FF: A story of hearts part 9 pg47 (23/02) - Page 32

Nice. Loved it! Keep them coming!

fabulous update kristin...loved the way julia and gopi bond with each other...amzing friends..i had a small inkling that ahem might have seen toni hugging gopi...and when u said someone staring i heard myself saying shit..not him please...and knowing his temper...ahem cud have been nothing more than a raging bull...and kokila..cant ask for anything more...i am so happy to see her proud of gopi and the way she turned out to be strong and independent and had enuf courage to confront ahem...the same like when she broke her vows...thank you os much for the pm...nice one..

Am sorry i ate your head to update and am the last one to comment. Was caught up with something and dint come online yest. Oki coming to the update it was fab!!i loved julia and sanju fighting!! Cant believe she fights like a kid. I hate ahem he s too arrogant for words. I hope gopi actually tells him she s with someone else serves him right!!! He threw her out when he wanted now he wants her and sanju back. No pl dont make it happen any time soon.

Loved the update. Ahem needs to calm and talk. He need to get to know Gopi n his daughter again.

nyc part..ahem is a nutcase here

Originally posted by: sbp1971

Thank you Kristin for updating. And what an update, hmm...I think Lord of the Rings encouraged you to show us Gopi can also be Gutsy and still remain clam. Loved the update.

Thanks so much Shilpa!!!!

it sure did help in the last fighting scene😆 but to be honest didn't get much of the movie only really looked when one of my fav scene was coming

Originally posted by: tangam

Kristin...you write serious stuff as well...just discovered this one going back to catch up will digest and then tell all...but judging from this a good read i am sure

😲 😕 😭 you are giving me a bad rep here!! Of course I can be serious ... okay for very short time spans but I can😆

Glad you loved and please do come back and tell me what you thought in detail

Thanks for the comment

Originally posted by: navyab

Loved the update Kirstin !!!!

In SNS Ahem is softening up...here he is just the same...Gopi pushed him...thats the best...earlier on he was the one who would hurt her physically...now it is her turn !!!

He is so bad with emotions that shouting is all he knows !!!! Will he ever understand the deeper feelings Gopi has for him or will he want her to follow him...

What about Sanjana...he has not even seen her once in close distance...so what will he do??? will he be able to love her...will he know about her health condition???

Waiting for your next part !!!

Thank you navyab😃

Finally I could show that Gopi not only became independent but also has developed some guts in her interaction with Ahem.

Well I fear 😆 I will have to make him a senseable person again, because i was asked to but that is still to come and about Sanjana ... no won't give any spoilers here

Originally posted by: munnihyderabad

kristin loved the update... start to end... but i am still stuck in the last scene...gr8 gr8 gr8 scene between gopi , ahem and koki...loved it...

loved the talk between julia and gopi feels so good that gopi has a true and honest friend in juliaBig smile

u made me hate ahemji (in ur ff only LOL😆) - he is soo selfish and mean -

Ahemji- u dump her becoz u think she tried to kill ur mom
- u tell her not to her face even if she is pregnant
- u donno how she is where she is is she alive or not
- now after coming to about ur daughter u want t take her back...
- now u can't see her settled with other guy
- u don't even know what all she went thru before sanjana was born and after her birth
- u r clueless about her disease
- now u want her to come with u in the next flight with ur daughter leaving all her new relations who have been her support ... how convenience and selfish is that Mr.Modi...Angry

- loved gopi talking for herself for once --- may be that's the mother in Gopi talking and not the wife in gopi

Thank you Munni😃

The last scene took me ages to start to write because I wanted to make it good but then the big battle in the lord of the rings two started and I got the energy to do it😆

Yes Julia is great, if I say so myself, I wanted someone Gopi can relate to and trust. You know a real big sister and not a second Rashi

Muhahaha 😈 my evil intensions worked out after all!!!! Now you only hate Ahem ji in my FF but it will spread.. 😆 no but seriously I needed Ahem to be an big **** and he did me the favour to he one and now I am stucked with the problem of turning him into something likable again

Well I think that was mostly the mother but also the new independent and confident Gopi speaken, which decided that she has been pushed around far to often by her husband.

Originally posted by: taniks

Kristin that was amazing , far beyond my expectations . Loved the fiesty females chapter ,that what I dubbed it (lol). From sanju to koki these females showed their strong character. Awww gopi and koki s bond ,you kept intact the emotions so raw of dil missing her mil and mil s pride in her dil . Loved that ahem thinks there's another man , that should get him of his high horse . The part I thank you for was giving our gopi a backbone , loved how she stood up to the arrogant so and so , he needed to be taken down a peg or two. Can't wait for the next update I wonder if it can surpass this one in brillance .

Thank you taniks😃

well I can still change the title of the chpater in fiesty females, if you want. Wasn't that happy with my own one. I am a koki lover and there fore a GoKi lover as well and thought that this relationship has to stay true to itself, or true to the way I always saw it. Many people wanted Ahem to misinterpret Toni as Gopi's new guy and I did them the favour and it gave me a good excuse to make Ahem the big idiot he was in the last scene. I can tell you that the last chapter surely won't be as brilliant as this one 😆😭 I am dreading it already