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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chika I loved it .. It is fab...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great... Very nice.. Thank you .. enjoyed reading it.. 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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well the title of your OS has brought to my mind Cheryl Cole's "Fight for this love" 😆


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: CHIKA784

Hi guys, in mot sure how this is gonna turn out but hopefully!😛

So I'm continuing this OS from yesterday's episode, here goes:

"Doctor saab,but Gopi's condition,what about the O-negative blood?!"

"Don't worry Mr Ahem,were trying our best to get blood from neighbouring hopitals,we just have to wait"

These words were a pierce to Ahem's house,he would have to hope and just wait and watch, what kind of circumstances was he in?,how did this happen so quickly?,everything changed in less than 5 hours, 5 hours ago Gopi was well,and now she was lifeless.

"Gopi vahu,wake up,wake up Gopi vahu,who did this to you?,what did the goons do,tell me, I won't spare them,Gopi vahu do NOT SLEEP,listen to your maaji,get up" Kokila screamed trying to swallow her tears.

"Kokila" said Hetal conforting her by putting her arm on her shoulder.

"Mota bhabhi,look Gopi's heart rate is decreasing!"

Gopi was twitching,she was having flashbacks,her life was being flashed before her eye's,her childhood, her parants leaving her, her marriage with Ahemji, maaji accepting her as her bahu, Ahemji and taking back of the vows,it was so painful. Gopi flinched, she tried to open her eye's to a worried Kokila screaming telling her to wake up and not sleep. She tried, she tried so hard,she had to fight it,for her Ahemji but her eye's were closing,she felt drowsy.

"DOCTOR" screamed Kokila as she ran out of the room frantically and the doctors run to start her treatment.

"Im sorry Mr Modi, we will have to start the operation right away, we have luckily received blood right now from Red Cross hospital, we are starting the operation now" and with that, the operation light turned red and it had began. The battle of Gopi's life.

Kokila was sad, she was scared and she was worried about her Gop vahu. She was praying to Krishna bagvaan to help her Gopi vahu.

"Its all because of you,because of you my Gopi is in this condition" screamed Ahem n Raashi's face with Urmila pulling Raashi back trying to protect her from Ahem's wrath.

"You left Gopi,you ran off,you were meant to protect her and be by her side" shouted Ahem taking out his anger and guilt on to Raashi.

"Nai Ahemjiju,what are you saying,I thought Gopi was behnd me and"

"RAASHI, you were the one kidnapped yet by Gopi vahu was injured"😡

"nahi kakiji,it was a mistake,the bamboo stick got tangled with my sari and I pulled it,I didn't know"

"BAS,everytime you make a mistake,all the people around you suffer,how much more pain will you give to this family,get out of our sight now!"

"Raashi just leave!" shouted an angry Jigar,Raashi again and caused pain to his family and most of all his pyaari bhabhi.

"Raashi dikra, we do not have to be insulted like this, come on dikra humph" and with that Urmila dragged Raashi out of the hospital to go to her house.

"What an insolent lady,look at her,not feeling a single thing for my Gopi vahu"

"Mom, nothing will happen to Gopi, nothing will"

Jigar consoled Ahem and Hetal consoled Kokila just than the doctor came out of the operation theatre and informed everybody the operation was successful however Gopi needs special treatment, she will be needed care very much and was in a sensitive and critical state. The Modi's insured the doctor they would take care of Gopi,relief spread over everybody's face and the whole Modi family were thanking god.

"Doctor can I meet Gopi?" asked Ahem with his mum watching him curiously.

"Yes but not to many people,shes in a sensitive condition, do not upset her,she just had the fight of her life."

Ahem walked in looking at Gopi laying down, her eye's closed and she was sleeping.

Ahem went next to the bedside,put his hand on Gopi's hand and promised to be her real and true Saathiya.😳

Kokila watched this and was proud of her dikra,her Ahem dikra and her Gopi vahu.

End of episode..To be continued.

Will Rashi or urmi's blood be O Negative their one chance to get back to Modi Bhavan Rashi should step back from mothers suggestions instead convince mother to give her blood or her mothers blood to Gopi could bring a change in either of them or are we dog's tail no matter what we remain the same. Will the serial go more interesting when Rashi back and tries to let down Gopi and this time Ahem stands for Gopi instead of Koki for once do u like this change and Rashi is let down. And the cat keeps scratching pole instead of tree breaking her nails to defeat Gopi and Ahem's relation.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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after reading your OS i cannot wait for today's show.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome os chika , intensely emotional , loved how the blood came from another hospital denying raashie a bargaining tool . That was da best part for me , also loved how u ended wud the promise that was fab.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome os.i hope this will be continued
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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
This was a terrific OS Chika.
You have written Ahem's thoughts so well.
Looking forward to this in the show this week.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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more than ahem consoling i want everyone to shout and kick urshi tomm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
That was really good. Hope you continue. 👏

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