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Posted: 13 years ago
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aww the sad ending .anyways loved your story.great update.ahem in love wid gopi.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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that was very sad ending. So they were not destined for each other. Glad that Ahem had feelings for her, though he tried to frighten her at first. Good update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awww aham fell in love with the a peanut seller❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
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That's a shame that ending, we get used to Aham and Gopi always being together, but in your story you make them miss each other, but his going to get his certificate, when he comes back, make him search for her and not find her but when his settled engagement round the corner, she gets hit by a car outside his office just as his leaving for home and he comes upon her and finds her and helps her. Put them together to make us happy babe.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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oh what a sad ending.
still i think that aham might come back and search for his peanut seller.
aham modi always gets what he wants.
this story was so different and entertaining. liked it a lot.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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so sad ending ,bring story alive agian,with ahems wedding prep on the way and comes across gopi during shopping,they meant 2 be together
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: rsk16

aww the sad ending .anyways loved your story.great update.ahem in love wid gopi.



Thank you..yeah i know its sad, but its movie we must end it in 2 parts..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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This was such a sad ending.
They were not to meet and live a life together. What a wasted life! When something is meant to be, it is meant to be no matter what. Fate has played a terrible trick on them. Is there anyway this can be truned around and he finds her?
However, very well written. Do write more soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: _Precious_

that was very sad ending. So they were not destined for each other. Glad that Ahem had feelings for her, though he tried to frighten her at first. Good update.



Thank you..here aham was studied in outside so meant to be naughty, right?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nafisa_blossoms

That's a shame that ending, we get used to Aham and Gopi always being together, but in your story you make them miss each other, but his going to get his certificate, when he comes back, make him search for her and not find her but when his settled engagement round the corner, she gets hit by a car outside his office just as his leaving for home and he comes upon her and finds her and helps her. Put them together to make us happy babe.


It will take time yaar..and thanks for the reply..You are always encouraging..I also want to add that i liked your ending too but i doubt whether koki will allow a bahu like that for aham..

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