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shaina

@shaina.sharma

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

first i say thanks to ayesha to make u write

then thanks to u for a beatiful os. u really brought down the feelings exactly.

i love the confession scence

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Nazma, did you say you are not creative?

You are so wrong, this was a perfect OS, I loved it. And now you have to give us more in the future. This was a wonderful treat. Thank you.

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_Precious_

@_Precious_

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

that was a wonderful OS Nazma and congratualtions on your first OS. I would love to have their confession as simple and easy as your story. But I don't think it will be such straightforward, afterall everything related to Gopi gotta be lil bit complicated right?

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angelirebelli

@angelirebelli

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Bravo Nazma... Very well done..👏👏👏

Loved it.. it was beautiful.. Ahem finally taking the time to explain things to Gopi.. how we all long for it!!

Look forward to more from you..Please keep 'em coming !! 😊

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gopijimodi

@gopijimodi

Explorer

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Loved the way you narrated. I could really picture Ahem and Gopi on the beach. Gopi looking all worried and confused.

I also like that Ahem told everyone that he wants to take Gopi on a honeymoon and glad that the family accepted. Good that he did not tell them that he is going on business trip and everyone is supposed to come with their families.

Please continue the story. what happens after their beach conversation. Gopi's reactions. where will their conversation go. How their love stoy will be talked about in modi mansion.