OS - Ahem's Declaration - Page 4

Originally posted by: kaka.lg

great OS Nazma...😳 love it

Originally posted by: smithasrk

👏I liked what you have written but i donot think their union is going to be as simple as this. A Lot have happened between them Ahem should truly understand gopi , her past, her life with urmi and rashi, wht she have suffered , wht kinjal had done etc etc.

Aham have a long way to go

Originally posted by: shaina.sharma

first i say thanks to ayesha to make u write

then thanks to u for a beatiful os. u really brought down the feelings exactly.

i love the confession scence

Originally posted by: sbp1971

Nazma, did you say you are not creative?

You are so wrong, this was a perfect OS, I loved it. And now you have to give us more in the future. This was a wonderful treat. Thank you.

Originally posted by: write2meoops

that was a wonderful OS Nazma and congratualtions on your first OS. I would love to have their confession as simple and easy as your story. But I don't think it will be such straightforward, afterall everything related to Gopi gotta be lil bit complicated right?

The story flowed very well, lucid too which is an acheivement, thank U:-))!!!!!

Originally posted by: angelirebelli

Bravo Nazma... Very well done..👏👏👏

Loved it.. it was beautiful.. Ahem finally taking the time to explain things to Gopi.. how we all long for it!!

Look forward to more from you..Please keep 'em coming !! 😊

Originally posted by: gopijimodi

Loved the way you narrated. I could really picture Ahem and Gopi on the beach. Gopi looking all worried and confused.

I also like that Ahem told everyone that he wants to take Gopi on a honeymoon and glad that the family accepted. Good that he did not tell them that he is going on business trip and everyone is supposed to come with their families.

Please continue the story. what happens after their beach conversation. Gopi's reactions. where will their conversation go. How their love stoy will be talked about in modi mansion.