FF: A story of hearts part 9 pg47 (23/02) - Page 30

awesome update Kristin!! sanju is still soo cute...xx and it is very hard for gopi to stay happy in front of sanju with all that pain...i feel so sorry for her...and i love that ahem was jealous, and glad you used that he thought toni was gopis husband/bofriend...and gopi showed ahem his place at that moment!! love strong gopi!! and last but not least koki...she understands gopi so well...love her!! lovely kristin!! continue soon!! 👏

Love the update ... especially that gopi has a back bone , and told ahem off... Love you gopi that is how I want SNS gopi to be at times. What a treat.

Originally posted by: varshu27

absolutely terrific update kristin...wow ...gopi has developed quite a backbone hasnt she...loved the fact that koki could see gopis love for ahem ...koki like a true mom was proud of gopi😃...ahem on the other hand is letting jealousy and rage cloud his mind...i hope he stays back without going to india...clears his head and make gopi trust him ...and make her understand his love for her...then they can go back to india as a happy family...

Thanks varshu😃

yes Gopi is finally able to open her mind and talk back to Ahem. Lets celebrate 🥳 was dreading writting this confrontation but I need it for the next stage of the story and was surprised myself how well I moved it in the right direction. and of course as true koki fan she has to be awesome in my FF 😆 Well lets see if ahem survives the shock of having Gopi talking back to him first (jk)

Originally posted by: Naina2127

Hello :)

I've just caught up with all 8 chapters of the story! (Thank god you updated right now, wouldn't have been able to stand the tension of waiting 😆)

But this is an awesome awesome story you've written! I love how Gopi has made a life for herself, is a completely independent woman standing on her own two feet. And aww Sanjana sounds adorable! :) Hope she's well soon! Aham Grr. But he needs to repent, so I'm glad to see Gopi didn't give in to his anger or his pleading or anything. Aham needs to prove to Gopi that he loves her and respects her as an individual, and won't jump to mistrust her the first chance he gets. Gopi's emotions, when she was writing the letters to Aham that she never sent, were so sad, but very well written. You captured the feelings of every individual character, their frustration, and everything wonderfully! And so happy to see Rashi actually help Jigar at this point. Hopefully we'll see their relationship on the mend too? 😆

Once again, awesome story you have here! Can't wait for the next update!

Cheers!
Naina

Hey I am Kristin😃

Thank you Naina!!!!

glad you like my FF so much and think that I captured the emotions well of everyone. I had the feeling I go a little to heavy in the emotional department but I just don't like to write conversations 😆 Yes Gopi is independent and has a backbone. I am so proud of the way she developed here because I like woman, who are confident enough to stand up for herself. Ahem still has quite a way in front of him but I will start to turn hin in a sensable human being again soon. Also I do plan to include some Raji romance as well but that is not yet possible.

Originally posted by: suk19

kirstin fabulous this story has me intrigued it was too short plse continue asap loved it thank you

Thank you suk 😃

but to short 😕 I was trying my best to make it long 😆 but will do my best for the next update

Originally posted by: CHIKA784

Reserved!👏

That was a fantastic update Kristin!😃

Loved the guts Gop showed,she was so cute,literally a really emotional piece of writing!😛

Thanks for the PM and do update soon!😊

thank so much Chika!!!!

You know me I like strong woman (fav Koki apart from Jigarle)😆 so Gopi had to be strong as well!!

I don't have all the ingredents , so I am going make chocolate chip... thank you

Originally posted by: NazmaJ

Loved it Kristin!!!!

Jealous Ahem, gutsy Gopi - Brilliant!!!!

He really is like a bull in a china shop isn't he!!! You'd think he would have learnt to think before speaking by now!!!!

Thank you Nazma 🤗

glad you liked the update with jealousy and miracles (aka Gopi being gutsy as you put it)😆

Well in the moment I am so in the habbit of bashing the poor man that I have problems making him appear any different. But he will see reason, soon hopefully. It is already planned. So lets just hope that I not throw the whole planning in the bin again!!!

Originally posted by: ANJ4

Love the update ... especially that gopi has a back bone , and told ahem off... Love you gopi that is how I want SNS gopi to be at times. What a treat.

Thank you Anju!!!😃

yeah I wish Gopi would show some backbone in the show as well. I love her as the timid rabbit she is but a little strength would do her an aweful lot of good.

Originally posted by: d-luna88

Thank you Anju!!!😃

yeah I wish Gopi would show some backbone in the show as well. I love her as the timid rabbit she is but a little strength would do her an aweful lot of good.

Like in the boothe track , when she beat the crap out of rashi.