lovely...

x.x.FAHIMA.x.x

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-JollyJabeen-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

PART 2:

"Ahemji"

Ahem glanced at Gopi,she was in a sensitive state,her eye's were calling for him,threatening to close any minute but staring at her Ahemji's face gave her courage she had never felt before.She knew she couldn't visit her mother and father yet,she couldn't go to her kanhaji because over here there were people who needed her,yes this accident had been a wake-up call for Ahem,for Raashi but mostly for Gopi because now she had a sense of the world,a quest of knowledge and Gopi now knew she had to fight for this life.

"FROM HERE ON THIS IS GOING TO BE GOPI'S POV,HER BRAIN😉😆)

"Gopi","Gavar","Manhoos","Bewaqoof"

i've been cursed,faced with so many nasty words,why am i suddenly thinking like this,why am i thiinkng not everyone is nice in this world,Raashi ben,Ahemji,i love them so much yet they have given me so much pain,why?,why?

END OF GOPI'S BRAN FREEZE

Gopi awoke but she was a 'new woman'.

Something had changed and it was something big.

Gopi awoke to see her Ahemji,well not her Ahemji but Ahemji standing there,she could hear him shouting again,but why?

was it as usual because she did nothing and was to be shouted at and treated like crap?.

Nurse,i would like to talk to Ahemji and Raashi ben both alone,please Gopi requested in a silent,broken voice.

There was something about Gopi's voice which made Ahem shudder,it was so strong yet so broken,confusion was all over his face and as Raashi entered she sensed the tense atmosphere.

"Gopi,Gopi im so sorry"

"Raashi ben and Ahemji, can i ask you both something?"

Raashi and Ahem both exchanged glances,shocked at Gopi,she looked so furious for some reason,what was going on.

Raashi had to pinch herself.

"Gopi,whats wrong you seem so tense?,so broken..so emotionless."

Gopi slowly and steadily with the nurses help sat up.

"Raashi ben,i'l start with you,i love you so much but why have you caused me so much pain?,why Raashi ben,i've never realised till today,till i was going to lose my life. I don't blame you for this accident but Raashi ben,why am i always unhappy? and Ahemji,i loved you more than my life,what crme did i do?,why did you treat me so ruthlessly?,because m uneducated.Not once did you ever ask me,why am i uneducated?,not once did you consider me as a person,always a burden,always an insult but now i have called you both here to realive you from me,from today on Ahemji,i will not be your wife and from today on Raashi ben, i have no relationship with either of you"..

A very shocking outburst right guys,this is the new and transformed Gopi with a personality transplant!

The OS should be finished in the next update!

Thanks for reading guys,hope u enjoyed it!😉

DAMN I FORGOT TO INCLUDE SONG OF THE UPDATE,THANKS SO MUCH FAHIMA FOR REMINDING ME😆

SONG OF THE UPDATE:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4umc87T5UMs&ob=av3e

SNS ROCKS!

Edited by CHIKA784 - 14 years ago

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Fahima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

Shocked!! Good to see strong Gopi!! what will happen to Ahemji? and glad that she has realised that raashi ben is nto the angel!! the dialouge of gopi was so nicely written!! loved it! waiting for the next update!!!
shall the song of the update be 'fight for this love' cheryl cole?😆
x.x.FAHIMA.x.x

Edited by famzii05 - 14 years ago

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Kristin

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

Okay now you totally got me hooked chika!!!!

A minute ago she fought for her life and the next she kicks her husband and beloved sister out of it 😲 I so wonna know what Rashi's and Ahem's reaction is going to be😃 so excited!!!! Loved it!!!

Please update soon!!!

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-JollyJabeen-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: famzii05
Shocked!! Good to see strong Gopi!! what will happen to Ahemji? and glad that she has realised that raashi ben is nto the angel!! the dialouge of gopi was so nicely written!! loved it! waiting for the next update!!!
shall the song of the update be 'fight for this love' cheryl cole?😆
x.x.FAHIMA.x.x

OMG THANKS SO MUC FAHIMA,YOU REMINDED ME OF THE SONG OF THE UPDATE!😆

Yes its def 'fight for this love'😉

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-JollyJabeen-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: d-luna88
Okay now you totally got me hooked chika!!!!

A minute ago she fought for her life and the next she kicks her husband and beloved sister out of it 😲 I so wonna know what Rashi's and Ahem's reaction is going to be😃 so excited!!!! Loved it!!!

Please update soon!!!

Thanks very much Krstin,im starting to love my own OS😆

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moksha89

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Posted: 14 years ago

#28

😆

I LOVE IT! seriously, we all want gopi to say all these things & she wont! love this part.. it's like we can still release our complaints concerning these two through gopi in story if not possible on screen. could you imagine if she woke up in sns as a sherni! 🤓

Edited by moksha89 - 14 years ago