new ss tum meri ho UPDATED( scene15 PAGE 35)

This is my first attempt to write something so kindly bear with me .



Ahem is attracted to gopi and feels a strange sort of magnetic pull towards her


gopi vahu gopi vahu koki kept screaming where are u dear?its getting late u need to get ready to go for the party.gopi who busy preparing tea said"maaji i am making tea n snacks kaka ahemji and dewarji ll come back from office soon".koki tells her tat she ll take care of the kitchen as she needs to get ready to go to ahem s best friend ankur s birthday party.she tells gopi tat ahem and ankur were best friends from school but they had a huge fall out in coll for unknown reasons but are back on talking terms now.ankur has come back from australia after 4years n is the most eligible bachelor of rajkot now.the party is going to be the talk of the town n gopi needs to get dressed really well. After listening to this gopi decides to go to her room n dress up for the party.

Index
scene 1 page 1
scene 2 page 2
scene 3 page 5
scene 4 page 6
scene 5 page 8
scene 6 page 11
scene 7 page 14
scene 8 page 15
scene 9 page18
scene 10 page19n20
scene 11page22
scene 12page25
scene13page27
scene 14page31
scene 15page35

Very nice start , pls continue soon.

nice strt hpe u continue very sn...

I liked the start. What is going to happen next? Please update soon 😃

good start when u updating

Very nice start Cant wait to read the next part!

Scene 2
gopi comes back to her room and is looking out of the window lost in her thoughts and rashi enters and hugs her from behind(rashi is a loving sister responsible daughter in law)and teases hmmm jiju ke khayalon mein khoyi hui hai na! Gopi blushes n replyin nahi rashi ben am just feeling bad tat i wont be here to help you cook dinner .u ll have to cook for everyone all by yourself today.(in some ways gopi wont change)rashi replies ha dear kaki told me you r going for a party wit jeejs and u should be honoured i ve been given the responsiblity to help u dress up.ha ha aaj to i ll make you look so different tat poor jiju when he ll look at u wont know wat struck him.he ll be mesmerized by your beauty.gopi hesitates and declines."nahi ben wat s the use he does not notice all these things.he s so engrossed in his own world and seems like a lost scientist.(gopi is educated)"rashi insists n tells its time to change everythin now.you ve to look your best today not oly to knock him senseless but also to stand out in front of his friends and says tat his friends will definately complement him about his wife and tat ll definately affect him and boost his ego.rashi gets a baby pink colour net sari with matchin short sleeves blouse.on seeing the sari gopi goes into flashback mode

on her honeymoon (which was arranged by koki n hetal)5days after the marriage both couples raji and gohem had been sent to goa.she was wearing a similar baby pink colour nightie and was waiting in the room to spend some intimate moments with ahem.but ahem entered the room dint even bother lookin at her n was engrossed in watching nth rerun of friends and was laughin away to glory.she joined him on the sofa.they started talkin and ahem explained tat this marriage was just to satisfy his family and he could never love her or any gal as he dint believe in unconditional love any more.they would just be friends sharing the same room n nothing else.gopi felt really ashamed tat she was wearing a revealin night gown which she n rashi had bought with full enthu for their honey moon. She quickly went inside put on a robe came out agreed to being oly friends with him and they ended up eating chips watchin tv n chatting for a long long time.
Flashback does Rashiben i dont wanna wear this colour pl but then once rashi had decided who could ever change her decision.hey krishna bhagwan wat ll ahem think about me again this same colour ?will he think am about to seduce him again?oh god am stuck now.

thank u tarnik arnisha rsk16 bloem123 starryeye dluna88 precious and rsshree for the encouragememt. Am glad u liked it.am amazed.this is the first attempt.thanks 4positive feed back.pl hit the like button and encourage me with ur sweet comments

Originally posted by: shaina.sharma

good vibha can see that u have kept the same story line with a slight change in characters

really different

thanks shaina ur comments mean a lot