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Posted: 13 years ago
Hello my lovely,fellow Saathians!😃

I've updated the next part,unfortunately SOME Raji in it but lots of Gohem,read on,im sure you'll enjoy it!,fingers crossed!😆

PART 9:

Gopi entered the office and to her surprise,everyone was working,everyone had tense faces and she looked amazed.

"From which direction has the sun come out today?,everyone is working and its only 8:50am,Ahem sir isn't here yet.."

"Gopi,are you mad?" Mallika screeched.

"Mallika,whats wrong?,why is everyone soo..well working before Ahem sir is here?"

"Gopi,your crazy,Ahem sir has been so frustrated today,overloading everyone with work and he said to go up to his office the second you enter,make sure you enter with a cup of coffee though!"

Gopi gulped, 'Ahem sir is mad,oh no,is he going too..hmm?,oh no..'

"Good luck Gopi" Mallika gave a small but tense smile,Gopi gulped again.

Knock Knock

"Come in"

Gopi quickly came in and shut the door,she quickly walked over to Ahems cabin when she suddenly stopped and looked back,her dupatta had caught the door and she started to laugh nervously,Ahem had to bite his lip to avoid laughing at Gopi's clumsy actions,she was just too cute for words.

"Umm Ahem sir,you called me.."

"SIT"

"Ji sir" Gopi immediately sat and quickly put the coffee on Ahem's desk.

"Gopi,today your going to be writing a dictation,get ready"

"Okay sir" Gopi smiled as she took out her note-pad and got a pen out. The lid of the pen was refusing to come off and she had an irritated look on her face,Ahem just stared a her dumbfounded,'is she crazy,what is she doing?'

"Gopijiii,if your in the mood to stop messing about and actually start doing some work,shall I start to read?"

"Ahem sir,look,its this pen,its not me,im sure this pen saw you frustrated and is scared of..coming..off" Gopi slowly brought her note-pad up to cover her face up to her eyes,Ahem sir looked angry as if he was..well going to kill her any moment. Gopi silently got up and whispered in his ear,

"Sir,you might want to have your coffee,you look as if you need a break"

Ahem snapped, "I know what I should and shouldn't so MISS GOP SHAH.Just sit and be quiet alright"

"But Ahem sir I just"

"Shoosh,be quiet"

'Huh,Ahem sir bhi na,he's so arghhh'

Ahem turned around in his chair,closed his eyes and clenched his fists. 'God,why is she so..why does Gopi affect me so much,I just met her than why does she hae such an effect on me,god damn it,what is going on!?'

"Ahem sir.."

Ahem turned around calmly,he stared intently at Gopi.

"Ahem sir",she put her hands up slowly and pinched her ears,"Sorry i..i kind of over-reacted,voh mai.."

Ahem just stared at her,she was so childlike,so sweet and elegant.

"Right,Gopi,get read to write okay..umm Dear mr Patel.Im willing too"

Gopi stared up at Ahem,Ahem stopped talking as he watched her,she was smiling a little and her mouth was slightly open..she was just staring at him.

"Gopi,we'll do this dictation later,right now,go and umm,go and write all these piles of files up,right them all on the computer,go NOW"

"Ji sir" Gopi left quickly,what just happened!?,why was she..well why did she admire Ahem sir like that,why was she..well looking at his beautiful features,ahh he was so cute,what Gopi,pagli,what am i! (Crazy)

SCENE CHANGES:

"Yes mummy thanks so much,really,Pandit ji said the only auspicious date in in 2 weeks,but mummy so much work,how will we do it?,mummy im sooo happy!,mummy come on dance with me,im just so happy!"

Raashi starts dancing cutely to 'Character deela' (Imagine Raashi,how cute! :D) on the sofa!

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H2InFLc2GWc[/YOUTUBE]

"Raashi dikra,what are you doing,calm down" Urmila said smiling,her dikri was so happy,it made her feel so good.

