FF:Kalakari ka pardavash Last part page 10

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Fahima

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

very nice updates...lovely...can u PM when you update next... when you updating??

x.x.FAHIMA.x.x

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-JollyJabeen-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: famzii05
very nice updates...lovely...can u PM when you update next... when you updating??

x.x.FAHIMA.x.x

Well to be honest, i don't know if im going to update this FF,not sure it has the same sort of..masala😆,if i do than i'll pm u but i only pm my buddy's so add me as a buddy😆

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Fahima

@famzii05

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: CHIKA784

Well to be honest, i don't know if im going to update this FF,not sure it has the same sort of..masala😆,if i do than i'll pm u but i only pm my buddy's so add me as a buddy😆

please finish it...otherwise you can always end it with one more part...there always has to be an end!!
ive got you as a buddy...hopefully ur gunna finish it...😃

pretty please 😳

x.x.FAHIMA.x.x

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-JollyJabeen-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: famzii05

please finish it...otherwise you can always end it with one more part...there always has to be an end!!
ive got you as a buddy...hopefully ur gunna finish it...😃

pretty please 😳

x.x.FAHIMA.x.x

Now that you've so kindly requested,i'll have to finish it,i'll update tomarrow😊

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Fahima

@famzii05

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Posted: 13 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: CHIKA784

Now that you've so kindly requested,i'll have to finish it,i'll update tomarrow😊

sorry to trouble you,, but thankyou!!! will wait for your update :)

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-JollyJabeen-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: famzii05

sorry to trouble you,, but thankyou!!! will wait for your update :)

No trouble sweeety,pleasure is mine😉

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-JollyJabeen-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#67

Last part:

Sorry its short saathians but i lost inspration,i hope you guys still like it😊

Ahem was awake,he wanted his beautiful ife within his reach before he surprised her with a intimate good morning. Gopi was walking with a shy smile,she was taking the jug to put some more water inside when suddenly Ahem yanked her hand and Gopi came tumbling on top of Gopi.

"Ahemji,what are you?" Gopi's face turned crimson and she blushed like a beetroot.

"Sssh" said Ahem making his way to Gopi's ear and whispering "Good morning my beautiful and lovely wife"

"Ahemji,I need to go,maaji will be calling me soon"

"Arreh Gopi,you can't go until you give me a kiss on the cheek"

"Ahemji!"

"Gopi vahu,Gopi vahu!" came Kokila's voice,she was heading towards Gohem's room. Kokila knocked twice and Gopi approached her.

"Sorry maaji, I took long,voh,I was getting ready so.."

"Don't worry Gopi vahu,wake up Ahem,he needs to get to the office"..

5 years later,we see Gohem with 2 kids,Raju and Khushi,Khushi is completely like Gopi but she's mischevious and loves to dance, Raju is completely like Ahem but has his temper controlled by Gopi,they are a happy and loving family.

Thanks so much for all the support i've had for this FF,thank you all,you've been great😳