new ss tum meri ho UPDATED( scene15 PAGE 35) - Page 3

Originally posted by: SNS_fan101

hey great job on this
continue soon.

thanks so so much.

Very nice update Vibha. Now Im curious to know how Ahem gonna react this time. She must be looking pretty seductive in the transparent saree. Pls update soon.

Originally posted by: SNS_fan101

hey great job on this
continue soon.

thank u dear.

Originally posted by: _Precious_

Very nice update Vibha. Now Im curious to know how Ahem gonna react this time. She must be looking pretty seductive in the transparent saree. Pls update soon.

thank u precious.yeah gopi is dressed to kill . Will update soon

I enjoyed the 2nd chapter a lot , pls continue I love the direction in which u taking this story. Can't wait for your next instalment

Originally posted by: taniks

I enjoyed the 2nd chapter a lot , pls continue I love the direction in which u taking this story. Can't wait for your next instalment

thanks so much. U were the first to comment on my ss. Thanx once again

great going ! nice tat Ahem and gopi have started as frnds

I have read both parts Vibha. The story is making progress.

Thank u everyone for appreciating my story so much. Am surprised tat so many people liked it.

Scene 3

ahem waiting for gopi outside the house.he s busy thinking bout all the feelings which he never in his wildest dreams imagined will resurface come back to haunt him n his relation with gopi.relation wat relation ahem mentally kicked himself.it s just a marriage of conveniance.but whom could he fool tat witch gopi has made his empty dark heart beat again.stop thinking bout her he scolded himself.think how ll you face ankur after so long after all tat drama you .he had stopped talking to ankur for almost 3years.the guilt used to eat him alive.he could not decide who was speaking the truth between ankur his best friend forever and ever or anita the love of his life.
Anita the name itself brought back so many memories.the happy times n oh the so bitter ones.he had met her on the first day of collage and was mesmerized by her.her gestures the way she dressed her dimpled smile was designed to drive him crazy.he had decided to spend his entire life with her.the best part was anita n ahem got along so well always pulling each others leg fighting over small things and an amazing relation existed between all 3..collage life could never be better! But time changed.
Three years passed n all three graduated.n decided to celebrate.they went to almost all the discs in town n got drunk.they decided to party the whole night.suddenly anita suggested to go on a long drive.but ahem was hesitant he knew both he n ankur had too much to drink but then anita was persistant.oh god why could no one ever say no to her. And the biggest mistake tat day was sitting on the driver seat.and the oh so terrible accident. which had resulted in anita s death. oh lord why did she ve to die.ankur had a lot of broken bones n internal injuries but suprisingly ahem had hardly suffered any. Oh god he was responsible for anitas death.his best friends gal friend had died coz of him.how could god be so cruel? anita and ankur had planned their whole life together and he ahem had destroyed everything.every moment he wished he could change tat night.he would willingly sacrifice his life in exchange of anitas.ankur had gone into a shell after.his fun loving full of life chuddy buddy hardly spoke to anyone at all.he told ahem tat he was not to blame for the accident but it was destiny.three months later ankur decided to go to australia and never come back.this shook ahem .made him realized tat love is temporary.and love stories could never ve a beautiful ending.


I don know if anyone will like it much but am confused on how to take the story further