"Raashi dikri,your marriage is fixed now but what about Gopi dikri,what about her,she needs to get married soon aswell"

"Arreh mummy,Gopi's marriage is fixed already"

"KYA!?" Urmila's mouth flew open before it formed a massive smile, "Raashi tell me everything,who?,when?,does Gopi like someone?,tell me na?"

'Damn it,ab mai toh gaye (Damn it,now im done for)'

"Umm mummy,you know Ahem jiju..its him"

"WHAT!?Thats amazing news Raashi dikra,why did you not tell me sooner?"

"Mummy voh,what shall I say,Ahem and Gopi themselves haven't realised their feelings and anyone can see how they like each other much more than..you know what I mean mummy"

"Hmm Raashi,let nature take its own course,let them realise their love for each other by themselves,im so happy,now my two children are happy,what more can I ask for?"

"Mummy,I don't want to leave you though,how can I leave you and go away from you,you'll be all alone!"

"Dikra,this is what happens.." Urmila and Raashi both started to cry lightly and consoled each other.

"Okay enough Raashi dikra,its time to go and make dinner,arreh Raashi,call Gopi dikra,why hasn't he come home yet,is everything fine?"

"Oh mummy,I forgot to tell you,I think Gopi's going to be coming home late today"

"Why dikra,is everything okay?"

"Well she did make Ahem sir slightly angry so he's going to torture Gopi hehe" Raashi smiled.

"Kya,torture!"

"Mummy,don't worry,come let me help you with dinner!"

"Oh Raashi dikra,before you do that,please call Jigar,he's been calling home 100 times,please go and talk to him!"

Raashi blushed and ran towards her room leaving a chuckling Urmila behind.

SCENE CHANGED TO MODI INDUSTRIES:

"Dammit,she takes so long in doing a single work and than on top of it,doesn't even awnser my call,what is wrong with her,crazy girl,she's just,argh god help me,what am I going to do with this crazy girl!" Ahem cursed under his breath as he made his way downstairs to Gopi's cabin,he opened the door and he looked gobsmacked at the sight,there she was,sleeping with her face on top of the piles of files and the fan blowing her hair.'She really does make a beautiful sight doesn't she Ahem,oh god'. He slowly approached her,he stared at her for a shile when she suddenly snored,Ahem had to bite his lip otherwise he would have ended up laughing and waking her up,he stared at her,she wasn't just a beautiful lady,she was a beautiful angel..he held his hand up and was about to wake her up when he suddenly saw a black marker on the piles of fles,he smirked and picked it up.

"Gopi,you called me rakshas (monster),you called me so many names and now its time for me to get my revenge". He chuckled lightly and began ..

SCENCE SHIFT:

"Jigarji,your so bad,you called home and and mummy,what will she think?"

"What will she think?,were both going to get married and well,you know how am,I can't live a day without talking to you"

"Jigarji,your so mischevious!"

"Only because of you Raashi"

"Jigarji" Raashi started to chuckle.

"Jigarji,our engagement is in 2 weeks,2 weeks,that's so quick,two weeks Jigar"

"Arreh,im so excited,2 weeks is so small na Raashi!,we have the sagai (engagement),than theother rituals,so long na Raashi!"

"Jigarji,you,its so quick"

"Yes than we can be one quick,you as my wife.."

"Jigarji" Raashi blushed.

"I need to go,bye Jigarji"

"Arreh but Raashi"

Raashi closed the phone and threw it on the bed,she clutched her pillow tightly and smiled.

SCENE SHIFTS.

"SNAKEEE"

"AAAH" Gopi jumped up in surprise and Ahem started to laugh.

"Humma,your so rude,you scared me and your laughing now,not fair!"

"Gopi,you're the one who was sleeping when your meant to be working!"

"Huh,first of all you're the one who stays in the office till late and your shouting at me,argh,no fair!..arreh I didn't even tell Raashi ben or mami im staying late,Ahem sir,I need to go,please can I go?"

