FF:- Saathi Re(updated) part-15- page 79 9th feb

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Usma55

@Usma55

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#601

Love it

I think Koki should ask rashi what happened between ahem and gopi and Koki should feel said and shocked about it and question ahem

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shaina

@shaina.sharma

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#602

Originally posted by: Usma55
Love it
I think Koki should ask rashi what happened between ahem and gopi and Koki should feel said and shocked about it and question ahem

good idea i wil include it thank u...

but this scene wil take a lot of time to come...so just be patient.

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Xarina

@Xarina

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#603

That was so good. Felt so sorry for Ahem, getting the blame for the whole debacle. That is so not fair. Well done Shaina. A nice surprise for when I got home from work. Thank you.

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shaina

@shaina.sharma

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#604

Originally posted by: Xarina
That was so good. Felt so sorry for Ahem, getting the blame for the whole debacle. That is so not fair. Well done Shaina. A nice surprise for when I got home from work. Thank you.

thanks xarina...ha ha...well sometimes soneone have to taste their own medicine ...i think u got this
as gopi too got blamed for what she have not done...

she too got sided out in society...without her mistake..so i think u got it...whats going to happen next..

this time ahem wil live gopis life ..so lets see what changes cna we expect...

ha ha i see a lot of disapointment running on forum and also i am so angry on gopi and ahem for keeping so silent..

so taking my anger out here...today ahems turn over...next time gopi wil come..

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varshu27

@varshu27

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#605

wow...what an update shaina...fantastic...hats of to u...that was incredibly emotional scene between ahem and his family...so who are u going to pair gopi with...ahem or jigar...cant wait for the next update...

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swasthi

@swasthi

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#606

Well, well, well ... the story has moved forward so much in one update - well done Shaina.

You have cleared all the peripheral characters in one go. But Kinjal is due to marry, who will it be?

Ahem has been banished from his family but is still living in MM. Only Gopi will come around and help him for sure. He knows that she still loves him.

Looking forward to the next update.

Edited by swasthi - 13 years ago

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hana_y

@hana_y

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#607

shaina like always wow superb love it thx for update i was waiting your ff come soon pm me

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Nihira-fan

@Nihira-fan

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#608

wonderful update!!poor ahem...felt so sorry for him.i wish gopi had supported him not rashi...to be honest,i don't understand rahem's friendship...didn't mean to be rude...please forgive me if i offended you.overall great update..looking forward to see the next twist.

Edited by Nihira-fan - 13 years ago

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luckylucky1

@luckylucky1

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#609

oh my god sinha... very nice update...

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Jammona

@Jammona

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#610

👏 Shaina this is outstanding, mavellous and excellent to the greatest level. I love the emotions you have touched in each character.

Genious that what you are

I was crying for Ahem's pain, being the eldest and yet having to prove himself at every point since childhood was very painful and especially to be compared to your cousin brother.

At the same time he needed to learn not to blame all his faults on other, his parents yes but Gopi and so far as you have revealed Jigar.

Jigar too seems to be too proud and that's highly due to Ahem's parents

What you have in store would be greater and am eagerly waiting like a huge fan and please pm me.