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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 2


Kinjal had her ways. After she found out about Dhawal has still not found a house, she flared her nostrils in a manner that was unexpected.


Kinjal asked Gopi to clean her shoes and make it shine. It was quite obvious she still considered her as a dirt. Koki saw all this and followed her after picking up her shoes. She threw them in her room in front of her eyes and told her to stay in her limits.


Koki told her that as long as she is in the house no one will do the work for her.


This made Kinjal more angry. It was clear that she had no respect for lower class or middle class people and indicated that she had to be broght down from her high thinking.


Kinjal started to walk around in the shopping mall and saw someone. She stood there and became happy. She saw Umang and Anita. There was another girl too.


Umang saw Kinjal and smirked at her. He held the girl from her waist and started to laugh with Anita. Kinjal felt terrible. She felt she was being threatened once again. She did not believe anyone the last time and today she could not believe what she saw.


She walked upto him and asked him whats this all about. Anita told her to stay away from them as they dont need the Modis no more as they have got fame. Umang revealled he had got married and he was becoming a father in 4 months.


This shocked kinjal and went away. Kinjal was broken down. She felt that she did was wrong. She loved the wrong guy. That guy who ruined her life and made her live with a lower class. She realized her fault in what she did with Dhawal. She didnt know what to do.


She came home. Everyone saw her broken down. She had her head down in shame. She realized her brother was there.


Kinjal started to speak. She told them about what she saw, what she did with umang, how anita relates to her, how she tried to make anita ahams wife but had failed that day which made her marriage with Elesh a fail. She felt she could start a fresh again. ( Why kinjal why? why not speak about the necklace, the letter 😡)


She ran upstairs after apolgizing. Koki was pleased. She knew her upbringing didnt fail her. Dhawal did not understand anything.


Aham knew about the letter and ran upstairs and flunged everything down from the wardrobe and took that cloth which had gopi stuff in it and opened it. He saw a letter with his pic and about what he read beside it was how he rose to big height by bringing the Modi business further.


He also saw Gopis parents picture, and told Koki to put it in a frame. He saw some other stuff and then comes the letter. He opens the letter and reads it.


He ran downstairs and told Gopi to see this. Gopi saw this and tried to read it and read it successfully. She was confused. She had flashbacks. Rashi and Urmi read the letter wrong and told her to get married. Tears dropped from her eyes. She recollected the breaking vows. They did not notice Urshi and Nani was standing there.


Aham: Who gave u this letter?


Gopi: Ji voh...


Aham who was total in anger: WHO gave u the letter?


Gopi: Rashi read this letter before we got married, and she read it wrong telling me that u want to get married, but this letter says something else.


Aham: Rashi gave u this letter.


He looks up and sees her.


Kinjal standing there all frightened and scared.


Rashi comes in and sees all the argument going on.


Aham asks herabout who gave her the letter?


He gave her a stern look.


He shouted 3 times and still she didnt speak.


Nani comes in and asks Koki about why chucking Rashi out of the house.

This time Hetal comes to her and tells her the entire truth and also says that she chucked her out. Nani refues to help them and is disgusted about their tactics. Nani was absolute shocked.

Gopi spoke: Kinjal gave her the letter. Kinjal had gave rashi the letter and she read it out to me wrong. I cant believe rashi did this to me. She ruined my life, to a man who loved another girl and who cannot love me.

Gopi ran upstaires and locked herself in the washroom.




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What will happen now?
Will Rashi say kinjal name?
Will kinjal be exposed?

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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
great chapter.very nice.great 2 see kinjal repenting
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
Awww loved it!,pooor Gopi,awww she's probably broken down!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
Great second chapter Ayesha!!
I love how you brough Anita and Umang in and made Kinjal start to feel bad - still didn't admit about the necklace and letter though!!
Poor Gopi has just had the blinkers lifted - I wonder what she and Ahem are going to do next!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
Wow outstanding cant wait for the next part.⭐️
Edited by faayey - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
Cant wait til the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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that was very good ayesha...
finally kinjal changing but she should have told abt the necklace
update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28

Ayesha...i really want it to happen...Thanks for this great FF
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
Poor gopi. Thank You for the update loved it. can u pm me when u update. i donot want to miss anything😊please

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Posted: 13 years ago
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U have all tracks culminating into one !!!!! So will the new love sustain the pressures of the outside world?

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