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Posted: 13 years ago
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Have just read it, great Kinjal is found out now, waiting for the big spectacle, loved that you made Kinjal flare her nostrils like Aham does when angry.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 3

Kinjal was fuming up more. Nostrils moving side by side, all going red. She wondered what to do.


Aham looked at Kinjal in his anger. He had no anger control. He didnt know how to control his anger.


Aham looked at the writing of the letter, and noticed it was her writing. He looked at Rashi. He went up to her slowly.


Heart beats were pounding faster and faster. BY chance he turned to Kinjal and looked at her.


He raised his hand on her and gave her a slap twice which made her fall to the ground. He looked at Rashi. Rashi walked back a few times.


She wasnt ashamed to say she was frightened of him.


Rashi spoke:


" Aham jiju i know i did was wrong, but what could i do, i did what i heard Kinjal saying. She wanted to break your marriage. I alsoread the letter wrong as i hated gopi since the beginning. But why are you attached to her. You once said you hated uneducated people, now what is this? You loved Anita. Anita. I tried to read the letter properly but my mother provoked me. Honest"



Aham:


"Chup, Ek dum chup! i dont wanna hear you voice. How could you play with my life. I am ashamed of both of you. You played with that girls life since childhood. Just the sake that she was poor, with no parents. Khuda jaane kya kya kiya tum dono nai. Acha hai Jitu uncle told me everything that day after the snake incident that i kept my eyes on you especially.



Rashi stunned while Urmila eyes came popping out. Urmila shouted at Aham asking him to stop disgracing them after what hetal and koki did by kicking her daughter out of the modi mansion. Aham could not tolerate this.


He ignored her and walked up to Kinjal and asked her several times if the letter was written by her.



Kinjal spoke:


" Yes the letter was written by me. That gavar! omg i cant stand her. Every trival matter she cries! Anita was even better. But i dont see how u got manipulated by mum. Just for her sake u got married to a lower class. Shame on you.! Remember when that day u slapped Gopi. Mum knows about it, also the necklace was ordered by me, so all this tangle relationship happens between you two, and it has. Since the time i came here as a guest, i have seen you two much close. I cannot believe it.



Nani gets worried. She shook her head.


Aham tells her to get out of the house. Kinjal ran outside and dhawal followed her, after all the truth being exposed one by one. Aham walks up to Rashi and gave her a tight slap and told her to get out. Urshi went home.



Everyone ran upstairs trying to tell Gopi to open the rooms door.



What has happened to Gopi?
Has she commit suicided?
What could have happened?
WHat will aham do?


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Sorry guys i made this chapter short ~ plus i shall be back soon with the next chapter making it longer. Do comment and lemme know how u all found it!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
Brilliant update Ayesha!!
Am loving all the slaps!!
I really want to know what's happening to Gopi and how will Ahem handle it!!
And thanks for the PM!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: NazmaJ

Brilliant update Ayesha!!

Am loving all the slaps!!
I really want to know what's happening to Gopi and how will Ahem handle it!!
And thanks for the PM!!




i couldnt stop laughing writing this up.
another 3 chapters to go before i end this.
i cant write further now.. 🥱

thanks for liking it

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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
great update.loved the way Ahem blasted kinjal n rashi.looking forward to the next part.loved it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
gr8 update ayesha... love this ahem... blasting all of them specially urshi and kinjal...

-munni

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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
good update Ayesha. Rashi and Kinjal deserved that slap very early. Curious to know what Gopi is doing inside the room.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
wonderful update ayesha...loved how ahem blasted kinjal and rashi...
waiting for the next one
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
Great update Ayesha, Am pleased both Kinjal and Rashi got what they deserve. Eagerly waiting for next chaper!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
Loved the chapter especially enjoyed the slapping but the thing that I just adored was the 'chup ekdom chup' that was music to my ears imagining an angry say it (lol)

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