FF:Prem Kahani Part 10 Page 33

-JollyJabeen-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: beautiful1
even though i'm not much of Saathiya fan, but i liked what you wrote, you're a good writer !!
keep it up and finally i know you're name
so yeah keep up the good work kristin and why not write something on arhi eh ? xx

take care hun xx

kiran

Hehe thanks so much, my names Chika well nickname and my real names Jabeen!😆

The brackets was for,well the PMing bit of the message was for Kristin!😆

Thanks so much,i'll be writing an Arhi SS soon,i was actually thinking of it!😛

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_Precious_

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Posted: 13 years ago

#182

Chika, i finally caught up with all the updates and I just loved them all. I really like the loving relationship between Rashi and Gopi. Also, how naughty is Ahem and Gopi also answers back to his wits.

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Fahima

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Posted: 13 years ago

#183

awesome, that was so funny...he drew on her...🤣...really cute scenes between RaJi...lovely...continue soon!!

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varshu27

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Posted: 13 years ago

#184

lovely update chika...just what i needed on a dreary and cold afternoon...👏

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kavya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#185

chika that was a wonderful update dear...loved it
this time u have given us a long update...thank u
raji scenes was cute...
and gohem omg it was amazing...ahem drew on gopi🤣 that was hilarious...so now the war has begun cant wait to see what all they both will do...update soon dear

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-Eris-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#186

It was so so so cute chika love rashi dancing!!she is really cute and i love naughty ahem. Making gopi as a cat next update the wilm cat can scratch him. Add me to the pm list if any

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Hetal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#187

OMG ...Chika what an awesome ending to part 8...didnt ever thought that my Ahemji would be soo naughty,mischievous in ur ff...waiting eagerly for ur next update...i just hope that r Ahemji in onscreen show also become naughty like ur ff ahemji(fingers crossed)

Chika i would love to give u idea for ur further update :

To give a break from work Ahem decides a 1 day staff picnic(idea of staff picnic but want to enjoy with gopi...)even raji is also with them for staff picnic ...on d day of picnic gopi wearing jeans n tshirt...All of them goes on roller-coaster ride n Gohem sitting together...As the ride starts n is in full swing gopi gets frightened n hugs Ahem tightly 🤗

I have given 3 different take for the scene...hope u like it

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ZaaraBB

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Posted: 13 years ago

#188

Aww how can ahem sir be so wicked???!!??,very interestimg part!!can't wait for the next!!upda

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-Nafisa-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#189

Aham drawing on Gopi, this Aham is definitely more playful, also Kokila has allowed Jigar to find someone first before Aham, older brother must marry first I thought she would think, but yours is different, are you more of a RaJi fan?

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