"Umm yes Gopi,lets go,its really late"

"Okay thanks sir,Jai Shri Krishna"

"Umm Gopi,where do you think your going?"

"Home sir"

Ahem slapped his forehead in frustration,this girl was so silly.

"Im taking you home,its late,no complaints!"

Just as Gopi was about to complain,he put his hand up preventing her from talking and Ahem dragged her to the car,the whole ride in the car was weird,Ahem would glance at Gopi and would randomly start laughing,this irked Gopi very much and would reply by giving Ahem a glare. She thought she should remain quiet because well,he was giving her a ride home at this time of the night. She thanked kanhaji as her house was here and left the car.

"Gopi"

"Yes Ahem sir" Gopi said cheekily.

Ahem just smirked and said "Good night,sweet dreams" ever so sweetly.

'Daal mai kuch kala hai,there is def something wrong with Ahem sir!'

"Good night sir" Gopi said furrowing her eyebrows as Ahem laughed and drove off.

She knocked on the door and was approached by Raashi who instantly started to laugh.

"What is wrong with everyone,first Ahem sir was laughing and now you,Raashi ben,why are you laughing!?"

"Gopi'omg your face is so funny!"

"Kya,Raashi ben,what are you saying!"

"Look,the mirror,Gopi,look in the mirror"

Gopi rushed into the bathroom and got the shock of her life,her eyes opened and grew wide,her face was drawn on with a black marker,she had a moustache and whiskers like a cat!

"Omg what,who did this,Raashi ben!"

Gopi immediately started to put water on her face and to her horror.

"Oh SHIT,This is permanate marker!,Ahem sir,im not going to spare him!,its WAR"


So there it is..how is it? 😆


I was laughing towards the end!,oh gosh,please like and leave comments on what you want to happen,than it gives me idea's!😉

I didn't get to read it agai so apologies for any grammer mistakes!😳


P.S Thanks for all the comments,i'll def hopefully reply to them all in the next update!🤗

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Edited by CHIKA784 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wiil be back dear😉


***** Edited *****
awesome, lovely, feelgood and hilarious update... thank u seethaart😉
- do u really have to write Ahemji biting his lip... can u imagine how it will affect Ahemolics here...😉
- haha gopi's face with permanent marker LOL😆 Ahemji is soo cute and naughty ...
- RaJi peppy talk is tooo cute...
Edited by munnihyderabad - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
🤣 Oh that was ACE. So funny that Ahem drew on Gopi. I can't stop giggling either. Way to go, girl! 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: munnihyderabad

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wiil be back dear😉


***** Edited *****
awesome, lovely, feelgood and hilarious update... thank u seethaart😉
- do u really have to write Ahemji biting his lip... can u imagine how it will affect Ahemolics here...😉
- haha gopi's face with permanent marker LOL😆 Ahemji is soo cute and naughty ...
- RaJi peppy talk is tooo cute...


Awww thanks so much Munny,im glad you liked the update! 😃

Hehe Ahemji biting his lip..Munny BEHAVE!,you have a husband! 😆 :P
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Xarina

🤣 Oh that was ACE. So funny that Ahem drew on Gopi. I can't stop giggling either. Way to go, girl! 👍🏼


Glad you enjoyed it Xarina!😃

The masti's just began! :P
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome Chika! Must continue and update fast😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: PriyaxBassi

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Awesome Chika! Must continue and update fast😳


Thanks so much Priya! 😆

Hopefully will update umm,Thursday or Friday..*fingers crossed*
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Posted: 13 years ago
Chika.. It was cute and funny.. Superb Update..
And permanent marker.. Poor Gopi.. Yes it needs to be an all put war now.. 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
so cute so funny awesome great update cont. soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
even though i'm not much of Saathiya fan, but i liked what you wrote, you're a good writer !!
keep it up and finally i know you're name
so yeah keep up the good work kristin and why not write something on arhi eh ? xx

take care hun xx

kiran

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